Fiction: ★ Charlotte's School Trip

BettyBoop · 03-13-2009, 04:12 PM

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Chapter One

Well, hi. My names Charlotte, I’m 15 and my life is pretty quiet and, boring as much as I’d like it not to be. Well at least it was, until quite recently. We had a school trip, to an adventure centre in Paris. I wasn’t exactly ecstatic about this, let’s just say that sports aren’t my forte, I suck at everything, I can’t make my way anywhere without tripping over my own feet. I didn’t want to admit it but I was only going because of, him. The most gorgeous boy I’d ever seen, Lucas, he was taller than me but not lanky, muscular and always smiling.
So anyway, we all scurried onto the surprisingly clean coach; I rushed to the back and slipped into a window seat at the very back. The coach was obviously too big for our small class and nobody wanted to go to the back because the windows were blacked out making it dark and slightly eerie. I didn’t mind, I hoped I’d be invisible here. I looked down at my hands, twiddling my thumbs, awaiting the movement of the coach and the quiet rumble of the engine, and then suddenly I saw someone’s feet appear next to my black pumps. I looked up and saw him, Lucas. He grinned and said,
‘Can I sit here?’
It took me a few seconds to get my thoughts together and stutter out a reply,
‘Sure’.
‘I’m Lucas, you don’t talk much do you Charlotte’ He said looking right into my eyes.
‘You know my name’ I muttered, more of a statement then a question.
‘Sure, I know a lot about you’ He winked at me then leaned back.
I stared at him puzzled and he whispered
‘Getdare’
I froze gripping my seat, my nails almost tearing the fabric as he leant back again closing his eyes.
I looked around, the majority of the class had grouped at the front and the closest to us were still pretty far away or engulfed in a book or loud music.
‘Don’t worry, I’m on there too, it took me a while to figure out it was you, but I’m glad it was. I’ve always thought you seemed nice, but you’ve never spoke to me so I figured you didn’t like me’ He stated.
‘You got that bit wrong’ I giggled.
‘Well, we’ve got hours on this coach, want to play? Some truth or dare?’
‘Like you wouldn’t believe’ I sounded almost inhuman with my grin stretching out my face.

BettyBoop · 03-13-2009, 04:15 PM

It's a short first chapter but it's my first story so consructive criticism, nothing much is happening yet, but I have aksed for ideas in the Authors Cafe.

batman · 03-13-2009, 04:57 PM

this is a really good idea keep going!

Officelover · 03-13-2009, 05:15 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by BettyBoop

I suck...everything,

That's what she said!

Just kidding, lol.

That was really hard!

(waits and twiddles thumb for next poster)

BettyBoop · 03-13-2009, 05:25 PM

Chapter 2

It had been silent for a while when Lucas turned to me and whispered,
‘Truth or Dare?’
I chose ‘Truth’
‘Hm, what type of dares do you like, what turns you on?’
I’m pretty sure my entire head burned scarlet
‘Public risk, you know? Nudity.’ I said in almost a whisper ‘Truth or Dare’
‘Dare’ He exclaimed confidently.
His answer gave me confidence ‘Pull down your trousers, to your knees?’
I felt awkward, but I wanted him to accept.
He undid his zipper and pulled his trousers down exposing his grey boxer shorts. I could clearly see his boner making a significant tent shape.
I chose dare next and ended up having to remove my panties from under my skirt and roll it up, I then had to venture to the front of the bus and ask Mr Gretchen for some water. For any normal person this could go unnoticed but my skirt was already dangerously short and not to mention the fact I could hardly get anywhere without falling flat on my face.
I pulled myself up, wary of the air I could feel tickling in between my legs. I could see Lucas trying to peek; my skirt was just below my ass from the back and the same at the front. I hoped my usual invisibility would help me now. I moved and fell over Lucas’ lap, aware my ass was now on show to only him. I blushed but was in no rush to get up. He gently tapped my ass, and grinned at me, I got up again fixing my skirt and stumbling down the aisle. I reached Mr Gretchen without issue, but I was nervous, which caused my walking upright to be more laboured than usual. Mr Gretchen was in the teacher’s seat at the front, lower down than the rest of the coach. He heard me approach and looked up, obviously noticing, my shorter than average mini skirt. I asked for water, becoming more confident by the second and he scrambled for a water bottle which he passed my way with a curious look. I hurried back, smiling at Lucas when I made it back. I had to scoot over his lap to get to my seat; my naked lower half rubbing over his tented grey boxer shorts. A shiver ran through him transferring to me as it went.
I was wearing my skirt, my t-shirt and a red hooded sweatshirt. Lucas sat with his half-down trousers, stretching boxer shorts and a shirt with a long sleeved one beneath.
It has begun to get dark and I know we’d be on the coach for a long while now; I took a gulp of my water wondering what was to come.

10TimeZ · 03-13-2009, 05:31 PM

Pretty good story so far. Love the part where she falls on his lap, and the gentle tap.
Kind of short a bit, that's the only negative side of the story. But it could build up the tension =P

Good job! Keep it up. Can't wait for the next part.

Nick · 03-13-2009, 06:03 PM

I agree, this is really good so far!
Please keep up the good work!

BettyBoop · 03-13-2009, 06:13 PM

Why thank you for the feedback.

Stormwalker22 · 11-21-2010, 12:33 AM

Please continue its a great story I just read the whole thing I love it

Rachie · 11-21-2010, 01:27 AM

Also love the story, as stated previously. and

C O N G R A T U L A T I O N S

on reaching 100,000 viewers

03-13-2009, 04:12 PM	#1
BettyBoop Angel of Dare Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: England. Posts: 8,249 Blog Entries: 105	★ Charlotte's School Trip Click here to read the full completed story without any comments. Chapter One Well, hi. My names Charlotte, I’m 15 and my life is pretty quiet and, boring as much as I’d like it not to be. Well at least it was, until quite recently. We had a school trip, to an adventure centre in Paris. I wasn’t exactly ecstatic about this, let’s just say that sports aren’t my forte, I suck at everything, I can’t make my way anywhere without tripping over my own feet. I didn’t want to admit it but I was only going because of, him. The most gorgeous boy I’d ever seen, Lucas, he was taller than me but not lanky, muscular and always smiling. So anyway, we all scurried onto the surprisingly clean coach; I rushed to the back and slipped into a window seat at the very back. The coach was obviously too big for our small class and nobody wanted to go to the back because the windows were blacked out making it dark and slightly eerie. I didn’t mind, I hoped I’d be invisible here. I looked down at my hands, twiddling my thumbs, awaiting the movement of the coach and the quiet rumble of the engine, and then suddenly I saw someone’s feet appear next to my black pumps. I looked up and saw him, Lucas. He grinned and said, ‘Can I sit here?’ It took me a few seconds to get my thoughts together and stutter out a reply, ‘Sure’. ‘I’m Lucas, you don’t talk much do you Charlotte’ He said looking right into my eyes. ‘You know my name’ I muttered, more of a statement then a question. ‘Sure, I know a lot about you’ He winked at me then leaned back. I stared at him puzzled and he whispered ‘Getdare’ I froze gripping my seat, my nails almost tearing the fabric as he leant back again closing his eyes. I looked around, the majority of the class had grouped at the front and the closest to us were still pretty far away or engulfed in a book or loud music. ‘Don’t worry, I’m on there too, it took me a while to figure out it was you, but I’m glad it was. I’ve always thought you seemed nice, but you’ve never spoke to me so I figured you didn’t like me’ He stated. ‘You got that bit wrong’ I giggled. ‘Well, we’ve got hours on this coach, want to play? Some truth or dare?’ ‘Like you wouldn’t believe’ I sounded almost inhuman with my grin stretching out my face. __________________ ★Boop Boop de Boop.★ female, engurrland. Ask me anything, click. My tumblr. 18+ ▼ Last edited by BettyBoop; 03-22-2011 at 09:53 AM.

03-13-2009, 04:57 PM	#3
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03-13-2009, 05:25 PM	#5
BettyBoop Angel of Dare Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: England. Posts: 8,249 Blog Entries: 105	Chapter 2 It had been silent for a while when Lucas turned to me and whispered, ‘Truth or Dare?’ I chose ‘Truth’ ‘Hm, what type of dares do you like, what turns you on?’ I’m pretty sure my entire head burned scarlet ‘Public risk, you know? Nudity.’ I said in almost a whisper ‘Truth or Dare’ ‘Dare’ He exclaimed confidently. His answer gave me confidence ‘Pull down your trousers, to your knees?’ I felt awkward, but I wanted him to accept. He undid his zipper and pulled his trousers down exposing his grey boxer shorts. I could clearly see his boner making a significant tent shape. I chose dare next and ended up having to remove my panties from under my skirt and roll it up, I then had to venture to the front of the bus and ask Mr Gretchen for some water. For any normal person this could go unnoticed but my skirt was already dangerously short and not to mention the fact I could hardly get anywhere without falling flat on my face. I pulled myself up, wary of the air I could feel tickling in between my legs. I could see Lucas trying to peek; my skirt was just below my ass from the back and the same at the front. I hoped my usual invisibility would help me now. I moved and fell over Lucas’ lap, aware my ass was now on show to only him. I blushed but was in no rush to get up. He gently tapped my ass, and grinned at me, I got up again fixing my skirt and stumbling down the aisle. I reached Mr Gretchen without issue, but I was nervous, which caused my walking upright to be more laboured than usual. Mr Gretchen was in the teacher’s seat at the front, lower down than the rest of the coach. He heard me approach and looked up, obviously noticing, my shorter than average mini skirt. I asked for water, becoming more confident by the second and he scrambled for a water bottle which he passed my way with a curious look. I hurried back, smiling at Lucas when I made it back. I had to scoot over his lap to get to my seat; my naked lower half rubbing over his tented grey boxer shorts. A shiver ran through him transferring to me as it went. I was wearing my skirt, my t-shirt and a red hooded sweatshirt. Lucas sat with his half-down trousers, stretching boxer shorts and a shirt with a long sleeved one beneath. It has begun to get dark and I know we’d be on the coach for a long while now; I took a gulp of my water wondering what was to come. __________________ ★Boop Boop de Boop.★ female, engurrland. Ask me anything, click. My tumblr. 18+ ▼

03-13-2009, 06:03 PM	#7
Nick Distinguished Member Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Ohio Posts: 834	I agree, this is really good so far! Please keep up the good work! __________________ 27/ Male/ US/ Switch Likes: Underwear, Jockstrap, Embarrassing, Webcam or Pics, Naked, Semi-public, slight risk, strip games, dice dares, wedgies, clothing/cum control, anal, light humiliation Dislikes: Piss, Body Writing, messy Limits:Really public, family, friends, scat, gross, pain. *Impossible:* Crossdressing. I own NO girls clothes. kik: nick.undies Skype: nick.undies SnapChat: SnapNickR

03-13-2009, 06:13 PM	#8
BettyBoop Angel of Dare Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: England. Posts: 8,249 Blog Entries: 105	Why thank you for the feedback. __________________ ★Boop Boop de Boop.★ female, engurrland. Ask me anything, click. My tumblr. 18+ ▼

03-13-2009, 04:15 PM	#2
BettyBoop Angel of Dare Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: England. Posts: 8,249 Blog Entries: 105	It's a short first chapter but it's my first story so consructive criticism, nothing much is happening yet, but I have aksed for ideas in the Authors Cafe.

03-13-2009, 05:31 PM	#6
10TimeZ Junior Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 21	Pretty good story so far. Love the part where she falls on his lap, and the gentle tap. Kind of short a bit, that's the only negative side of the story. But it could build up the tension =P Good job! Keep it up. Can't wait for the next part.

11-21-2010, 12:33 AM	#9
Stormwalker22 Distinguished Member Join Date: May 2010 Location: CA Posts: 503	Please continue its a great story I just read the whole thing I love it

11-21-2010, 01:27 AM	#10
Rachie I am the cutest butterfly ever Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: In my Bed, Posts: 6,606 Blog Entries: 2	Also love the story, as stated previously. and C O N G R A T U L A T I O N S on reaching 100,000 viewers __________________ RACHIE'S GETDARE USER GUIDE / MANUAL STRIP POKER WITH A TWIST (Story) BED HABITS LOLA.FOX WISHES SHE WAS MY FAVORITE USER <3