Jason's Torture [FICTION] - Page 2

Officelover · 05-30-2008, 01:17 PM

Jason woke up in his cage, his hands tied behind his back, and his cock cage was on.

He was very hungry and very happy to see a note that said, "Inside bown is oatmeal. You may eat if you wish. Love, Cady."

He did, but he had to eat it face first. It was disgusting.

He sat there in thought until 2:00 when they came back. They came up to him, and said, you are free. You can go, but, in the outside world you must complete one task."

He was excited, and anxiously asked, "What is it?" They said, "We've found the girl you were supposed to pee in front of. We want you to go on a blind date with her. You are still engaged to Cady, and that is still on, but in the middle of the date, pee on her, and run away."

He did so. It was humiliating, but he was happy to be free.

However, one day he got a call...

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Horrible ending I must add, but I will write other stories with this. Comments please, but say constructive things. Please give me feedback, and suggestions for the new stories in the "Adventures of Jason".

~Officelover.

Officelover · 05-30-2008, 07:02 PM

I must say this was the worst ending I've ever written to any of my stories.

tilly07 · 05-31-2008, 02:23 AM

... Bursts out in laughter that was a good joke!

Officelover · 05-31-2008, 05:38 AM

Thank you. I try to make people laugh. It's one of my callings.

glue · 06-01-2008, 01:58 AM

what an ending

burt leaves room for continuation much like

05-30-2008, 01:17 PM	#16
Officelover Truth or Dare Enthusiast Join Date: May 2008 Location: New England Posts: 2,602 Blog Entries: 107	Jason's Torture Part 5 Jason woke up in his cage, his hands tied behind his back, and his cock cage was on. He was very hungry and very happy to see a note that said, "Inside bown is oatmeal. You may eat if you wish. Love, Cady." He did, but he had to eat it face first. It was disgusting. He sat there in thought until 2:00 when they came back. They came up to him, and said, you are free. You can go, but, in the outside world you must complete one task." He was excited, and anxiously asked, "What is it?" They said, "We've found the girl you were supposed to pee in front of. We want you to go on a blind date with her. You are still engaged to Cady, and that is still on, but in the middle of the date, pee on her, and run away." He did so. It was humiliating, but he was happy to be free. However, one day he got a call... __________________________________________________ _______ Horrible ending I must add, but I will write other stories with this. Comments please, but say constructive things. Please give me feedback, and suggestions for the new stories in the "Adventures of Jason". ~Officelover. __________________ 20 Trans Femme Nonbinary Ass Collector Writes Poetry On Aluminum Foil with Gold Gel Pens Fills Mason Jar with Vodka I'm Doing A Cleanse White Kid with Black Nails

05-30-2008, 07:02 PM	#17
Officelover Truth or Dare Enthusiast Join Date: May 2008 Location: New England Posts: 2,602 Blog Entries: 107	Really horrible I must say this was the worst ending I've ever written to any of my stories. __________________ 20 Trans Femme Nonbinary Ass Collector Writes Poetry On Aluminum Foil with Gold Gel Pens Fills Mason Jar with Vodka I'm Doing A Cleanse White Kid with Black Nails

05-31-2008, 02:23 AM	#18
tilly07 Account Banned Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Currently lost.. Posts: 204 Blog Entries: 1	... Bursts out in laughter that was a good joke! __________________ “I know it seems hard sometimes but remember one thing. Through every dark night, theres a bright day after that. So no matter how hard it get, stick your chest out, keep ya head up.... and handle it.”-Tupac Shakur

05-31-2008, 05:38 AM	#19
Officelover Truth or Dare Enthusiast Join Date: May 2008 Location: New England Posts: 2,602 Blog Entries: 107	Thanks Thank you. I try to make people laugh. It's one of my callings. __________________ 20 Trans Femme Nonbinary Ass Collector Writes Poetry On Aluminum Foil with Gold Gel Pens Fills Mason Jar with Vodka I'm Doing A Cleanse White Kid with Black Nails

06-01-2008, 01:58 AM	#20
glue Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Oxford, UK Posts: 735 Blog Entries: 6	what an ending burt leaves room for continuation much like __________________ WATCH OUT FOR A GLUE RATING OUT OF TEN glue would like to tell everyone reading this to stay sticky as life is to short to become unstuck I'm the Simon Cowell of GetDare Please add me at: Skype: Glue101 8 Years On Getdare!!!!!!