Across the street - Page 3

molten man · 04-22-2008, 09:55 PM

one and a half years. Isnt that too much??

tilly07 · 04-22-2008, 10:14 PM

Umm I have a reason for the 1 and 1/2 years... you can take guesses why, and it has to do with what (SOME) people do 5 days of the week... hint hint!

tilly07 · 04-23-2008, 04:10 PM

Wow thanks

, Why won't anyone ever read the story? I bet one of you rated it bad for no reason. I decided to put the story on hold until I see people actually like it.

aaron_rain · 04-23-2008, 04:13 PM

no no dont put it on hold! i want to read it man!

Wcbrown514 · 04-23-2008, 04:43 PM

Technically you should have said "A year and a half." not "One and a half years." because using the words "years" is only correct when 2 or more years have pasted.

tilly07 · 04-23-2008, 05:58 PM

Lol My bad I'll fix that also, and fine I'll think about continuing it. I am mad because I expect people to post comments, suggestions, and errors.

ni.lad · 04-24-2008, 12:39 PM

Awww mate you got to finish it, Great so far!

Wcbrown514 · 04-24-2008, 02:45 PM

Don't worry about the comments just keep writing and watch your thread views soar.

tilly07 · 04-24-2008, 04:36 PM

Umm some stars would be a good motivation, you think?

Ghost · 04-24-2008, 07:42 PM

Keep it up... your doing fine...
A bit over doing it with the time but that doesn't really matter
depending on how long are you planing to keep the story going

Dollface · 05-22-2008, 03:57 AM

Fantastic! Keep up the good work. Please please please add the next part!

tilly07 · 05-22-2008, 08:09 PM

Lmao. Thank you. I thought the story was dead by now but ehh I'll try to get back to it when I can. School comes first and I have finals starting tommarow =d.

tilly07 · 05-30-2008, 02:42 PM

Part 9

Taylor instantly froze… How could my parents be so cruel she thought? Emily smiled and oh well guess you might have to become a girl wink wink. Taylor finally got up and stared Emily in the eyes with a dreadful look. “You bitch Taylor yelled”. Taylor grabbed Emily and started to wrestle her to the ground and proceeded to slap her with her sissyness. Emily quickly overcame Taylor and grabbed a shot from the table and stuck it in Taylor’s neck. All went black. “What’s going on Taylor yelled” She was in a dimly light room tied to a table. Moments later a figure stepped out of the darkness and said you dare hit your master! Taylor went silent almost immediately. “Very well Emily said with a smirk”. “I have decided on what to do with you and the first thing on the list is to turn you into a boy again, but! You will remain looking like a girl”!
“Understood Emily said”?
“Yes Mistress Taylor whimpered”.
“Good Emily said”
Emily then proceeded to place a mask on Taylors face and again she blacked out. Yawn….., Taylor arose looking around, she was in her room but all was quiet. She then quickly looked down and saw that her breasts were gone and that she had a dick… “YES! I’m free from being a girl again Nick quietly shouted”. He then walked down stairs and saw no one home, and walked into the kitchen to see a note on the refrigerator as well as a meal on the table. Nick ate like a vicious beast and went to read what the note said.
Dear Nick,
Today I will be going out until 4 o’clock so I would like it if you could clean up the house and put on the outfit I left you in the bathroom. After you have finished cleaning up the house you may do as you wish until I come back home.
P.S I left you a meal on the table. =)
Sincerely,
Emily

“Sigh nick said with a grin, this is going to be a long day =/”. Nick proceeded to walkup stairs and when he got into the bathroom he saw a blue thong, black stocks, a short maid outfit, a wig, makeup, and 3” heels. Nick then put on the outfit which was way too small for him and looked at himself in the mirror. “Nick sighed and thought at least I’m not a girl”.
Nick proceeded to clean the house starting from the bottom floor and working his way up…. Ding dong ding dong…. “Crap nick whispered worried at who might be at the door”. Nick peered around the corner and saw a man with a badge on saying LE. “Crap why did Emily have to bring a maintenance guy at this time Nick thought”. He slowly walked around the corner and said coming while his heels clicked and clacked. He finally got to the door and slowly opened the door and said hello and a nervous way. The man he saw was tall and built. “Is the wife or husband home at this time the guy said”? “No one’s home besides me right now Nick said nervously.” “Ok well I need to perform some maintenance on a few things alright? “Ok Nick said wondering what to do since his maid outfit was so short and the maintenance main seemed to notice. Time flew by like a breeze but before the Maintenance man was about done Nick decided to have some fun. Right as he was going to the door Nick bent over revealing his butt and thong. The guy quickly turned and blushed but turned back and started walking faster as a tent began to rise in his pants. Nick laughed and said that will teach him.

I had to do this quickly so didn't have much time to plan it out.

masterm16 · 05-30-2008, 04:26 PM

amazing story dont stop

Ghost · 05-31-2008, 08:22 AM

I dont think his Mistress is happy with what happen...

lets see how mean she is..

04-22-2008, 09:55 PM	#31
molten man Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Mumbai, India Posts: 946	one and a half years. Isnt that too much?? __________________ MMan 26/m/straight Skype: molten_man007 Kik: molten_man

04-22-2008, 10:14 PM	#32
tilly07 Account Banned Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Currently lost.. Posts: 204 Blog Entries: 1	Umm I have a reason for the 1 and 1/2 years... you can take guesses why, and it has to do with what (SOME) people do 5 days of the week... hint hint! __________________ “I know it seems hard sometimes but remember one thing. Through every dark night, theres a bright day after that. So no matter how hard it get, stick your chest out, keep ya head up.... and handle it.”-Tupac Shakur

04-23-2008, 04:10 PM	#33
tilly07 Account Banned Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Currently lost.. Posts: 204 Blog Entries: 1	Wow thanks , Why won't anyone ever read the story? I bet one of you rated it bad for no reason. I decided to put the story on hold until I see people actually like it. __________________ “I know it seems hard sometimes but remember one thing. Through every dark night, theres a bright day after that. So no matter how hard it get, stick your chest out, keep ya head up.... and handle it.”-Tupac Shakur

04-23-2008, 04:43 PM	#35
Wcbrown514 Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: On the edge of Nowhere looking at Somewhere. Posts: 122	Technically you should have said "A year and a half." not "One and a half years." because using the words "years" is only correct when 2 or more years have pasted. __________________ This is a space in which I am supposed to write something funny and witty and everyone is supposed to read it and chuckle a little. (I am just telling you what it is for)

04-23-2008, 05:58 PM	#36
tilly07 Account Banned Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Currently lost.. Posts: 204 Blog Entries: 1	Lol My bad I'll fix that also, and fine I'll think about continuing it. I am mad because I expect people to post comments, suggestions, and errors. __________________ “I know it seems hard sometimes but remember one thing. Through every dark night, theres a bright day after that. So no matter how hard it get, stick your chest out, keep ya head up.... and handle it.”-Tupac Shakur

04-23-2008, 04:13 PM	#34
aaron_rain Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Mississippi Posts: 32	no no dont put it on hold! i want to read it man!

04-24-2008, 12:39 PM	#37
ni.lad Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Posts: 36	Awww mate you got to finish it, Great so far! __________________ My Fav Quote Those who cannot learn from history are doomed to repeat it

04-24-2008, 02:45 PM	#38
Wcbrown514 Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: On the edge of Nowhere looking at Somewhere. Posts: 122	Don't worry about the comments just keep writing and watch your thread views soar. __________________ This is a space in which I am supposed to write something funny and witty and everyone is supposed to read it and chuckle a little. (I am just telling you what it is for)

04-24-2008, 04:36 PM	#39
tilly07 Account Banned Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Currently lost.. Posts: 204 Blog Entries: 1	Umm some stars would be a good motivation, you think? __________________ “I know it seems hard sometimes but remember one thing. Through every dark night, theres a bright day after that. So no matter how hard it get, stick your chest out, keep ya head up.... and handle it.”-Tupac Shakur

04-24-2008, 07:42 PM	#40
Ghost Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: USA Posts: 203 Blog Entries: 4	Keep it up... your doing fine... A bit over doing it with the time but that doesn't really matter depending on how long are you planing to keep the story going

05-22-2008, 03:57 AM	#41
Dollface Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Posts: 11	Fantastic! Keep up the good work. Please please please add the next part!

05-22-2008, 08:09 PM	#42
tilly07 Account Banned Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Currently lost.. Posts: 204 Blog Entries: 1	Lmao. Thank you. I thought the story was dead by now but ehh I'll try to get back to it when I can. School comes first and I have finals starting tommarow =d. __________________ “I know it seems hard sometimes but remember one thing. Through every dark night, theres a bright day after that. So no matter how hard it get, stick your chest out, keep ya head up.... and handle it.”-Tupac Shakur

05-30-2008, 02:42 PM	#43
tilly07 Account Banned Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Currently lost.. Posts: 204 Blog Entries: 1	Part 9 Taylor instantly froze… How could my parents be so cruel she thought? Emily smiled and oh well guess you might have to become a girl wink wink. Taylor finally got up and stared Emily in the eyes with a dreadful look. “You bitch Taylor yelled”. Taylor grabbed Emily and started to wrestle her to the ground and proceeded to slap her with her sissyness. Emily quickly overcame Taylor and grabbed a shot from the table and stuck it in Taylor’s neck. All went black. “What’s going on Taylor yelled” She was in a dimly light room tied to a table. Moments later a figure stepped out of the darkness and said you dare hit your master! Taylor went silent almost immediately. “Very well Emily said with a smirk”. “I have decided on what to do with you and the first thing on the list is to turn you into a boy again, but! You will remain looking like a girl”! “Understood Emily said”? “Yes Mistress Taylor whimpered”. “Good Emily said” Emily then proceeded to place a mask on Taylors face and again she blacked out. Yawn….., Taylor arose looking around, she was in her room but all was quiet. She then quickly looked down and saw that her breasts were gone and that she had a dick… “YES! I’m free from being a girl again Nick quietly shouted”. He then walked down stairs and saw no one home, and walked into the kitchen to see a note on the refrigerator as well as a meal on the table. Nick ate like a vicious beast and went to read what the note said. Dear Nick, Today I will be going out until 4 o’clock so I would like it if you could clean up the house and put on the outfit I left you in the bathroom. After you have finished cleaning up the house you may do as you wish until I come back home. P.S I left you a meal on the table. =) Sincerely, Emily “Sigh nick said with a grin, this is going to be a long day =/”. Nick proceeded to walkup stairs and when he got into the bathroom he saw a blue thong, black stocks, a short maid outfit, a wig, makeup, and 3” heels. Nick then put on the outfit which was way too small for him and looked at himself in the mirror. “Nick sighed and thought at least I’m not a girl”. Nick proceeded to clean the house starting from the bottom floor and working his way up…. Ding dong ding dong…. “Crap nick whispered worried at who might be at the door”. Nick peered around the corner and saw a man with a badge on saying LE. “Crap why did Emily have to bring a maintenance guy at this time Nick thought”. He slowly walked around the corner and said coming while his heels clicked and clacked. He finally got to the door and slowly opened the door and said hello and a nervous way. The man he saw was tall and built. “Is the wife or husband home at this time the guy said”? “No one’s home besides me right now Nick said nervously.” “Ok well I need to perform some maintenance on a few things alright? “Ok Nick said wondering what to do since his maid outfit was so short and the maintenance main seemed to notice. Time flew by like a breeze but before the Maintenance man was about done Nick decided to have some fun. Right as he was going to the door Nick bent over revealing his butt and thong. The guy quickly turned and blushed but turned back and started walking faster as a tent began to rise in his pants. Nick laughed and said that will teach him. I had to do this quickly so didn't have much time to plan it out. __________________ “I know it seems hard sometimes but remember one thing. Through every dark night, theres a bright day after that. So no matter how hard it get, stick your chest out, keep ya head up.... and handle it.”-Tupac Shakur

05-30-2008, 04:26 PM	#44
masterm16 Junior Member Join Date: May 2008 Location: england Posts: 7	amazing story dont stop

05-31-2008, 08:22 AM	#45
Ghost Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: USA Posts: 203 Blog Entries: 4	I dont think his Mistress is happy with what happen... lets see how mean she is..