Sorority [Fiction] - Page 2

Hampers · 04-18-2008, 04:11 AM

Very well done. Do continue as you please.

x_daringbaby · 04-20-2008, 08:22 PM

Sorry guys, my internet broke down (as it does very often). I've also got finals in the way.
Next part coming up soon! I want some action in the dance so ideas greatly appreciated! (Through PM)

molten man · 04-20-2008, 08:48 PM

aesome story.. continue at ur will!!!

youngscotsman · 06-03-2008, 11:30 AM

a was enjoyin this one, wot happened??

x_daringbaby · 06-03-2008, 02:30 PM

heh sorry guys. i was busy with exams and then i went out of state.
i'll continue asap.

the_boy · 06-04-2008, 09:46 AM

I really like your story, it is well written, well thought out, and you have used lots of detail, which I like, so good story and continue at will.

x_daringbaby · 06-09-2008, 07:53 AM

I left my room dressed in a subtle outfit consisting of a sheer beige blouse, white cami, matching white bra and panties, and jeans. As I left, I saw Stacy parked outside of my apartment building. She waved and called me over.

"Hey, Sooyun!"

"Er- Hi, Stacy."

"Hope you liked my little gift yesterday."

"Eh, yeah. I had fun with it." My face turned scarlet and she laughed.

"Anyways, hop in. Let's go for a ride. I have a contract for you to sign. It says that I will be your sorority sister and that you will do what I tell you to do. Alright? Don't worry, We'll only do things that are legal. It'll be tons of fun. I went through this, everyone in the sorority wen through this, and now you'll go through this. You'll love it!"

I got in the car and she gave me the pen. I signed the contract without reading it through. After all, how bad could it get? She smiled.

"There's a change of clothes in the back. Go get it and change in the car." Stacy motioned to her convertible. We got in and looked at the clothes. They consisted of a see-through blouse 2 sizes to big and 4 inch stilettos.

"Stacy... It's only a top."

"Yeah, I know. Go ahead." I started to take off my clothes when Stacy lowered the top of the car. We were on a pretty busy street and I was about to change. I was turned on but my face turned red.

"Er.. could you close the car?"

"Just get on with the changing. For every car that honks at you, you'll get a special present."

I gave her a weak smile and took off my shirt. Next, while taking off my pants, a car with high school students honked wildly.

"YEAH! TAKE IT OFF, DAMMIT. YOU'RE HOT!" They through t-shirts at me and I waved, still terrified.

"That's one," Stacy said. I took off my bra and some more cars honked. "There's four total."

I put on the blouse and then slipped off my panties.

"Okay Stacy, I'm changed. Now what?"

"Hun, you buttoned it up way too much. I want you to unbutton it to your the half-way."

"But Stacy, that'll show my tits."

"I know, but it won't if you're careful." Now, today was a tad windy, and it would flap up.

okay guys. that's today's post. i kow it's short, but i'll post another soon. critisism&ideas welcome.

youngscotsman · 06-09-2008, 10:02 AM

am still lovin this

the_boy · 06-09-2008, 12:33 PM

this is a good story, keep writing at your own pace.

Naughtybaby · 06-09-2008, 05:18 PM

Very good story...keep it goin

Ciandon · 06-09-2008, 10:20 PM

This story is the kind that made me return from the rut of Naruto-type yaoi. It's great, really great. Keep it up!

04-18-2008, 04:11 AM	#16
Hampers Kiss Kiss FIRE! Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Suitcase Posts: 1,798 Blog Entries: 24	Very well done. Do continue as you please. __________________ ...Tubas in the Moonlight...

04-20-2008, 08:48 PM	#18
molten man Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Mumbai, India Posts: 946	aesome story.. continue at ur will!!! __________________ MMan 26/m/straight Skype: molten_man007 Kik: molten_man

06-03-2008, 11:30 AM	#19
youngscotsman getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: a shed at the bottem of the garden Posts: 420 Blog Entries: 2	a was enjoyin this one, wot happened?? __________________ In its function the power to punish is not essentially different from that of curing or education" almost 18 yr old male scotland,, lookin to meet new people, also lookin for mistress, online or off ,,have webcam and up for trying new thing all the time so pm if interessted or lookin for a chat,,,, limits- no public or messy or x dressing,,

06-04-2008, 09:46 AM	#21
the_boy Senior Member Join Date: May 2008 Location: Canada Posts: 106	cool I really like your story, it is well written, well thought out, and you have used lots of detail, which I like, so good story and continue at will. __________________ I Am The Boy person one: "cake i said, Let them have Cake!!!!!" person two: The cake is lie. The cake is lie!!!!!

06-09-2008, 10:02 AM	#23
youngscotsman getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: a shed at the bottem of the garden Posts: 420 Blog Entries: 2	am still lovin this __________________ In its function the power to punish is not essentially different from that of curing or education" almost 18 yr old male scotland,, lookin to meet new people, also lookin for mistress, online or off ,,have webcam and up for trying new thing all the time so pm if interessted or lookin for a chat,,,, limits- no public or messy or x dressing,,

04-20-2008, 08:22 PM	#17
x_daringbaby Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 136	Sorry guys, my internet broke down (as it does very often). I've also got finals in the way. Next part coming up soon! I want some action in the dance so ideas greatly appreciated! (Through PM)

06-03-2008, 02:30 PM	#20
x_daringbaby Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 136	heh sorry guys. i was busy with exams and then i went out of state. i'll continue asap.

06-09-2008, 07:53 AM	#22
x_daringbaby Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 136	I left my room dressed in a subtle outfit consisting of a sheer beige blouse, white cami, matching white bra and panties, and jeans. As I left, I saw Stacy parked outside of my apartment building. She waved and called me over. "Hey, Sooyun!" "Er- Hi, Stacy." "Hope you liked my little gift yesterday." "Eh, yeah. I had fun with it." My face turned scarlet and she laughed. "Anyways, hop in. Let's go for a ride. I have a contract for you to sign. It says that I will be your sorority sister and that you will do what I tell you to do. Alright? Don't worry, We'll only do things that are legal. It'll be tons of fun. I went through this, everyone in the sorority wen through this, and now you'll go through this. You'll love it!" I got in the car and she gave me the pen. I signed the contract without reading it through. After all, how bad could it get? She smiled. "There's a change of clothes in the back. Go get it and change in the car." Stacy motioned to her convertible. We got in and looked at the clothes. They consisted of a see-through blouse 2 sizes to big and 4 inch stilettos. "Stacy... It's only a top." "Yeah, I know. Go ahead." I started to take off my clothes when Stacy lowered the top of the car. We were on a pretty busy street and I was about to change. I was turned on but my face turned red. "Er.. could you close the car?" "Just get on with the changing. For every car that honks at you, you'll get a special present." I gave her a weak smile and took off my shirt. Next, while taking off my pants, a car with high school students honked wildly. "YEAH! TAKE IT OFF, DAMMIT. YOU'RE HOT!" They through t-shirts at me and I waved, still terrified. "That's one," Stacy said. I took off my bra and some more cars honked. "There's four total." I put on the blouse and then slipped off my panties. "Okay Stacy, I'm changed. Now what?" "Hun, you buttoned it up way too much. I want you to unbutton it to your the half-way." "But Stacy, that'll show my tits." "I know, but it won't if you're careful." Now, today was a tad windy, and it would flap up. okay guys. that's today's post. i kow it's short, but i'll post another soon. critisism&ideas welcome.

06-09-2008, 12:33 PM	#24
the_boy Senior Member Join Date: May 2008 Location: Canada Posts: 106	this is a good story, keep writing at your own pace. __________________ I Am The Boy person one: "cake i said, Let them have Cake!!!!!" person two: The cake is lie. The cake is lie!!!!!

06-09-2008, 05:18 PM	#25
Naughtybaby getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: somewhere in the US Posts: 256	Very good story...keep it goin __________________ Secretive and sexy thats what i am so dont be mad if you dont get all my deets

06-09-2008, 10:20 PM	#26
Ciandon Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Texas Posts: 169 Blog Entries: 3	This story is the kind that made me return from the rut of Naruto-type yaoi. It's great, really great. Keep it up! __________________ I used to be here a lot when I was younger. Now I'm here less so, but I've missed the community.