sleepover lost bet.(fiction)

[derek]

Then they tied her hands back behind her back leaving her naked apart from her panties.Kim was almost crying by then so they quickly gaged her with Davids hand until she stopped."keep quiet Kim you lost the game so play along or get punished" Mary said.Kim nodded her head and they continued until they reached the end of the park where Mary and Sue walked to the shop leaving David with Kim.David noticed a rubbish bin close by and left Mary and went over to it to investigate the condense of it coming back with a half eaten box of Chinese noodles and proceeded to tip them down Kim's white panties and then squashing then leaving a big stain on the front of her panties.Just then the others came back giggling at what just happened.
"Put her on the ground on her back" said Mary and take off her panties and put them in the bin.Sue smiled as she took a bag of diapers out of the plastic bag she got from the shop."Put this on her. " Kim was turning red as the thought of having to where diapers sunk in.David started to taunt her saying"look at the baby in her diapers" over and overt again.

end of part 3

[Trystaan]

Is it just me or does he hve a differnet user name

[nuditydudity]

It's someone else writing I think.

Their join dates are different as well as usernames.

Oh well. I don't know.

derek9000 or derek,

Good plot, but spelling and grammer might help, as well as punctuation. Just to clear things up a little.

Thanks!

NudityDudity

[the_boy]

I like this story, you have a good plot, and nice writing style, there are some parts that where confusing ate the beginning but other than that it is well written.