My Crazy Girlfriend's Problem [FICTION]

[the dude]

Hi, im new so try to be nice but truthful if u dont like it. This is fictional but parts of it are true.


So one day walking home i met this girl. she was in all of my classes at school and i wanted to talk to her but i never did. so we were both walking home and i saw her and i ran up to say hi.She seemed really innocent. But that wasnt the truth. But i didnt know that then.

So i ran up and said hi. she was freindly and said hi didnt i see u at skool. i said ya. and then for no reason she invited me over to her house cuz her parents were out of town for a few days. so very surprised i hapilly said sure.

When we got there she took me to her room and she was a really hot redhead and all i thought about was y i was here and wat she mite wanna do so that made me hard.

Then she said lets play truth or dare so i said sure! i chose dare and she said to be her little slave for a week. thinking of what this mite include i said i dont have a problem with that.

So then she laid down the rules.
- dont speak unless spoken to
- do as she said or i was to be severely punished
- dont tell any1 about being her slave or ill be punished and she'll say to her parents that i tried to take advantage of her
- and dont speak to any of her ex boyfreinds


Then she said that i was to be a dog. so i got down on all fours. she then looked at me like i was retarded. she said that dogs dont wear clothes so i took em off. then she put a collar and leish on me and said we were going for a walk so she went to the front door and we lived on a main road so i objected and she said fine we will go out back in the woods but i was to be punished for disobeying her orders.

So we went to the back yard and went down a path through the woods. a long way through the woods she stoped and said i was to do my business but i didnt have to so i said so. she said that was disobeying her orders so my punishment was to be more severe.

Then she took out her cell phone and it looked like she wrote a text message. then she pulled out some rope and tied me to a big tree with my arms and legs behind me so i was defenceless to whatever she did.so she walked away for about 5 minutes.oh and her name is Brook. so when she came back she had her best freind courtney with her.

i instantly got hard from the site of her and just to be mean she came over and grabed mycock and rubed it and stuff till i almost came then stopped and laughed and said that was part of the punishment. It really was like torture.

So then courtney said that she had an idea. Brook asked what it was. she whispered something to her and they then turned to me. she said i hadent seen anything yet.

First they blindfolded me and and grabed my dick and helped or actually made me jerk off and then she put some stuff that burned really bad on my freakin dick and then i dont know what that she used but it was cold and she used it to pull off the burning stuff and that stuff actually hurt. then the took off a blindfold and showwed me 3 jars and 2 had what looked like milk in them and i said holy crap is that what i think it is. she nodded looking content.

Then i said she was a crazy freaking bi**h. she said only 1 was from me and the other was from 1 of her ex boyfreinds. and the third jar looked like hotsauce and it felt like it 2. Then she took a fourth jar from courtney and mixed them all together and it was a gross pink color.




See what happens later today when i add the next part. and remember this is fictional so its not toooo wierd. Tell me any ideas you might have and how good it is!

[the dude]

hay people ill give u an option A: brook tells me to drink it!
B: she drinks it!

tell me witch one to write in A or B

ill put the 1 u say! so tell me

[cheesy dude]

wow, great story. i say A mate, looks like tis could be an intresting story to follow hope you write more.

[the dude]

OK people i only got 1 reply on the first part to this story but I hope yall like it and I'll give you an option on how the story goes at the end of this part. So tell me what to write in at the end!And I will!


Ok, I was tied to the tree and Brook stood there with the jar of gross liquid in her hand and she was really almost scaring me at this point. Then she told me that the next day at lunch i had to drink the gross liquid and like it. so then she untied me and put the collar and leish back on me. And we went back to her house.

then when we got there her and courtney dicided wether or not to make me a dog any longer and they said that they werent going to make me be a dog any longer. So i heard that and went to stand up and then sudenly she turned around and punched me in the balls so hard that i fell into a fetal position for a minute. And she said that she didnt tell me that i could stand up yet.

Then for disobeying her orders again she decided to make a point by geting down about an inch from my face and grabed my balled and squeezed so hard that it really hurt despite the pain already. And while her face was an inch from mine and i was in severe pain she screamedat me " You are my bitch for the week and you do as i say and only what i say! " Then she squeezed harder. And holding back tears from the pain in my balls i just nodded with a pretty freaked out look on my face. Then she screamed even louder " If you disobey me again you will really regret it! " Then she squeezed harder untill i yelled in pain. Then she let go and stepped away.

She then said that i didnt have to be a dog any more. So then i cautiously stood up again .She said that i couldnt have my clothes back though.

Then they said that i had to cook them dinner(And i am actually a good cook). so i decided to make them these 2 steaks that i found in the fridge. I made it really hot by putting a lot of hot sauce and chilli pepper on it just to get partial revenge for the hot sauce thing witch still burned. When i brought their food to them they actually liked it despite all the hot sauce. But you"ll never guess what she did next. She pulled out the jar from beside the couch and poured about a fourth of the jars contents on the steak! Then she ate a bite and looked over and gave me an evil look and said that i was not to ever look directly at her again because it was bad for her skin! Then i walked back into the kitchen and she said " I heard that thought and i am not an insane bitch! "

So then i thought that she was even more insane. Because that she couldnt really read minds! Could she? Well i just came to the conclusion that she really was crazy.

Then they had me wash their dishes and clean up some. Then they went up to brooks room for about a monute or 2 so i sat down and watched tv . Only untill i heard her room door open and her walking down the steps. Then I was standing up and waiting in a half of a second or less and she didnt notice that i was watching tv.

She threw a thong and a bra at me and said to wear them so i did as instructed. Then she said to come up to her room. so i did. then she said " here he is Britney" then i looked at her computer and saw her freind britneys face on the screen.

Then she laughed and brook said that i had to keep the thong and bra on all week. I almost objected but thought and decided not to with what the consequences were.After that she said bye to britney and she signed off then she went to the web cam and took pictures on the computer with it.

Then she said that I could go home. But I couldnt have my clothes back. so i ran home through the woods. But my dad was homw so i nuck back in the woods and called him on my cell phone and said i was gonna stay at my freinds that night. So he said ok and i waited untill all the lights were off and then i snuck into my bedroom window. And i then put on my own clothes.

Then I had a plan on how to get that jar away from Brook. But it was only 8:30 and it started to be reslly dark so I waited untill about nine o clock then snuck back out the window. I snuck up to this tree in her yard and climbed it and hopped from a limb to the roof under the cover of darkness.



OK people now here are your 3 options on what happens

A.) I sneak in the window when shes asleep and successfully get the jar and escape from the house.

B I sneak in the window when shes asleep and get the jar and she catches me with the jar in my hand and getting ready to climb out the window.

C She opens the window for air and sticks her head out of the window and sees me on the roof and I jump into the tree and try to get away and run home.

D I get in the window get the jar and accidentally leave the window open and she wakes up looks out the window and sees my at the bottom of the tree with the jar in my hand.

[hotnpimpin]

write option b dude

[anonimousbob]

yeah, option B is best, this is a cool story

[evanekid]

B B B!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[the dude]

OK people I'll put B but you gotta wait till later tonight for part 3 because im going to my freinds house and hes gonna help me with ideas so check back at about midnight!And if it aint here then im writein it out And it'll only just be a little while longer. OH and thanks for the feedback peoplez!

[the dude]

OK sorry it took so long bu6t i was thinking of ideas. so here it is so tell me how it is! And i beg u to tel me if u dont like so i can get better. So if u have any ideas tell me and of couse i will give u a choice of hat to happen at the end.


Ok so i was sitting on the roof of brooks house at bout 10:30pm and i was scared of her sticking her head out the window and seeing me. So i just waited untill all the lights in the house went out at bout midnight. The i snuck over to her window and looked in cuz now the night and her rooms light was off. So i looked in and she was asleep.

So then i opened the window and snuck in. I went down the stairs and found the jar in the dark. It was next to the couch where it was when i left. I was still grossed out about how she put that stuff on that steak and still ate it. Then after that she turned and smiled. And surely enough she couldnt read thoughts! Or at least i thought.

So i had just got the jar and remembered that i left the window in her room open and that she would notice i had been there. So i instead of safely walking out the front door i had to go back upstairs and close the window. Then all of a sudden on the way down the hallway i heard her get out of bed. She was talking to herself. She said " I dont remember leaving that window open. Then i heard her gasp. Then all i could think was aww shit now those life or death situation conversations and what to do come in handy. Cuz i pretty much dreaded the thought of getting caught. And then i thought of the painfull punishments i would get for this.

So instantly i ducked for cover from her sight as she said oh crap the jar and i was already in the hallway closet and she ran past me and down the stairs! So that was my few seconds to escape. So in instinct i ran to the window in her room and opened it and she heard me and i heard footsteps coming up the stairs and i jumped out onto the roof. I wanted to close the window to slow her down but she would see me so i practically flew over to the other side of the roof on the eastern side of the house and the opposite side of the driveway. So over there i got down and hung from the gutters with 1 hand clenching that jar and i could throw it and it would break but she would find me so it would give away my position. Then i saw her walking across every edge of the roof looking for the person with the jar.

I sat as still as possible, well hung to be exact. And then she walked directly above me. Then she looked down to see if i had fell. Then i noticed i chose the wrong spot. She was really mad. It must have taken a while to get all of the contents in the jar from her ex boyfriends. So she then started to yell. she said WHAT THE FUCK ARE U DOING IN MY FUCKING HOUSE BITCH! DO I HAVE TO REINSTATE WHAT I SAID EARLIER! WELL I GUESS I DO! U R MY FUCKING BITCH FOR THE WEEK! U DO WHAT I SAY AND DONT DISOBEY ME! OR THERE WILL BE SEVERE CONSEQUENCES! AND NOW U HAV DISOBEYED ME!

Now get up here! NOW BITCH! Then she steped onto my fingers clenching the gutter. THERE R SEVERE CONSEQUENCES AS I REPEAT!she screamed. And all of that proved that she was really crazy! Just if ur stupid enough not to tell already.

This was even attempted murder! And then she stepped off of my fingers and i accidentally let go. And we were on the third story! Then suddenly and theatrically she reached down really fast and grabed my hand and pulled me up. And she was a strong girl for her size!

Then she stood me up on the roof and scaredly i ran to the very middle of the roof. And suddenly a car pulled up in the driveway. I guess ur parents got home early, i said. OH FUCK! she said.


OK tell me how u like it and if u hav ideas send them to me!

Now here r ur options!

A) She lets me go from the roof and home but only till tomorrow.

B) Her parents see us when they drive up and com to see whats going on.

C) She tells me to sneak home and she accidentally pushes me off the third story then she jumps to seem inoccent!

D) She accidentally falls off of the roof and lands on her parents but wont tell her parents i was there cause she knows ill tell what happened and she wont hav an opertunity to punish me.

So tell me which 1 to put in people and i value ur opinion severely! So tell me som ideas too if u got em.

[tanner the slave]

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[the dude]

ok maybe but lets see wat every1 else says first i just gotta give em a chance! ya know!

[ksax]

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[Marc]

D - particularly if it means you are on the roof all night unable to get down, with her parents at home!

[RockerChick9]

D has to be the best. i cant wait to hear the rest! good job so far man!

[the dude]

Thanks a lot and since the majority rules d to c i'll add in d in part 4! Just a little while and either today tomorrow or friday ill write it!