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Skye · 09-09-2007, 07:31 AM

hey This Story is Great! Keep Going With It Please!

Charlieisme333 · 09-09-2007, 08:50 PM

I think it's really good, although I'm really confused. I like the originality though. Maybe you should explain some of the things first, or maybe I'm just missing someting :-)

the Bean · 09-11-2007, 02:49 PM

what are you confused with exactly? btw i havent been on here for ages sorry

Charlieisme333 · 09-18-2007, 05:18 PM

Well it seems that you jump all over the place.. but keep writing and it'll make more sense.

molten man · 09-19-2007, 09:40 PM

hey beansie please continue!!

09-09-2007, 07:31 AM	#46
Skye Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Uk Posts: 15	Keep Going hey This Story is Great! Keep Going With It Please! __________________ No, we're never gonna quit Ain't nothing wrong with it Just acting like we're animals

09-09-2007, 08:50 PM	#47
Charlieisme333 Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 12	I think it's really good, although I'm really confused. I like the originality though. Maybe you should explain some of the things first, or maybe I'm just missing someting :-) __________________ Charlie is short for CHARLOTTE! This means I am girl Just clearing up any confusion.

09-11-2007, 02:49 PM	#48
the Bean Senior Member Join Date: May 2007 Location: wouldn't you like to know... Posts: 160	what are you confused with exactly? btw i havent been on here for ages sorry __________________ Oi, guests, become members NOW! its free!

09-18-2007, 05:18 PM	#49
Charlieisme333 Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 12	Well it seems that you jump all over the place.. but keep writing and it'll make more sense. __________________ Charlie is short for CHARLOTTE! This means I am girl Just clearing up any confusion.

09-19-2007, 09:40 PM	#50
molten man Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Mumbai, India Posts: 946	hey beansie please continue!! __________________ MMan 26/m/straight Skype: molten_man007 Kik: molten_man