[Fiction] Alex's Truth or Dare "fun."

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(hi, this is my very first story and I kind of wanted to give it a shot. go ahead and tear it apart please.)


"Finally!" Kathrine shouted as she opened the door. "Guys, Alex is here! We can start." she shouted behind her shoulder. "We've been waiting." she said.

"I'm only.." I checked my cell phone. "ten minutes late." Ten minutes is early for me. I wondered what had Katherine in such a rush for me to get there. But as I entered the basement I realized why. Our friends Austin, Jake, Kevin, and Reilly were already there and sitting in a circle. Shit. I thought. This has to be Truth or Dare.. All of our friends loved Truth or Dare. Not me. You'll find out why soon..

"Sit!" said Katherine as she squirmed anxiously in her seat on the floor next to Jake. Yup, definitely Truth or Dare. I sat on the floor between Kevin and Reilly and sighed. Katherine could tell I knew what we were doing by the look on my face. "I'll start. Austin, truth or dare?" Austin pondered the thought for a moment and finally chose dare. "I dare you to.. pick dare for the rest of the game!" With us, the dares always started off simple and ended up being intense.

"Okay," Austin said. "Reilly, truth or dare?" Reilly said dare and I could tell it was because she didn't want to seem like a baby. "I dare you to take off your panties without taking off your jeans." After a moment of struggling, Reilly threw her purple thong into the center of the circle. Reilly ended up daring Jake to kiss Kevin, and Jake dared Kevin to attempt to suck his own penis. Kevin ended up asking Katherine.

"Dare." Katherine smiled. But that smile soon faded when she heard her dare. Leave it to Kevin to dare something like that. "What?" Katherine said. "There's no chance in hell that I'm-"

"Nope." Kevin cut her off. "You have to." Katherine shot Kevin a glare and hurried up the stairs. She returned down with a video camera and a dildo. "Good."

"You're so luck my parents are gone this weekend. Otherwise my dad would have a panic attack seeing me carry this thing around my house." Katherine said shaking the dildo around in the air. So that's why this game is going on this weekend! I thought. She began to turn on the video camera and started undressing. Once she was fully undressed (and the boys were all staring at her average tits and freshly shaven pussy) she began to masturbate using the dildo. Finally she came and turned off the video camera sending a middle finger to Kevin. "Alright, Alex. Truth or Dare?"

Well, Shit. I thought. This always happens! I can't be the only pussy to say truth. "Dare." I said and immediately regretted it when I saw the smile curl up on Katherine's face. After hearing my dare I remembered why I hated the game so much.

[Rachie]

Wonder what the dare was that you heard?

Why do you want us to tear the story apart?

For yiur first story can't fault to much.

Well presented - paragraphs etc
Good Punctuation.

Sometimes i believe if you re read it you may find minor prts don't mae sense, follow on etc - or the occasional word is either different or could be changed to something else.

However the postives outway the minor negatives.

Please continue

Love Rachie
x x x x

[hewwwo(:]

(well, nobody's even looked at this yet, but I'm afraid I'll forget my ideas if I stop now.)

I peeked my head out of Katherine's door. Okay, I thought with a slight feeling of relief. Nobody's out here. I can make it to the car and back without being seen. I scampered over to Reilly's jeep (the car the group decided on because the no doors will make it easier for me to be seen.) and sat in the back seat hunched over.

"Oh no, no, no." Katherine said. "Get out for a second." Reilly dove into the driver's seat and Katherine in the passenger seat. The boys sat in back. The cold March air was really making my nipples perk up. Jake was in the middle, so it was his shoulders I'd be sitting on. Perfect. I thought. At least I remembered to shave this morning. We drove down every dirt road she could get to trying to make me get wet (which worked a little.) and down every main street she could find (all the honks I was getting from guys in other cars suggested I was not even the least bit hidden). We pulled up to a beach. It was quite deserted and very cold.

"Okay," Austin said. "Time to go swimming." I pleaded for a couple minutes, but nothing worked so I decided to get it over with. I ran over to the water and dove under. The water was actually not as cold as I was bracing myself for. But still, I ran out and (along with whistles from the boys) got a towel to dry off. They still wouldn't let me keep that on the drive home.

As we shuffled back into Katherine's basement, I was glad to be back in a heated home. "Okay," I said reaching for my clothes. "Kevin, truth or dare?" He chose dare. How predictable.. "I dare you to get naked and stay naked until you leave here." He did as he was told without putting up a fight. I think that was mostly because he was proud of the size of his penis. The game went on like this for a couple more hours until finally everybody was naked and the clothes were all piled in the middle of our circle.

And this right here is where things started to get.. interesting.

[hewwwo(:]

Originally Posted by Rachie

Wonder what the dare was that you heard?

Why do you want us to tear the story apart?

For yiur first story can't fault to much.

Well presented - paragraphs etc
Good Punctuation.

Sometimes i believe if you re read it you may find minor prts don't mae sense, follow on etc - or the occasional word is either different or could be changed to something else.

However the postives outway the minor negatives.

Please continue

Love Rachie
x x x x

lol, yeah. i never re-read my stuff. it's a terrible habit. but thank you very much! xxx

[fire blade]

I love this story ! Very nice written.

[hewwwo(:]

Originally Posted by fire blade

I love this story ! Very nice written.

thank you so much! xxx

[Daring nemder]

Plz write more it's really good!

[daremaster 1]

Very nice written and very enjoyable. Good job.

[hewwwo(:]

"Ugh, I'm hungry." Jake complained and clutched his stomach. "Katherine, what do you have for food?"

"Umm, nothing." said Katherine. "We'll get food in a second, let's play some more. So, how about I ask you. Truth or Dare?" this question didn't even really need to be asked anymore considering everybody picked dare. "Okay, I dare you to.. suck Austin's penis." The look on both boys faces indicated they hated the idea, but they were forced into doing it.. how would they enjoy the idea? Once it was over, Austin wasn't even hard and everybody else in the room was laughing so hard we were crying.

"Not funny." Said Jake. Both boys look like they were about to throw up. How dramatic. I thought. "Fine. Alex..." the sound of my name actually startled me. "I dare you to order a pizza and greet the guy naked. That way I can eat."

"Umm! How do you even know I picked dare!?" Everybody looked at me with their little 'oh-please-you-know-you-would-have' looks. Which I knew I would have. I picked up my cellphone and called in for a pizza. "Thanks, have a nice day." I said, hanging up the phone. "Reilly, I dare you to shave your pussy for everybody." Reilly didn't object so we all marched up to the shower and ran the water. She shaved as much as she could, but didn't get everything. Kevin offered to help. Again, she didn't object.

After he was done shaving her, he kissed the top and Reilly blushed. "Okay, um-" she paused. "Kevin. Make a sandwich with your penis and let Katherine take a bite." They did as they were told.

Riiiiiing! Riiiiiiiiiiing! Riiiiiiiiiiing! We all freaked out wondering who was at the door until we remembered about the pizza.

(this one was short and bad, i know. I'm sorry!)

[daremaster 1]

Yeah not the best chapter but I will keep reading it.

[hewwwo(:]

Originally Posted by Daring nemder

Plz write more it's really good!

thanks so much! xx

Originally Posted by daremaster 1

Very nice written and very enjoyable. Good job.

thank youuu! xx

Originally Posted by daremaster 1

Yeah not the best chapter but I will keep reading it.

i know, i was running out of ideas.. but thanks for your feedback!

[hewwwo(:]

"Hi, your total is-" the pizza boy paused as he looked up from the top pizza box. "oh uhh.." he stumbled. "I- um.."

"oh, shit. I left my money inside. Why don't you come on in?" I turned and walked inside to get the wallet off the table. "What did you say that total was?" It ended up being five dollars over what Austin had in his wallet. Bastard. I thought. "Oh no. I'm missing five dollars. How can I make that up to you?" I said as seductively as I possibly could. He started talking but I took his hand and put it on my boob. Then I kissed him, thanked him for the pizzas and shut the door behind him. He didn't even notice that I gave him no money.

Everybody came out from the room they were hiding in and started eating pizza. "Okay," Kevin said. "Hmm. Jake. You've been too peaceful. I dare you to make out with the girl here that you think is hottest." Jake smiled and walked over to Katherine. Wow, shocking. He hasn't had a thing for her since fourth grade or anything. I thought.

"Mkay." Jake said when he was done. "Alex. I dare you to let us all take shots out of your pussy." Katherine went to go steal something from her parents liquor cabinet. I panicked a little. That was weird for me, but I guess we would have to roll with it. Wait, was it even possible to do that? "Here, this is how you do it." he started.

(again, short and dumb.)

[daremaster 1]

Well it be getting more interesting?

[Turtleking280]

All I can say is that you're too hard on yourself. Like Rachie said, reread, as a few things don't really make sense.
But besides that, it is good.

[Daring nemder]

Wow amazing it just gets better!!!