My Week as a Slave [FICTION] - Page 5

rachel_daring · 08-10-2007, 02:40 AM

dis is 1 of the best storys i have read

Tony12 · 08-10-2007, 05:18 AM

Hope you enjoy this part as much as the others
Arlene and Kelly came up soon after. Kelly said “ This is your very last few
tasks. We will cut Tuesday to Friday you only have to be our slave for the rest of today”. I looked in astonishment and Happiness I was dreading being they’re slave in school. So this was a great relief for me. Arlene said “we’re not going easy on you until then with a grin”.
I was took downstairs, Claire handcuffed my hands behind my back. I was told to take my thong off. Which I of course did. They had a tub of peppers they rubbed it all over my body. It burned instantly. I saw how cruel and sadistic the girls were from actually enjoying seeing me suffer. The got a packet of itching powder and rubbed it on me. Which combined the burning and itching together it was hell! The girls then stuck a huge dildo up my ass. It was very uncomfortable and painful with the pepper and itching powder. Claire then scratched all over my balls making them bleed. I was almost crying from the pain. They got out a permanent marker and wrote slut across my chest. Then they got out a shaver and shaved my hair off so I was badly. I was in shock! What would I tell my parents? This made me angry but not at the very moment I was so distracted with the pain and the itchiness!
After this the girls showed me one bit of decency they gave me all the pictures and video they took. They said I did well and I was the most obedient boy they had ever had. Which then made me not feel alone… I feel sorry for all the other boys they did this to. As I have been there slave as well. What do you know maybe next it could be you!

Thanks for reading. I'm thinking about making a revenge story as a followup as this. If 10people give me comment that they want a followup story then i'll write one if not well i'll leave it from there!

Oh and sorry final part isn't very long!!

Bored · 08-11-2007, 02:19 AM

you should write a follow up, just a suggestion, him getting back at them during school days.

Tony12 · 08-11-2007, 03:40 AM

Yeah... I'm thinking about that Did any of you guys like the last part though?

Leblonk · 08-11-2007, 10:43 AM

yeah it was ok. but you should realy make him get them back. start anothere story and have him get some bad pics or somthing then mmake them be his slaves for a month! that would make for a good long story

countrygal25 · 08-11-2007, 12:34 PM

I liked it i would love to see a follow up.

jyINTER · 08-12-2007, 11:47 PM

definitely ... a revenge story wud make an awesome follow up to this

the Bean · 08-13-2007, 08:54 AM

he has got a revenge story people, its right at the top of the story list.

Tony12 · 08-13-2007, 02:44 PM

I hope you enjoyed this story for the revenge Story
this is the link
http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=3760
I would appreciate rep if anyone wants to give it for the story

molten man · 10-07-2007, 10:27 PM

a revenge story would be great!!

grab_my_underware · 10-10-2007, 11:52 AM

even if you dont get 0 replies, please do it!!
you are such a good writer, i like failed my english class

08-10-2007, 05:18 AM	#62
Tony12 Senior Member Join Date: May 2007 Location: Why do you care :S? Posts: 154 Blog Entries: 1	Final part Hope you enjoy this part as much as the others Arlene and Kelly came up soon after. Kelly said “ This is your very last few tasks. We will cut Tuesday to Friday you only have to be our slave for the rest of today”. I looked in astonishment and Happiness I was dreading being they’re slave in school. So this was a great relief for me. Arlene said “we’re not going easy on you until then with a grin”. I was took downstairs, Claire handcuffed my hands behind my back. I was told to take my thong off. Which I of course did. They had a tub of peppers they rubbed it all over my body. It burned instantly. I saw how cruel and sadistic the girls were from actually enjoying seeing me suffer. The got a packet of itching powder and rubbed it on me. Which combined the burning and itching together it was hell! The girls then stuck a huge dildo up my ass. It was very uncomfortable and painful with the pepper and itching powder. Claire then scratched all over my balls making them bleed. I was almost crying from the pain. They got out a permanent marker and wrote slut across my chest. Then they got out a shaver and shaved my hair off so I was badly. I was in shock! What would I tell my parents? This made me angry but not at the very moment I was so distracted with the pain and the itchiness! After this the girls showed me one bit of decency they gave me all the pictures and video they took. They said I did well and I was the most obedient boy they had ever had. Which then made me not feel alone… I feel sorry for all the other boys they did this to. As I have been there slave as well. What do you know maybe next it could be you! Thanks for reading. I'm thinking about making a revenge story as a followup as this. If 10people give me comment that they want a followup story then i'll write one if not well i'll leave it from there! Oh and sorry final part isn't very long!!

08-11-2007, 10:43 AM	#65
Leblonk Account Banned Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 74	it was ok but yeah it was ok. but you should realy make him get them back. start anothere story and have him get some bad pics or somthing then mmake them be his slaves for a month! that would make for a good long story

10-07-2007, 10:27 PM	#70
molten man Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Mumbai, India Posts: 946	a revenge story would be great!! __________________ MMan 26/m/straight Skype: molten_man007 Kik: molten_man

08-10-2007, 02:40 AM	#61
rachel_daring Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: England Posts: 19	dis is 1 of the best storys i have read

08-11-2007, 02:19 AM	#63
Bored Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: California Posts: 861	you should write a follow up, just a suggestion, him getting back at them during school days.

08-11-2007, 03:40 AM	#64
Tony12 Senior Member Join Date: May 2007 Location: Why do you care :S? Posts: 154 Blog Entries: 1	Yeah... I'm thinking about that Did any of you guys like the last part though?

08-11-2007, 12:34 PM	#66
countrygal25 Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Somewhere in the USA Posts: 16	I liked it i would love to see a follow up.

08-12-2007, 11:47 PM	#67
jyINTER Baby Member Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 1	definitely ... a revenge story wud make an awesome follow up to this

08-13-2007, 08:54 AM	#68
the Bean Senior Member Join Date: May 2007 Location: wouldn't you like to know... Posts: 160	he has got a revenge story people, its right at the top of the story list.

08-13-2007, 02:44 PM	#69
Tony12 Senior Member Join Date: May 2007 Location: Why do you care :S? Posts: 154 Blog Entries: 1	I hope you enjoyed this story for the revenge Story this is the link http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=3760 I would appreciate rep if anyone wants to give it for the story

10-10-2007, 11:52 AM	#71
grab_my_underware Member Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Osterreich Posts: 52	even if you dont get 0 replies, please do it!! you are such a good writer, i like failed my english class