The Visitor. [FICTION] - Page 2

10TimeZ · 07-13-2008, 04:21 PM

Come on man, it's been 2 days now. I'm too excited.

Bebe_Gurl · 07-14-2008, 12:20 AM

I adore this story! Although the font is tiny, it is still perfection...eh, im rambling! Go write more!

Artimis · 07-15-2008, 10:38 AM

Please write more!

Bandit|Queen · 07-15-2008, 11:11 AM

I'm really likeing this, it kind of reminds me of a period erotic novel with the purple prose. Really good so far keep going

The only negative thing, which is a tiny thing is maybe when describing use a a few different words you seem to use the same ones a fair bit. But honestly so good!

07-14-2008, 12:20 AM	#17
Bebe_Gurl Distinguished Member Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: On my knees Posts: 670 Blog Entries: 9	I adore this story! Although the font is tiny, it is still perfection...eh, im rambling! Go write more! __________________ 23/ girll Likes: Make me feel like a slut. PUBLIC!! Speech/ Clothing control, humiliation, bimbofication, rules, Pee control, creative dares... surprise me Exploring: Diapers and food in diapers Limits: Family, Permenent, EXTREEME pain ( I can take a little) I have to b able 2 clean it up easly...oh and nothing illegal Have: Large butt plug, small butt plug, medium butt plug, diapers, twist ties for my sensitive lil nipples

07-15-2008, 10:38 AM	#18
Artimis Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: US Posts: 53	Please write more! __________________ Limits:Extreem pain,large insertion, hanging, public, pee/poop Likes: ice, wegie Got a dare? NOTICE: I have been dared not to orgasm until school's out. At the end of May.

07-15-2008, 11:11 AM	#19
Bandit\|Queen getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Mar 2008 Posts: 414 Blog Entries: 2	I'm really likeing this, it kind of reminds me of a period erotic novel with the purple prose. Really good so far keep going The only negative thing, which is a tiny thing is maybe when describing use a a few different words you seem to use the same ones a fair bit. But honestly so good! __________________ Have fun all! Love you my smooch! Last edited by Bandit\|Queen; 07-15-2008 at 11:14 AM.

07-13-2008, 04:21 PM	#16
10TimeZ Junior Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 21	Come on man, it's been 2 days now. I'm too excited.