Fiction: My Dumb Ass Ex Girlfriend!

Creeper · 05-30-2012, 09:49 PM

WARNING I WROTE THIS LIKE A SCRIPT

Morgan- Hey Dylan how are you?

Dyaln- Im doing good babe.

Morgan- Thats good, wanna come over to my house tonight, no parents will be home.

Dylan- Sure but then i got to get back home to finish my Collage application.

Morgan- Ok babe just knock when you get here.

Dylan- Ok bye babe.

Morgan- bye

Jared- I guess im going to be home alone for a little bit, arnt I?

Dylan- Pretty much ill order you a pizza if you want.

Jared- Its fine just go have fun bro.

Dylan- I will little buddy and remember dont tell mom im leaving.

Jared okay bye

Dylan- bye

Dylan opens up the window and jumps out.

Dylan gets to morgan's house.

"Knock Knock"

the door opens

Morgan- Hey babe

Dylan- hey babe girl (kisses)

Morgan- So wanna watch a movie with me?

Dylan- Sure what kind of movie?

Morgan- Who cares we will be making out the whole time.

Dylan- True so should we just skip all that time putting a movie in and just start kissing?

Morgan- Sure whatever you say im yours tonight.

Dylan- Cool

Dylan and Morgan make out for 10 minutes.

Morgan- Can I get you a drink?

Dylan- Sure babe.

Morgan- okay

Morgan gets up and Dylan slaps her ass.

Morgan comes back with drinks.

Dylan- What took you so long?

Morgan- Just had trouble with the drinks.

Dylan- oh okay.

Morgan- Drink up

Dylan- okay.

They both drink the drinks.

Dylan- Whats going on why am I so tired and Dizzy.

Morgan- I dont Know Probably Because I DRUGGED YOUR DRINK!!!

Dylan- WHY THE FUCK WOULD YOU DO......

Dylan Knocks out on the couch

I hoped you liked part 1. NO RUDE COMMENTS

Slugger · 05-30-2012, 10:18 PM

this story has much potential. I don't like the writing style, but IG you want to stay that way and you know be unique I would suggest that you make it more detailed.

Morgan gets up and Dylan slaps her ass.

I would say "Dylan found him self lost in Morgans round ass it was something he had always dreamed of tapping, I slowly reached out and have her a passionate yet firm slap on her fine ass"

daremaster23 · 05-30-2012, 10:24 PM

Great story and yes please change format if ya can, but please dont go into THAT much detial ^ story above but get some if you can.

Hunterman36 · 05-30-2012, 10:34 PM

Why am I feelin tired and dizzy? Oh I don't know probably because I drugged your drink!!!

That was hilarious lol.

dobelozero · 05-31-2012, 08:30 PM

dude that i didn't expect at all

05-30-2012, 09:49 PM	#1
Creeper Account Banned Join Date: May 2012 Location: Private Posts: 99	My Dumb Ass Ex Girlfriend! WARNING I WROTE THIS LIKE A SCRIPT Morgan- Hey Dylan how are you? Dyaln- Im doing good babe. Morgan- Thats good, wanna come over to my house tonight, no parents will be home. Dylan- Sure but then i got to get back home to finish my Collage application. Morgan- Ok babe just knock when you get here. Dylan- Ok bye babe. Morgan- bye Jared- I guess im going to be home alone for a little bit, arnt I? Dylan- Pretty much ill order you a pizza if you want. Jared- Its fine just go have fun bro. Dylan- I will little buddy and remember dont tell mom im leaving. Jared okay bye Dylan- bye Dylan opens up the window and jumps out. Dylan gets to morgan's house. "Knock Knock" the door opens Morgan- Hey babe Dylan- hey babe girl (kisses) Morgan- So wanna watch a movie with me? Dylan- Sure what kind of movie? Morgan- Who cares we will be making out the whole time. Dylan- True so should we just skip all that time putting a movie in and just start kissing? Morgan- Sure whatever you say im yours tonight. Dylan- Cool Dylan and Morgan make out for 10 minutes. Morgan- Can I get you a drink? Dylan- Sure babe. Morgan- okay Morgan gets up and Dylan slaps her ass. Morgan comes back with drinks. Dylan- What took you so long? Morgan- Just had trouble with the drinks. Dylan- oh okay. Morgan- Drink up Dylan- okay. They both drink the drinks. Dylan- Whats going on why am I so tired and Dizzy. Morgan- I dont Know Probably Because I DRUGGED YOUR DRINK!!! Dylan- WHY THE FUCK WOULD YOU DO...... Dylan Knocks out on the couch I hoped you liked part 1. NO RUDE COMMENTS __________________ Looking for someone to Skype with Likes: wedgies, pain, crossdressing, masterbation, controlled, spankings, talked down to, masters, being a slave. Dislikes: public, nude, showing face, location, offline relationships, toys, long dares/commands, permanent, risk of being caught. Maybe: pictures/videos/cam Pm me for kik username will give you pictures Visit my website www.crosswedgie.webs.com

05-30-2012, 10:18 PM	#2
Slugger getDare Sweetheart Join Date: May 2010 Location: United States Posts: 343 Blog Entries: 5	this story has much potential. I don't like the writing style, but IG you want to stay that way and you know be unique I would suggest that you make it more detailed. Morgan gets up and Dylan slaps her ass. I would say "Dylan found him self lost in Morgans round ass it was something he had always dreamed of tapping, I slowly reached out and have her a passionate yet firm slap on her fine ass" __________________ Hm

05-30-2012, 10:24 PM	#3
daremaster23 Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2012 Location: U.S Posts: 137	Great story and yes please change format if ya can, but please dont go into THAT much detial ^ story above but get some if you can. __________________ Limits: Illegal, Open public, super long dares, family, pics and video, pee/poo, extream Pain JUST NO: Gay (NO offence to others) Likes: Teasing, slightly risky, masturbation, and almost anything not on limits. ( still building but ill add as i go)

05-30-2012, 10:34 PM	#4
Hunterman36 Distinguished Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: the moon Europa Posts: 646 Blog Entries: 2	Why am I feelin tired and dizzy? Oh I don't know probably because I drugged your drink!!! That was hilarious lol.

05-31-2012, 08:30 PM	#5
dobelozero Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2012 Location: maryland Posts: 17	dude that i didn't expect at all