08-05-2007, 02:19 AM | #1 |
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Summer of Discovery [FICTION]
Hi everyone, as i have only recently become a member (although i have been browsing as a guest for some time) i thought i would start by posting a story i have started writing. Enjoy!
Part 1 (Introduction) Caitlin had a crush on Sarah. Sarah was nothing less than a sixth grade beauty. She was about 5'4" with long, straight, light brown hair that reached halfway down her back. She also had big brown eyes, and her chest was just barely starting to develop. Really,they were just two tiny bumps, but Caitlin thought they were great. They had always been the best of friends, but Caitlin just started having sexual feelings for her about six months ago. Caitlin was a little cutie herself. The same height as Sarah, Caitlin had shoulder-length red hair that had just a little curl to it along with bright green eyes. Her breasts were just a little bigger than Sarah's. One Friday night, Caitlin and Sarah stayed together at Sarah's house. Sarah's room was in the basement. They ordered pizza and watched a couple of movies. Since Sarah's parents said they wouldn't disturb them, they were watching the movies in just their panties and t-shirts. They both agreed that was as comfortable as they could get. Caitlin couldn't stop peeking over at Sarah. She had on the cutest little pink panties to go along with her light blue shirt. It was everything Caitlin could do not to climb all over Sarah. After the last movie, the girls started talking. Eventually they got to talking about the boys. Both of them agreed that the boys in their grade were just plain stupid. However, there was an eighth grade boy named Andy that they both though was the sexiest thing alive. Andy was Sarah's neighbor and had always been nice to the girls. The more they talked, the more Caitlin's hormones kicked in. She wanted so bad to kiss and touch Sarah. So Caitlin steered the conversation toward what it would be like to kiss a boy, especially Andy. Sarah agreed that kissing Andy would be just about the greatest thing ever. But neither one of them had any experience. Caitlin was surprised, in a very pleasant way, when Sarah suggested they try kissing each other. Caitlin tried not to be too enthusiastic when she said yes, but Sarah realized that Caitlin wanted it as much as she did. Sarah had the same sexual feelings that Caitlin had for her... |
08-05-2007, 05:25 AM | #2 |
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starts good but need the"action" bit
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08-09-2007, 05:58 AM | #3 |
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thats a pretty damn good story. welcome to the site btw. I think you could easily become an extremely good writer if you put more description, build up and feelings into it, but as it is its very good already, keep going with this story
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08-09-2007, 02:41 PM | #4 |
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Part 2
Part 2
Heres the next part, sorry it took a while. They leaned in toward each other and started with a little peck. They both giggled at that, then tried again. They kissed each other with their mouths closed for about a minute, keeping their hands to themselves. After they stopped, both agreed that they liked kissing. Then Sarah mentioned something about how her older sister had said that her and her boyfriend used their tongues to kiss. Once again, they decided to try it on each other. They started with a few closed-mouthed pecs, but then they opened their mouths and Sarah slipped her tongue in Caitlin's mouth. Caitlin let out a small moan, so Sarah took her hands and started rubbing Caitlin's shoulders. Caitlin moved her hands through Sarah's hair as they really started to get into it. Soon they were making out in a tight embrace, their small breasts rubbing together with their nipples poking each other's chest. They broke apart for a bit and were both breathing heavily. After a few seconds, their eyes met. Without saying a word, they knew they were in love with each other. They leaned into each other to kiss again. This time, Caitlin took her left hand and placed it on Sarah's right breast. Sarah returned the favor, and soon they were rubbing each other's chests. Sarah was the first to take her hand and move it down to Caitlin's stomach, then inside her shirt and back up to her breast. Caitlin let out a moan as Sarah's hand touched her bare breast. Soon, Caitlin's hand was inside Sarah's shirt. They broke their kiss once more and removed their shirts, so the only thing being worn by either one was a pair of panties. For a few seconds, the girls just sat and stared at each others budding breasts and now erect nipples. Their eyes met and a big smile appeared on each of their faces. Then they leaned in and started to kiss again. Caitlin loved the feel of Sarah's bare breasts. In fact, Caitlin was getting a little wet in her pussy. Caitlin decided she needed a taste of Sarah's breasts, so she started kissing Sarah's neck. As Sarah moaned her approval, Caitlin worked her way down to Sarah's chest. Caitlin first kissed one nipple then took her tongue and flicked it a few times. Sarah let out a gasp, then a small moan. Caitlin did the same thing to the other nipple. Meanwhile, Sarah's hands were carressing and softly twisting Caitlin's nipples. After a few minutes, they stopped and changed positions. Sarah copied what Caitlin had done to her nipples, knowing how good it felt. Caitlin started to moan also and reached down to play with Sarah's boobs. After 10 minutes of that, the girls broke apart. They took a minute to catch their breath. Then they started talking to each other again about how good they had felt while playing with each other. Caitlin pointed out the wet spot on her blue panties and told Sarah that she had caused it. Sarah then opened her legs and revealed her own dark spot. Neither one of them had ever played with their pussies, so they didn't really know what to do next. They decided to take their panties off... |
08-10-2007, 12:03 AM | #5 |
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pretty good, much better than the first instalment, keep this story up, its funny to read about 2 noobs with their boobs
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08-25-2007, 07:35 PM | #6 |
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i dare you to keep writing this
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08-30-2007, 02:17 AM | #7 |
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Excellent work for a first timer!! Keep it up!!
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09-04-2007, 05:00 PM | #8 |
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just waiting for next part! just waiting!
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10-20-2008, 09:22 PM | #10 |
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It was from a while ago but i like the story. Do you want me to continue it?
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