The Secret [Fiction]

HypoMonkey · 08-05-2008, 03:26 PM

I very realy finish the stories I start here so I have dared myself to start and finish this new one... here it goes... btw there is a punishment if I don;t finish it

The secret is that I have never plyed truth or dare, never! Not the stupid, 'dance around the room singing Ba Ba Black Sheep' at party's when I was 9, never answering the question 'Who would you like to sleep with'. I'm the big I am...
"Course I've played TorD" I'd say to my friends, "Sure I'll come over tonight and play TorD!", that was the line that sunk me... that is the line that will finish me, reveal my secret.

It started yesterday, well the day before, my friend Daniel, was having a sleepover for his 15. He phoned me up and said...
"Hay Thomas! Its my party this weekend, wanna come over Friday to Sunday, Me, You, the rest of the boys, comeing?"
"Yeah" I said, not noing he was the biggest TorD player in our year. So then yesterday comes and he phones me again,
"Hay Thomas!" but this time his voice sounded croaky and tearful, "You still coming tomorrow?"
"yeah" I replied, slightly conmfused,
"Good, good, just so you now, it'll just be me and you, Ian's party was Friday to Sunday aswell, everyone wants to go to his,
"yeah, sure, yeah, i'm still coming" I said, the phone went dead. I sudden;y felt a samll vibration on my leg, reaching into my pocket, pulling out my phone and sliding open happened bnaturally, I rea the text,
"Thankyou"

So the day came, we spent the whole day in the pool, when the deadly words came out,
"Have you played TorD?"
"Course I've played TorD"
"Wanna play TorD?"
"Sure..."

Naughtybaby · 08-05-2008, 03:41 PM

nice story so far i like it

HypoMonkey · 08-08-2008, 02:42 PM

"Truth or Dare" he said to me
My heart was beating, beating so hard that I almost couldn't feel it.
"Dare" I said, I had no idea what I was doing, the word just came out.
"Wait before we start..." Daniel began, "I need the toilet, unfortunatly I don't want to walk to the bthroom, so I dare you..."
It was coming, my first ever dare, I was dreading it...
"... to be my toilet"
I just stared at him, "..."
"Go on then... sit down"
I got out of the water and sat down on the nearest chair.

I was hoping all he would need was a piss, we hadn;t eaten all day.
He stood up in front of me, and poked his dick over the rim of his swimming shorts adn began to piss, the warm yellow liquid hit my chest,

It was turning me on
It was wierd
I was enjoying it

It trickled down my chest, over my stomach and onto my lap. My eyes closed in plesure.
Ive always thought I fancied him, and now I had the perfect view of his dick, and the too of us were homealone... my mind began to play tricks on me, I was woundering what I could get him to do on me.

My eyes opened to find Daniel back in the pool. I walked over to him and said...
"Truth or Dare"
"Dare"
I jumped into the water
"Finger me!"
"What?" he said
"Finger me hard!"
What the hell was I saying?
What was I doing?
What would Daniel e thinking?

It didn't matter he began to walk over to me, sticking two fingers in his mouth.
He stood behind me and I felt a hand go down the back of my tight swimshorts, he inserted to fingers into my arse, I moaned loudly as his fingers move in and out, in and out.

I began moaning even louder... what was this night turning into?

TrekBoy008 · 08-08-2008, 09:09 PM

Interesting developments...They sure don't waste any time.

zach139 · 08-09-2008, 03:35 PM

Keep the story going.

Mister Disturbia · 08-18-2008, 12:05 AM

Yeah it's a good story!
Keep writing!

That'sSir2u · 08-18-2008, 07:48 PM

Ya, really liking this !!

08-05-2008, 03:26 PM	#1
HypoMonkey Senior Member Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 218	The Secret [Fiction] I very realy finish the stories I start here so I have dared myself to start and finish this new one... here it goes... btw there is a punishment if I don;t finish it The secret is that I have never plyed truth or dare, never! Not the stupid, 'dance around the room singing Ba Ba Black Sheep' at party's when I was 9, never answering the question 'Who would you like to sleep with'. I'm the big I am... "Course I've played TorD" I'd say to my friends, "Sure I'll come over tonight and play TorD!", that was the line that sunk me... that is the line that will finish me, reveal my secret. It started yesterday, well the day before, my friend Daniel, was having a sleepover for his 15. He phoned me up and said... "Hay Thomas! Its my party this weekend, wanna come over Friday to Sunday, Me, You, the rest of the boys, comeing?" "Yeah" I said, not noing he was the biggest TorD player in our year. So then yesterday comes and he phones me again, "Hay Thomas!" but this time his voice sounded croaky and tearful, "You still coming tomorrow?" "yeah" I replied, slightly conmfused, "Good, good, just so you now, it'll just be me and you, Ian's party was Friday to Sunday aswell, everyone wants to go to his, "yeah, sure, yeah, i'm still coming" I said, the phone went dead. I sudden;y felt a samll vibration on my leg, reaching into my pocket, pulling out my phone and sliding open happened bnaturally, I rea the text, "Thankyou" So the day came, we spent the whole day in the pool, when the deadly words came out, "Have you played TorD?" "Course I've played TorD" "Wanna play TorD?" "Sure..." __________________ 14/M/UK Hehe... burnt burgers

08-05-2008, 03:41 PM	#2
Naughtybaby getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: somewhere in the US Posts: 256	nice story so far i like it __________________ Secretive and sexy thats what i am so dont be mad if you dont get all my deets

08-08-2008, 02:42 PM	#3
HypoMonkey Senior Member Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 218	"Truth or Dare" he said to me My heart was beating, beating so hard that I almost couldn't feel it. "Dare" I said, I had no idea what I was doing, the word just came out. "Wait before we start..." Daniel began, "I need the toilet, unfortunatly I don't want to walk to the bthroom, so I dare you..." It was coming, my first ever dare, I was dreading it... "... to be my toilet" I just stared at him, "..." "Go on then... sit down" I got out of the water and sat down on the nearest chair. I was hoping all he would need was a piss, we hadn;t eaten all day. He stood up in front of me, and poked his dick over the rim of his swimming shorts adn began to piss, the warm yellow liquid hit my chest, It was turning me on It was wierd I was enjoying it It trickled down my chest, over my stomach and onto my lap. My eyes closed in plesure. Ive always thought I fancied him, and now I had the perfect view of his dick, and the too of us were homealone... my mind began to play tricks on me, I was woundering what I could get him to do on me. My eyes opened to find Daniel back in the pool. I walked over to him and said... "Truth or Dare" "Dare" I jumped into the water "Finger me!" "What?" he said "Finger me hard!" What the hell was I saying? What was I doing? What would Daniel e thinking? It didn't matter he began to walk over to me, sticking two fingers in his mouth. He stood behind me and I felt a hand go down the back of my tight swimshorts, he inserted to fingers into my arse, I moaned loudly as his fingers move in and out, in and out. I began moaning even louder... what was this night turning into? __________________ 14/M/UK Hehe... burnt burgers

08-08-2008, 09:09 PM	#4
TrekBoy008 getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Greater Boston Area Posts: 310	Interesting developments...They sure don't waste any time. __________________ "Words are, in my not so humble opinion, our most inexhaustible source of magic, capable of both inflicting injury and remedying it." ~ Albus Dumbledore (Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows)

08-18-2008, 12:05 AM	#6
Mister Disturbia Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Germany Posts: 44	Yeah it's a good story! Keep writing! __________________ And you're consuming me violently And your reverence shamelessly tempting me Who sent this maniac? 'Cause I never had this taste in the past Oh you're different, you're different from the former Like a fresh battery, I'm energized by you

08-09-2008, 03:35 PM	#5
zach139 Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: georgia, us Posts: 39	Keep the story going.

08-18-2008, 07:48 PM	#7
That'sSir2u Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Ohio Posts: 23	Ya, really liking this !! __________________ "A word to the wise ain't necessary -- it's the stupid ones that need the advice." -- 'Bill Cosby' Call me Sir or Sean ,I don't care. lol Don't IM me unless you have actually talked to me 1st !!