07-16-2011, 10:35 AM | #1 |
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Her Brothers Slave
So heres my first story, sorry for spelling mistakes and bad puntuation. Anyway here are the characters.
Amy: Amy is small, 5.3' and is 14, she has a boy friend, Harry and 2 older brothers. Her Mum and Dad are away for the week. She has green eyes and blondey/brown hair. Kallum: Kallum is the eldest, he is 23 and has complete control over Amy and Chris. His parents left him in charge whilst away! He is slim and muscular, he has blonde short hair. He is also single and is 5.11' Chris: Chris is gay and normally spends all the time over at his boy friends. He isnt mentioned alot as his not about. Hes 5.8' and weak. He has blue eyes. He is 17. Harry: Harry is Amys Girl friend, and is 14 he is 5.5' and very strong and is very fit and healthy. He has brown hair and bluey green eyes. Billy: Billy is Kallums best friend, he has a girl friend (not mentioned) and he is 6.1'. He has black hair and 23 years old. He is slim and muscular like Kallum. Chapter 1 will be below this post. Please carry on reading |
07-16-2011, 11:00 AM | #2 |
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Chapter 1
Amy, Chris and Kallum live in a large house in England, 5 Bedrooms, 2 Master Bedrooms, a football pitch, a Swimming pool shaped like a foot, each toe a hot tub. Even a recording studio and s library!
Parents have just left their house to go on a trip for the week. Kallum: So im in charge now Amy you will do as i say! And Chris knowing you you will always be over at Georges. Chris: (Rolls Eyes) Theres nothing wrong with having a boyfriend. As Amy would know! Amy: (Gives looks to Chris) Kallum: Amy your not ment to have a boyfriend, you better not have done anything serious! Amy: NO WE HAVNT!!! Its my buisness if i have a boyfriend or not!! Chris: Ok im going to Georges tonight, bye! Chris leaves while Amy storms upstairs to her hot pink master bedroom with a queen bed, and lots of fluffy pillows, a big blach fluffy rug lays, with 2 doors on the opposite side of the room, one a on-suite and one a walk-in wadrobe. The doorbell rings. Kallum goes over and answers it. Kallum: Hey Billy and Harry come in! Harry: Hey Kallum wheres Amy? Kallum: In her bedroom, ill get her to come down! Harry: Amy said we were gunna go swimming in your pool. Kallum: (Shouting up the stairs) Amy get down here now! Amy runs down the stairs in her bikini with her towel around her and wearing some flip flops. Amy: Come on then Harry, lets go! Harry: Ok, lets go. (Harry rips his top of, showing his 6 pack and leaving him in his trunks) Kallum: Me and Billy might join you in the pool. Amy: KALLUM! Kallum: What? Its my pool awell! Amy and Harry make their way to the pool. Amy hurried along while Harry took his time. Harry: Amy Where are you? Amy: (Pushes him in) Here babe Harry: Hey! (Drags her in with him) They start splashing eachother and they swam down to the shallow end. Amy: (Does a handstand underwater showing of) Ha beat that! Harry: Ok (Does a pathetic one) Kallum: AMY! Harry how dare you put my lil sis in danger!! Amy: Kallum we were just doing handstands! Kallum: Yeah right. Billy: Lets all go in the hot tub. They all jump in the 'Big toe' and sit down. Kallum: Amy, come sit next to me and Billy. Amy: NO Kallum! BillyGrabs Amy's wrist) Come on! (He drags her over) Kallum: Theres a good little girl! Amy: (Annoyed) Kallum shut up! Billy: How about we play Truth or Dare? |
07-18-2011, 11:50 AM | #3 |
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nice start... Keep this going!
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