Fiction: Dare Hostages

mugenhavok · 09-24-2009, 04:52 AM

Eric and Axle where ordinary teenagers nothing to special ever happen'd to them till one night..... they became.....HOSTAGES!

The story begins on an ordinary school night.

Hey Eric! oh hi Axle watcha been doing lately i never see you at school anymore
well iv been planning my birthday party and i have been in my classroom creating invites
so i havent gotten out much lately.
well do you wanna come to my birthday party tonight? sure reply'd Eric its going to be one hell of a party.

Well this first was kinda lame but its building up to the party witch is were it gets good

PART 2 :The Party From Hell

Eric Finally arived at the party and he wasent expecting what would happen later on
but ill get to that later.first of eric looked ate the guest list

Guests:
Margo
Eric
Sean
Alexis
Lyserg
Gwen

After He finished looking at the guest list someone yells out.......TRUTH OR DARE!
So the games began. Everyone sat down and played and he explained the rules.

Ok everybody! here are the rules:

1. if someone rufeses a dare then next turn someone gets to dare them and no matter wat they have to do it

2.you cant say the same dare twice

3.if you dont like the rules to fucking bad

TO BE CONTINUED!

daremenudeguy · 09-24-2009, 02:09 PM

seperate the speech and spelling is one thing you could do to fix this story it is a good story and i think many people would want it in longer installements. But other than that its great.

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09-24-2009, 04:52 AM	#1
mugenhavok Member Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: behind you! Posts: 39	Dare Hostages Eric and Axle where ordinary teenagers nothing to special ever happen'd to them till one night..... they became.....HOSTAGES! The story begins on an ordinary school night. Hey Eric! oh hi Axle watcha been doing lately i never see you at school anymore well iv been planning my birthday party and i have been in my classroom creating invites so i havent gotten out much lately. well do you wanna come to my birthday party tonight? sure reply'd Eric its going to be one hell of a party. Well this first was kinda lame but its building up to the party witch is were it gets good PART 2 :The Party From Hell Eric Finally arived at the party and he wasent expecting what would happen later on but ill get to that later.first of eric looked ate the guest list Guests: Margo Eric Sean Alexis Lyserg Gwen After He finished looking at the guest list someone yells out.......TRUTH OR DARE! So the games began. Everyone sat down and played and he explained the rules. Ok everybody! here are the rules: 1. if someone rufeses a dare then next turn someone gets to dare them and no matter wat they have to do it 2.you cant say the same dare twice 3.if you dont like the rules to fucking bad TO BE CONTINUED! __________________ i like:anal,bondage,messy,mild pain. i dont like public or family. i love horror movies from mid 1980's and the 90s! I have the following objects: bras, panties,lube.

09-24-2009, 02:09 PM	#2
daremenudeguy Member Join Date: Mar 2008 Posts: 42	seperate the speech and spelling is one thing you could do to fix this story it is a good story and i think many people would want it in longer installements. But other than that its great. __________________ -----Its actually a lamp-----