Fiction: Kristy’s new school – you choose her fate - Page 23

shynessincarnate · 11-21-2011, 08:10 PM

Sorry guys, no story tonight

Though I have worked on it, it's not finished yet. My ideas are clear, but I am unable to form coherent sentences that flow properly. I'm afraid you'll have to wait a few days...

xdress4life · 11-21-2011, 11:32 PM

please do hurry up with the next post

sm_limb · 11-22-2011, 04:03 AM

Please hurry love the story. But does this mean another punishment

?

em52388 · 11-22-2011, 04:45 AM

Same as the two above me, please hurry. I can't wait to see where it goes from here. In regards to the punishment suggested by sm_limb I don't think a punishment is needed yet as it hasn't been a full week yet. Meaning that if it hasn't been posted by Thursday we get to punish her then.

sm_limb · 11-22-2011, 05:13 AM

Yes wel she said it would be up mondaynight so basicly she is late!!!! Lol

em52388 · 11-22-2011, 05:25 AM

I know what she said but according to the original agreement she only has to post one update every week, and her last one was on Thursday. But if your trigger finger is getting itchy you could always PM her your ideas for punishment to use next time.

john87 · 11-22-2011, 02:56 PM

besides, i dont think she should have even gotten a punishment this last time either. because i'm pretty sure that she had days saved up from being early now that i think about it. so, would'nt it be fair that next time she's late she does'nt have to do a punishment? (as long as she does'nt try to be late or procrastinate it too much, of course.)

Petaru · 11-22-2011, 03:49 PM

It's tuesday. I'm bored.
I need.. to read.

You said you would do the story on monday.

If you seriously are having problems, i'm still okay with you waiting a few more days. If the story comes out too rushed, it won't be good.

shynessincarnate · 11-22-2011, 04:48 PM

I was thinking and think I have found a compromise to keep everyone happy.

1. *The original agreement was one post per week. My last post was on Thursday.
2. *I said that I'd get my post in on Monday but didn't.
3. Since the idea to bank days came out, I haven't gotten any early posts.

I can't receive any punishment until Friday. However, if I don't get my next post in by Thursday, I'd get three late days worth of punishment. If I get my post in before Thursday, I'd bank the extra time.

So, what do you think?

xdress4life · 11-22-2011, 04:57 PM

well this is just my opinion idk what the otehr readers might think but i beleave you should not be punished for posting a few days late even a week this story is so great that i would hate to you you possibly rushing for a deadline and somewhat lessening the quality of the story.
but hey what do i know i'm just a reader

em52388 · 11-22-2011, 05:03 PM

Sounds like a good compromise and it will end the debate that sm and I started.

sm_limb · 11-22-2011, 10:18 PM

i think it is a good compromise. only dont sacrifice qaulity over time as this story is great.

shynessincarnate · 11-24-2011, 09:27 PM

This one's hard. I never thought it would take me so much time to write up the next part. As it is now, it's not finished. To be honest I was about 1500 words in when I realized that I was not pleased at all with the writing so I erased all of my progress to restart. The thing is, this week I hardly have time to sleep, never mind write. I know that many of you are anxiously awaiting the next post. I also know that no one wants the quality to go down. I was debating whether I should just post what I've got done so far or not. It would be cheating because the part that I'm redoing is not nearly ready (only 400 words so far) but at the same time I'd be respecting my end of the bargain by posting a part of my story and so would be avoiding punishment. But now that I'm writing this, I feel it's a bad idea. I hate leaving things unfinished and the work I've done so far falls into the unfinished category as it is just an introduction. I've decided that you would have to wait until tomorrow to read the next part. I've also decided that I would not be accepting to do any punishments for the late post (yes, I know, I'm going back on my word) because I chose to start over knowing I wouldn't be able to finish my writing in time instead of posting a text that I considered to really be sub-par. I'm sure you will understand, you always have so far

. No worries, I'm not forgetting you, I promise!

em52388 · 11-24-2011, 09:39 PM

I have faith that it will be worth the wait. I also can't find fault with your logic as if you don't get the sleep you need your body will and that isn't healthy. I think I can speak for everyone who is reading this story when I say that we want you in good health so you can continue this project to completion and so we can see what you do next.

I for one am in full support of this decision.

sm_limb · 11-24-2011, 10:21 PM

i agree to this, but than again i think if you dont make the new deadline punishment is in order.
and dont lack qaulity to reach deadline that is cheating.
hope you get a good sleep and be rested to write a great chapter as allows
big kiss

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11-21-2011, 08:10 PM	#331
shynessincarnate Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2011 Location: Eastern Canada Posts: 612 Blog Entries: 1	Another delay... Sorry guys, no story tonight Though I have worked on it, it's not finished yet. My ideas are clear, but I am unable to form coherent sentences that flow properly. I'm afraid you'll have to wait a few days... __________________ Quirky, fun & happy 32/F/bicurious/sub Likes and stuff My stories: Kristy's New School (completed), The Dungeon of Dark Desires (in progress) By the way, did you know that you can now Ask Me (Almost) Anything? Please read carefully before sending me a PM: I don't do pics or vids, I don't have kik, I am not looking for a Dom or sub, I don't want to play TorD and I don't wish to give you a punishment. If you ask any of these, I promise that I won't answer nicely.

11-21-2011, 11:32 PM	#332
xdress4life Account Banned Join Date: Jun 2011 Posts: 16	:( please do hurry up with the next post

11-22-2011, 04:03 AM	#333
sm_limb Truth or Dare Enthusiast Join Date: Feb 2011 Location: netherlands Posts: 2,980 Blog Entries: 1	Please hurry love the story. But does this mean another punishment ? __________________ F/netherlands like: public, dressing, humiliation limits: poop/pee, pain, family, pict, cam HTML Code: https://dirtycode.io/E0FEH

11-22-2011, 04:45 AM	#334
em52388 Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2011 Location: Southern Illinois Posts: 172	Same as the two above me, please hurry. I can't wait to see where it goes from here. In regards to the punishment suggested by sm_limb I don't think a punishment is needed yet as it hasn't been a full week yet. Meaning that if it hasn't been posted by Thursday we get to punish her then. __________________ Trust is important but if you aren't willing to get to know someone how will you ever know if you can trust them?

11-22-2011, 05:13 AM	#335
sm_limb Truth or Dare Enthusiast Join Date: Feb 2011 Location: netherlands Posts: 2,980 Blog Entries: 1	Yes wel she said it would be up mondaynight so basicly she is late!!!! Lol __________________ F/netherlands like: public, dressing, humiliation limits: poop/pee, pain, family, pict, cam HTML Code: https://dirtycode.io/E0FEH

11-22-2011, 05:25 AM	#336
em52388 Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2011 Location: Southern Illinois Posts: 172	I know what she said but according to the original agreement she only has to post one update every week, and her last one was on Thursday. But if your trigger finger is getting itchy you could always PM her your ideas for punishment to use next time. __________________ Trust is important but if you aren't willing to get to know someone how will you ever know if you can trust them?

11-22-2011, 02:56 PM	#337
john87 Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2011 Location: usa Posts: 12	besides, i dont think she should have even gotten a punishment this last time either. because i'm pretty sure that she had days saved up from being early now that i think about it. so, would'nt it be fair that next time she's late she does'nt have to do a punishment? (as long as she does'nt try to be late or procrastinate it too much, of course.)

11-22-2011, 03:49 PM	#338
Petaru Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2011 Posts: 24	It's tuesday. I'm bored. I need.. to read. You said you would do the story on monday. If you seriously are having problems, i'm still okay with you waiting a few more days. If the story comes out too rushed, it won't be good. __________________ Likes: Pee holding, wedgies, non-public/public but unseen. Dislikes: Anal, scat, permanent, illegal Limits: Toys (I don't have any), rope, anything I would have to go out and buy.

11-22-2011, 04:48 PM	#339
shynessincarnate Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2011 Location: Eastern Canada Posts: 612 Blog Entries: 1	A compromise I was thinking and think I have found a compromise to keep everyone happy. 1. The original agreement was one post per week. My last post was on Thursday. 2. I said that I'd get my post in on Monday but didn't. 3. Since the idea to bank days came out, I haven't gotten any early posts. I can't receive any punishment until Friday. However, if I don't get my next post in by Thursday, I'd get three late days worth of punishment. If I get my post in before Thursday, I'd bank the extra time. So, what do you think? __________________ Quirky, fun & happy 32/F/bicurious/sub Likes and stuff My stories: Kristy's New School (completed), The Dungeon of Dark Desires (in progress) By the way, did you know that you can now Ask Me (Almost) Anything? Please read carefully before sending me a PM: I don't do pics or vids, I don't have kik, I am not looking for a Dom or sub, I don't want to play TorD and I don't wish to give you a punishment. If you ask any of these, I promise that I won't answer nicely.

11-22-2011, 04:57 PM	#340
xdress4life Account Banned Join Date: Jun 2011 Posts: 16	well this is just my opinion idk what the otehr readers might think but i beleave you should not be punished for posting a few days late even a week this story is so great that i would hate to you you possibly rushing for a deadline and somewhat lessening the quality of the story. but hey what do i know i'm just a reader

11-22-2011, 05:03 PM	#341
em52388 Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2011 Location: Southern Illinois Posts: 172	Sounds like a good compromise and it will end the debate that sm and I started. __________________ Trust is important but if you aren't willing to get to know someone how will you ever know if you can trust them?

11-22-2011, 10:18 PM	#342
sm_limb Truth or Dare Enthusiast Join Date: Feb 2011 Location: netherlands Posts: 2,980 Blog Entries: 1	i think it is a good compromise. only dont sacrifice qaulity over time as this story is great. __________________ F/netherlands like: public, dressing, humiliation limits: poop/pee, pain, family, pict, cam HTML Code: https://dirtycode.io/E0FEH

11-24-2011, 09:27 PM	#343
shynessincarnate Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2011 Location: Eastern Canada Posts: 612 Blog Entries: 1	This one's hard. I never thought it would take me so much time to write up the next part. As it is now, it's not finished. To be honest I was about 1500 words in when I realized that I was not pleased at all with the writing so I erased all of my progress to restart. The thing is, this week I hardly have time to sleep, never mind write. I know that many of you are anxiously awaiting the next post. I also know that no one wants the quality to go down. I was debating whether I should just post what I've got done so far or not. It would be cheating because the part that I'm redoing is not nearly ready (only 400 words so far) but at the same time I'd be respecting my end of the bargain by posting a part of my story and so would be avoiding punishment. But now that I'm writing this, I feel it's a bad idea. I hate leaving things unfinished and the work I've done so far falls into the unfinished category as it is just an introduction. I've decided that you would have to wait until tomorrow to read the next part. I've also decided that I would not be accepting to do any punishments for the late post (yes, I know, I'm going back on my word) because I chose to start over knowing I wouldn't be able to finish my writing in time instead of posting a text that I considered to really be sub-par. I'm sure you will understand, you always have so far . No worries, I'm not forgetting you, I promise! __________________ Quirky, fun & happy 32/F/bicurious/sub Likes and stuff My stories: Kristy's New School (completed), The Dungeon of Dark Desires (in progress) By the way, did you know that you can now Ask Me (Almost) Anything? Please read carefully before sending me a PM: I don't do pics or vids, I don't have kik, I am not looking for a Dom or sub, I don't want to play TorD and I don't wish to give you a punishment. If you ask any of these, I promise that I won't answer nicely.

11-24-2011, 09:39 PM	#344
em52388 Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2011 Location: Southern Illinois Posts: 172	I have faith that it will be worth the wait. I also can't find fault with your logic as if you don't get the sleep you need your body will and that isn't healthy. I think I can speak for everyone who is reading this story when I say that we want you in good health so you can continue this project to completion and so we can see what you do next. I for one am in full support of this decision. __________________ Trust is important but if you aren't willing to get to know someone how will you ever know if you can trust them?

11-24-2011, 10:21 PM	#345
sm_limb Truth or Dare Enthusiast Join Date: Feb 2011 Location: netherlands Posts: 2,980 Blog Entries: 1	i agree to this, but than again i think if you dont make the new deadline punishment is in order. and dont lack qaulity to reach deadline that is cheating. hope you get a good sleep and be rested to write a great chapter as allows big kiss __________________ F/netherlands like: public, dressing, humiliation limits: poop/pee, pain, family, pict, cam HTML Code: https://dirtycode.io/E0FEH