Total Humiliation [FICTION] - Page 2

Coyote · 07-15-2007, 09:35 AM

I was still looking in the mirror dumbfounded i agreed to this when Monica hog tied me and threw a rope around my neck. She told me i was to be thier dog until they get to the beach "and 1 more thing you have to pull yourself along with your boobs".

"what" i yelled

monica looked at Lily and asked sarcasticly"was that a complaint"

" I think it was " she replied "you know what that meens........punishment"

Monica talked with the other 2 girls and then turned around and said"change of plans you are going to the strip beach downtown now stand still" she untied me and told me to strip and she took out a USB plug and shoved 1 end upp me ass and the other to a shock colar wich she put on my neck and then pressed a button and i felt terrible pain un my ass.

Okay guys i need some ideas to keep writing im out of ideas and i need your help tell me what you think of it so far and give iodeas

molten man · 07-16-2007, 12:16 AM

well.. lemme c. if i hav ny ideas i will pm dem!!

the Bean · 07-17-2007, 12:08 PM

this storys a bit too common. there a loads of these types of stories. its good, just the same old same old

Coyote · 07-23-2007, 05:29 PM

Hey Guys Sorry I took So long but I have been really bust with lacrosse and no time to write but here it is

"Owwww What The HEll" I Yelled And Immediatly I Fely another pain as she shocked me again.

Now Monica Grabbed the bikini and shoved it is the bag she had and told me to crawl down the stairs I shuttered to say no in fear of being shocked so i pulled myself along with the fake breasts but when i got to the stairwell i felt someone kick me in the ass and shock me as I fell down the steps "Sooooon

Offffffff AAAaaaaaa BBBBIIITTCCCCHhh" I Yelled as I Stumbled down the steps Lily looked at me and said"Get up You Bitch and get dressed in the clothes we gave you" She threw a bikini at me and turned the shock collar on full blast Monica then ripped the usb port out of my ass and I got the bikini on as I was shocked then Lily said "we are going to victoria's secret,Coals, Target And wherever else we want to where you are going to steal stuff we want

molten man · 07-30-2007, 10:23 PM

please try to write more often!!

Coyote · 09-09-2007, 05:05 PM

i cannot finish so moltemman i want you to take over

Coyote · 10-09-2007, 05:33 PM

i am actuallly finishing my story

i yelled" i am not stealing"

"are you too good og a gody goody" monica said

we were ibn vivtoria's secret and she said to grab 10 bras and 15 thongs and they have to be lace. they took me into the changing room where they stripped me down so that the fake breasts and pussy were showing then they put the 10 bras and 15 thongs on me and then made me walk out the store . everybody looked at me as i walked away from the changing room.

i was out of the food court near Victoria secret and they told me to take all of the clothes off

" why should i do that"

"Because i said so"

Should I

1 take ther undergarments off

2 run away

3 take the punishment

soccercrazy1637 · 10-10-2007, 01:49 PM

numer 1, number 1, number 1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

jregan91 · 10-11-2007, 10:56 AM

nume 3 lol include a girlfiend

Overlord51 · 10-11-2007, 02:19 PM

i wish coyote could finish

anayguy · 10-11-2007, 02:34 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Overlord51

i wish coyote could finish

i agree but he was banned

Hampers · 10-11-2007, 06:24 PM

Yeah yeah It's just a temp Ban.
Your beloved Coyote will be finishing this story before too long.
Thank god.

molten man · 10-16-2007, 09:26 PM

yes. we should leave this for coyote to finish!!

Coyote · 11-03-2007, 02:03 PM

i am back and will continue shortly

admireu4ever · 11-03-2007, 05:13 PM

Welcome back I actually missed you.

07-16-2007, 12:16 AM	#17
molten man Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Mumbai, India Posts: 946	well.. lemme c. if i hav ny ideas i will pm dem!! __________________ MMan 26/m/straight Skype: molten_man007 Kik: molten_man

07-30-2007, 10:23 PM	#20
molten man Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Mumbai, India Posts: 946	please try to write more often!! __________________ MMan 26/m/straight Skype: molten_man007 Kik: molten_man

09-09-2007, 05:05 PM	#21
Coyote getDare Addict Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: USA Posts: 2,110 Blog Entries: 14	i cannot finish so moltemman i want you to take over __________________ Loves:Crossdressing,Light-Medium Bondage, Spanking, Humiliation,Dice Dares Likes:Wedgies,Cock Torture, Light-Medium Pain, Nudity Dislikes(Will do if have to):,Shaving(not eyebrows), Extreme Cold, Over 30 minutes(or so) Limits:Public,Involving Other People, Illegal, Pee/Poop, High Risk of Getting Caught,Extreme Pain,Anal,Messy/Water,(Backyard might be ok), Masturbation 24/M/USA http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=32347 AFTER HOURS!!(GOOD READING)

10-09-2007, 05:33 PM	#22
Coyote getDare Addict Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: USA Posts: 2,110 Blog Entries: 14	i am actuallly finishing my story i yelled" i am not stealing" "are you too good og a gody goody" monica said we were ibn vivtoria's secret and she said to grab 10 bras and 15 thongs and they have to be lace. they took me into the changing room where they stripped me down so that the fake breasts and pussy were showing then they put the 10 bras and 15 thongs on me and then made me walk out the store . everybody looked at me as i walked away from the changing room. i was out of the food court near Victoria secret and they told me to take all of the clothes off " why should i do that" "Because i said so" Should I 1 take ther undergarments off 2 run away 3 take the punishment __________________ Loves:Crossdressing,Light-Medium Bondage, Spanking, Humiliation,Dice Dares Likes:Wedgies,Cock Torture, Light-Medium Pain, Nudity Dislikes(Will do if have to):,Shaving(not eyebrows), Extreme Cold, Over 30 minutes(or so) Limits:Public,Involving Other People, Illegal, Pee/Poop, High Risk of Getting Caught,Extreme Pain,Anal,Messy/Water,(Backyard might be ok), Masturbation 24/M/USA http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=32347 AFTER HOURS!!(GOOD READING)

10-11-2007, 06:24 PM	#27
Hampers Kiss Kiss FIRE! Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Suitcase Posts: 1,798 Blog Entries: 24	Yeah yeah It's just a temp Ban. Your beloved Coyote will be finishing this story before too long. Thank god. __________________ ...Tubas in the Moonlight...

07-15-2007, 09:35 AM	#16
Coyote getDare Addict Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: USA Posts: 2,110 Blog Entries: 14	I was still looking in the mirror dumbfounded i agreed to this when Monica hog tied me and threw a rope around my neck. She told me i was to be thier dog until they get to the beach "and 1 more thing you have to pull yourself along with your boobs". "what" i yelled monica looked at Lily and asked sarcasticly"was that a complaint" " I think it was " she replied "you know what that meens........punishment" Monica talked with the other 2 girls and then turned around and said"change of plans you are going to the strip beach downtown now stand still" she untied me and told me to strip and she took out a USB plug and shoved 1 end upp me ass and the other to a shock colar wich she put on my neck and then pressed a button and i felt terrible pain un my ass. Okay guys i need some ideas to keep writing im out of ideas and i need your help tell me what you think of it so far and give iodeas

07-17-2007, 12:08 PM	#18
the Bean Senior Member Join Date: May 2007 Location: wouldn't you like to know... Posts: 160	this storys a bit too common. there a loads of these types of stories. its good, just the same old same old

07-23-2007, 05:29 PM	#19
Coyote getDare Addict Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: USA Posts: 2,110 Blog Entries: 14	Hey Guys Sorry I took So long but I have been really bust with lacrosse and no time to write but here it is "Owwww What The HEll" I Yelled And Immediatly I Fely another pain as she shocked me again. Now Monica Grabbed the bikini and shoved it is the bag she had and told me to crawl down the stairs I shuttered to say no in fear of being shocked so i pulled myself along with the fake breasts but when i got to the stairwell i felt someone kick me in the ass and shock me as I fell down the steps "Sooooon Offffffff AAAaaaaaa BBBBIIITTCCCCHhh" I Yelled as I Stumbled down the steps Lily looked at me and said"Get up You Bitch and get dressed in the clothes we gave you" She threw a bikini at me and turned the shock collar on full blast Monica then ripped the usb port out of my ass and I got the bikini on as I was shocked then Lily said "we are going to victoria's secret,Coals, Target And wherever else we want to where you are going to steal stuff we want

10-10-2007, 01:49 PM	#23
soccercrazy1637 Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Posts: 32	numer 1, number 1, number 1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

10-11-2007, 10:56 AM	#24
jregan91 Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Posts: 5	nume 3 lol include a girlfiend

10-11-2007, 02:19 PM	#25
Overlord51 Account Banned Join Date: Oct 2007 Posts: 2	i wish coyote could finish

10-16-2007, 09:26 PM	#28
molten man Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Mumbai, India Posts: 946	yes. we should leave this for coyote to finish!! __________________ MMan 26/m/straight Skype: molten_man007 Kik: molten_man

11-03-2007, 02:03 PM	#29
Coyote getDare Addict Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: USA Posts: 2,110 Blog Entries: 14	i am back and will continue shortly __________________ Loves:Crossdressing,Light-Medium Bondage, Spanking, Humiliation,Dice Dares Likes:Wedgies,Cock Torture, Light-Medium Pain, Nudity Dislikes(Will do if have to):,Shaving(not eyebrows), Extreme Cold, Over 30 minutes(or so) Limits:Public,Involving Other People, Illegal, Pee/Poop, High Risk of Getting Caught,Extreme Pain,Anal,Messy/Water,(Backyard might be ok), Masturbation 24/M/USA http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=32347 AFTER HOURS!!(GOOD READING)

11-03-2007, 05:13 PM	#30
admireu4ever Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 152 Blog Entries: 1	Welcome back I actually missed you.