How Jenna’s journey as a slave

HeadHunter_t · 04-18-2009, 07:20 AM

this is my first story so tell me what you think of it.

Jenna had always been brought up as a proper girl. She was shielded by her parents in aspects of her life. Now at the age of 19 she had just gotten her first computer with internet access. She could not wait to go upstairs and use her pc with the internet. but she was stuck helping her mom with the cleaning of the house for her moms work guests that where coming over. Jenna’s mother came into the room at 6:30 and said she could do what she wanted for the rest of the night but not to bother her while her friends were there.

So Jenna ran up stairs and turned her pc on and log on line to surf the internet. Jenna had been browsing for hours now typing random things in to google. 9:30 was when it happened she found a goggle add saying silly signs with the address of www.getdare.com under it. Jenna clicked the link to the site witch took her to the get dare homepage. She browsed the site for nearly two hours and found that the site had many things on it 1) dare arias 2) stories about dare and sex but what she was most interested in was the slave master aria. She then decided to do some research on the subject of being a slave and she soon found out that she liked the idea of being a slave but it was already 2:30 and she was tired so she bookmarked the site and went to bed thinking about if she wanted to be a slave.

dared to perfection · 04-18-2009, 07:24 AM

alright start .. but it was a tad short and not very detailed.
also ARIA is spelt area.

monkeysrock · 04-18-2009, 02:18 PM

Thats a good promising start.

I like the description, could have a bit more detail. I think the paragraph length is just right, so we dont get too bogged down .

Looking forward to the next installment!

Coyote · 04-18-2009, 02:23 PM

Could be better. Just follow these guidelines.

1. Be more descriptive

2. Dont rush it, take your time

3. Make the posts longer

4. Spelling and Grammer and punctuation can be improved.

Officelover · 04-18-2009, 05:59 PM

Yes good story, but I have to agree with Coyote's post. And the title doesn't make much sense either. But I do think the story has potential.

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Originally Posted by dared to perfection

also ARIA is spelt area.

Haven't you heard of Rossini's "Dare Aria"? lol

molten man · 04-19-2009, 01:04 PM

starting is a littlr rushed but it is ok!!

Keep it going..

HeadHunter_t · 04-20-2009, 01:25 PM

Thanks for all the replies and criticisms I fixed the title as well and here is the next part hope you enjoy it.

Part 2

Jenna got home at three from an uneventful day at school. She was so tired that she went strait to her room and fell a sleep. She woke up at 9:30 and decided she was going to sign up to get dare and post slaves add. She logged on twenty minutes later with the name slaveJ. she then set up an add that was as follows

SlaveJ/19/f/uk slave seeks m/master (have web cam)
Hi all I am new to this whole slave thing but would rely like to try it out I do not know many of my limits but the ones I do know are n permanent no blood no family and friends no illegal stuff.
My likes are masturbation and being naked. I do have a web cam. I also have yahoo chat and msn. If anyone would like me to be there slave pm me with the details.

Then Jenna posted the slave add.
Over the next few days Jenna got many reply’s but a lot of it was one line replies like I will be your master slave and other junk like that. It was 10:30, and Jenna was about to log off when she saw it on her 5th day of searching.

Hello

Hello 19 m master from the uk,.i to have a web cam. And, would like to chat with you on yahoo about you being my slave I am on there now my address is [email protected] to here from you slaveJ from masterX

She logged on to her yahoo account and went to add a contact. Then she suddenly stopped she was wondering if she was ready for this to be a slave to a man she had never even met before. She decided it couldn’t hurt to add him and see what he was like as a master. She then typed his name in to the add user section. He accepted her invite immediately; she then started chat with him.

SlaveJ: hello
MasterX: hello
SlaveJ: I your pm on get dare and would like to find out more about it and you I have some questions for you if that is ok.
MasterX: yes that is fine what do you want to know.
SlaveJ: What type of master are you, are you very strict.
MasterX: yes am strict but since you are new to this if you choose to be my slave we will take it slow.
SlaveJ: could you tell me what I might have to do for you as your slave.
MasterXWell that depends to begin with you would do a bit of every thing so we can find out your limits and likes as a slave.
Slavej; sounds fair to me. What rules would you give me a your slave
MasterX: I would give you a set of rule to live bye eg never leave chat without asking me first.iwould control the cloths you would wear. And you would always have to call me master or sir.
SlaveJ: Ok can requests a picture of you so as proof of who you are and I will do the same.
MasterX: yes I will send it now
slavej: ok got it wow your cute here mine comes
masterX: your good looking slaveJ
slavej: may I have time to think about it masterX
MasterX: yes you may if you decide you want to be my slave log on to yahoo chat in two days time at 10:00
Slavej: ok I will think about it goodbye then
MasterX: goodbye

It was 12:30 by the time Jenna logged off so she decided to get some sleep.

blaise1 · 04-21-2009, 10:12 AM

please continue its good very good

04-18-2009, 07:20 AM	#1
HeadHunter_t Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: south africa Posts: 223	How Jenna’s journey as a slave began this is my first story so tell me what you think of it. Jenna had always been brought up as a proper girl. She was shielded by her parents in aspects of her life. Now at the age of 19 she had just gotten her first computer with internet access. She could not wait to go upstairs and use her pc with the internet. but she was stuck helping her mom with the cleaning of the house for her moms work guests that where coming over. Jenna’s mother came into the room at 6:30 and said she could do what she wanted for the rest of the night but not to bother her while her friends were there. So Jenna ran up stairs and turned her pc on and log on line to surf the internet. Jenna had been browsing for hours now typing random things in to google. 9:30 was when it happened she found a goggle add saying silly signs with the address of www.getdare.com under it. Jenna clicked the link to the site witch took her to the get dare homepage. She browsed the site for nearly two hours and found that the site had many things on it 1) dare arias 2) stories about dare and sex but what she was most interested in was the slave master aria. She then decided to do some research on the subject of being a slave and she soon found out that she liked the idea of being a slave but it was already 2:30 and she was tired so she bookmarked the site and went to bed thinking about if she wanted to be a slave. Last edited by HeadHunter_t; 04-20-2009 at 12:35 PM. Reason: titale incompleate

04-18-2009, 07:24 AM	#2
dared to perfection getDare Devil Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: the best parts of the UK Posts: 1,085 Blog Entries: 1	alright start .. but it was a tad short and not very detailed. also ARIA is spelt area. __________________ If I receive a PM saying 'frustrate' I will wear my chastity belt for a duration of their choice. OR if no duration is stated, just for the remainder of that day. I'm on FetLife too - ask and I will tell!

04-18-2009, 02:18 PM	#3
monkeysrock getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: London, UK Posts: 276	Thats a good promising start. I like the description, could have a bit more detail. I think the paragraph length is just right, so we dont get too bogged down . Looking forward to the next installment! __________________ Now there's a guy who really knows where his towel is! http://www.humansexmap.com/showmap.p...f6ea2.75805559

04-18-2009, 02:23 PM	#4
Coyote getDare Addict Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: USA Posts: 2,110 Blog Entries: 14	Could be better. Just follow these guidelines. 1. Be more descriptive 2. Dont rush it, take your time 3. Make the posts longer 4. Spelling and Grammer and punctuation can be improved. __________________ Loves:Crossdressing,Light-Medium Bondage, Spanking, Humiliation,Dice Dares Likes:Wedgies,Cock Torture, Light-Medium Pain, Nudity Dislikes(Will do if have to):,Shaving(not eyebrows), Extreme Cold, Over 30 minutes(or so) Limits:Public,Involving Other People, Illegal, Pee/Poop, High Risk of Getting Caught,Extreme Pain,Anal,Messy/Water,(Backyard might be ok), Masturbation 24/M/USA http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=32347 AFTER HOURS!!(GOOD READING)

04-19-2009, 01:04 PM	#6
molten man Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Mumbai, India Posts: 946	starting is a littlr rushed but it is ok!! Keep it going.. __________________ MMan 26/m/straight Skype: molten_man007 Kik: molten_man

04-20-2009, 01:25 PM	#7
HeadHunter_t Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: south africa Posts: 223	part two Thanks for all the replies and criticisms I fixed the title as well and here is the next part hope you enjoy it. Part 2 Jenna got home at three from an uneventful day at school. She was so tired that she went strait to her room and fell a sleep. She woke up at 9:30 and decided she was going to sign up to get dare and post slaves add. She logged on twenty minutes later with the name slaveJ. she then set up an add that was as follows SlaveJ/19/f/uk slave seeks m/master (have web cam) Hi all I am new to this whole slave thing but would rely like to try it out I do not know many of my limits but the ones I do know are n permanent no blood no family and friends no illegal stuff. My likes are masturbation and being naked. I do have a web cam. I also have yahoo chat and msn. If anyone would like me to be there slave pm me with the details. Then Jenna posted the slave add. Over the next few days Jenna got many reply’s but a lot of it was one line replies like I will be your master slave and other junk like that. It was 10:30, and Jenna was about to log off when she saw it on her 5th day of searching. Hello Hello 19 m master from the uk,.i to have a web cam. And, would like to chat with you on yahoo about you being my slave I am on there now my address is [email protected] to here from you slaveJ from masterX She logged on to her yahoo account and went to add a contact. Then she suddenly stopped she was wondering if she was ready for this to be a slave to a man she had never even met before. She decided it couldn’t hurt to add him and see what he was like as a master. She then typed his name in to the add user section. He accepted her invite immediately; she then started chat with him. SlaveJ: hello MasterX: hello SlaveJ: I your pm on get dare and would like to find out more about it and you I have some questions for you if that is ok. MasterX: yes that is fine what do you want to know. SlaveJ: What type of master are you, are you very strict. MasterX: yes am strict but since you are new to this if you choose to be my slave we will take it slow. SlaveJ: could you tell me what I might have to do for you as your slave. MasterXWell that depends to begin with you would do a bit of every thing so we can find out your limits and likes as a slave. Slavej; sounds fair to me. What rules would you give me a your slave MasterX: I would give you a set of rule to live bye eg never leave chat without asking me first.iwould control the cloths you would wear. And you would always have to call me master or sir. SlaveJ: Ok can requests a picture of you so as proof of who you are and I will do the same. MasterX: yes I will send it now slavej: ok got it wow your cute here mine comes masterX: your good looking slaveJ slavej: may I have time to think about it masterX MasterX: yes you may if you decide you want to be my slave log on to yahoo chat in two days time at 10:00 Slavej: ok I will think about it goodbye then MasterX: goodbye It was 12:30 by the time Jenna logged off so she decided to get some sleep. __________________ 24 m from south Africa.

04-21-2009, 10:12 AM	#8
blaise1 Member Join Date: Oct 2008 Posts: 31	please continue its good very good