Swimmer's fantasy

Zwak888 · 11-24-2010, 04:12 AM

First story I have written, hopefully you will like it, any suggestions welcome.

It is a mix of non-fiction and fiction, I hopefully be able to write a new part every 2 or 3 days

He eagerly walked down to the pool once again, like he had the previous three days. He went for three reasons, firstly he had free use of the pool which meant he could waste some time from his holidays down at the pool doing something active, secondly he didn’t mind looking at the girls who also occasionally turned up at the pool, thirdly and most importantly he fantasied about the idea of play an truth or dare game with one of these girls who was swimming down at the pool, a highly unlikely thought but it was. He was on holiday with his family, staying in a small 2 bedroom apartment, a little holiday town north-eastern California, roughly 200-300 people lived their permanently up to 1500 in peak holiday time, maybe just one of those people was a girl who was interested in playing some public truth or dare.

As he arrived at the pool he keenly looked at the pool, he scanned around the area and unfortunately couldn’t find anyone that he fancied to either look at, or play TorD with, rather disappointing. The pool area that he was looking at consisted of a main pool and a spa, the pool consisted of 4 50m lanes, of which one was double the size of the others which were mainly used for doing laps. The other half of this pool consisted of 4 25m lanes, which at the time were being used for an inflatable obstacle course, which he was not interested in as he had completed it numerous times. In addition to this pool area there was a square spa roughly 5m x 5m, which had a waterslide entering into it from one side, although a rather short water slide roughly 15m it was a rather vital part in the numerous truth or dares that he had thought up, and in turn would bring about a rather large amount of embarrassment as it was directly opposite the seats in the spa.

He wondered into the pool area and placed his bag and shoes next to a chair which was next to one of the ends of the pools, took his shirt off and in turn places in it his bag. He now had on a pair of black and grey knee-length board shorts which were on top of a black speedo, which still had lining on the front half, he had been considering buying a blue speedo and in turn cutting out the lining however had never got around to doing it. He himself was 15 years old, 5’9’’ medium build, pale white skin and had a 6.5 inch penis, 3 inch un-erected which would become the important figure when he would take his board shorts off, when a girl turned up, but until then there was no point to ‘show it off’.

archie21 · 11-24-2010, 11:19 AM

It's a beginning nice scene setting.. i'll watch to see where it goes next....

rchard2scout · 11-24-2010, 12:41 PM

I like it, but please use punctuation, otherwise your story is unreadable!

Zwak888 · 11-29-2010, 03:43 AM

Sorry for the wait the next section:

He decided that it would be best if he were to completely ‘scout’ the area by doing 2 laps of the waterslide, walking up the steps provided unfortunately no opportunity to look at a girls arse on the way up and in turn the next trip up the stairs. At the bottom of the waterslide, was the spa and with pure frustration as he came round the corner of the waterslide, he could tell that there was no one worth talking to here. This trip to the pool might after all be a complete waste of time.

He returned to his bag and pulled out his goggles, as he thought it would be a great idea to swim some laps to pass the time, and possibly give him the belief that this was a worthwhile trip. As he walked down the ramp into the 50m pool, he instinctively felt his cock swivel into probably a 2-2.5 inch figure, hardly impressive. He decided it would be best if he was to swim 400m freestyle, to other people it might seem like a decent distance, but to him it was relaxing as he was a member of the swim team. As he finished the 400m and in turn took of his goggles, he once again glanced over the pool area, still no sign of anyone.

To once again waste some more time he decided he would slowly stroll down the 25m of the 50m pool that it was possible to stand up at, although to the casual bystander it might seem a little perplexing he thought that it was a legitimate way to waste some and not seem acting in a suspicious manner, at least not in comparison to sitting down and starring at every person that walked by. Just as he was performing his final stroll in the pool back towards his bag, which was adjacent to the door he saw what he had been waiting for, could this possible be the person.
What he had seen the bottom half of a body, but not any body, a female body, but not any female body, but one that had a perfect tan to it, and not only that this body was clad in a one-piece swimsuit. He didn’t have a long glance as the body moving down the set of stairs that led to the change room, quite a perplexing action he thought as it appeared the person was probably attired to go for a swim already.

He decided it would be in his best interests if he was to swim 100m of freestyle as to not arise any more suspicion, as after all he had been strolling up and down the pool for 15 minutes already. As swam the lap he imagined all of the possible actions that might occur over the next few hours, he himself had a bit of a fetish for swimmers, and in particular one-piece swimsuits, the way that it showed the female body was just so beautiful, he also did favour women with a tan, quite a contradictory though considering he had quite the opposite of a tan on his body.

glasssbottle174 · 11-29-2010, 07:50 AM

This is a really good start to the sotry, and i cant wait to find out what happens

Zwak888 · 12-03-2010, 03:14 AM

Sorry for the wait:

After he eagerly finished his 100m he once again scanned the area to no avail, he once again began to stroll up and down the pool until he saw her. Wait. Two People. Twins. Wait. One more person. Three females in all, how had he become so lucky, all 3 of them were also rather attractive but more importantly around his age, he suddenly congratulated himself with his decision to go for a swim today.
This first of the three was the one which he enjoyed the most, not that the other two were a disappointment. This first one was 5’7’’, tanned skin, a mix between Mediterranean and Brazilian, her face was gorgeous; dark brown breast length hair, dark brown eyes, a normal sized and well-shaped nose, an overall well-proportioned face. However the body of this person was the main seller, the one-piece probably roughly one size too small, gave away every curve and bump behind the black speedo one piece, simply plain with a little speedo symbol on the front on the left hand side. She had medium but perky breasts, her arse was nice, not to big yet not so small that it was hardly visible, her vagina was not visible under the tight fabric, a slight disappointment but he would soon plan to get to see her vag.

The next girls looked identical to the first one, which was understandable as they were twins. This one however did not provide as much excitement to him as the first, the problem the swimsuit which she was wearing. In contrast to her sister who was wearing a one-piece, she was wearing a horizontally yellow and white striped modest bikini, with a pair of 20cm board shorts on on-top of her swimmers, he was slightly disappointed yet he could take away some potential excitement from her as the bikini and presumably her swimmers were tighten with the use of strings.

The final girl came in with a towel over her bottom half, in comparison to the twins who had come in the towels in their hands. As she swiftly removed the towel from her body he saw why she had done this. She was 5’8’’, slightly tanned skin, and a slightly larger build than the twins. In contrast however she had blond hair, and deep blue eyes, not that he focused on that for long as his eyes wondered down to the parts of her body that was more interesting. She was also too wearing a string bikini this time a red one, she had slightly larger breasts than the twins however they did also seem a little bit saggier. That was not the detail that he was most impressed about however, the use of her towel before was due to the fact that the red swimmer that she had one were quite clearly too small for her, with the ass side already forming a part wedgie even after she had already just adjusted them, he came to the presumption that she had used one of the twins swimmer, and hence they were two small. As she turned around the same delight could not be repeated on her front as he could not see the swimwear slowly creeping up into her vagina. A disappointment however this inspection of the girls had led to his penis becoming rather excited and he knew that today would be the day that he got some action.

11-24-2010, 04:12 AM	#1
Zwak888 Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2010 Location: Australia Posts: 3	Swimmer's fantasy First story I have written, hopefully you will like it, any suggestions welcome. It is a mix of non-fiction and fiction, I hopefully be able to write a new part every 2 or 3 days He eagerly walked down to the pool once again, like he had the previous three days. He went for three reasons, firstly he had free use of the pool which meant he could waste some time from his holidays down at the pool doing something active, secondly he didn’t mind looking at the girls who also occasionally turned up at the pool, thirdly and most importantly he fantasied about the idea of play an truth or dare game with one of these girls who was swimming down at the pool, a highly unlikely thought but it was. He was on holiday with his family, staying in a small 2 bedroom apartment, a little holiday town north-eastern California, roughly 200-300 people lived their permanently up to 1500 in peak holiday time, maybe just one of those people was a girl who was interested in playing some public truth or dare. As he arrived at the pool he keenly looked at the pool, he scanned around the area and unfortunately couldn’t find anyone that he fancied to either look at, or play TorD with, rather disappointing. The pool area that he was looking at consisted of a main pool and a spa, the pool consisted of 4 50m lanes, of which one was double the size of the others which were mainly used for doing laps. The other half of this pool consisted of 4 25m lanes, which at the time were being used for an inflatable obstacle course, which he was not interested in as he had completed it numerous times. In addition to this pool area there was a square spa roughly 5m x 5m, which had a waterslide entering into it from one side, although a rather short water slide roughly 15m it was a rather vital part in the numerous truth or dares that he had thought up, and in turn would bring about a rather large amount of embarrassment as it was directly opposite the seats in the spa. He wondered into the pool area and placed his bag and shoes next to a chair which was next to one of the ends of the pools, took his shirt off and in turn places in it his bag. He now had on a pair of black and grey knee-length board shorts which were on top of a black speedo, which still had lining on the front half, he had been considering buying a blue speedo and in turn cutting out the lining however had never got around to doing it. He himself was 15 years old, 5’9’’ medium build, pale white skin and had a 6.5 inch penis, 3 inch un-erected which would become the important figure when he would take his board shorts off, when a girl turned up, but until then there was no point to ‘show it off’.

11-24-2010, 11:19 AM	#2
archie21 getDare Succubus Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: uk Posts: 1,763	It's a beginning nice scene setting.. i'll watch to see where it goes next.... __________________ [COLOR=Magenta]You could say no but whats the point in being on a dare site if you say no all the time...... If you don't put up a limits list, expect to be pushed on everything.

11-29-2010, 07:50 AM	#5
glasssbottle174 getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 263	This is a really good start to the sotry, and i cant wait to find out what happens __________________ 28 male U.K Likes: mild humiliation, cum play, mild bondage, mild pain, chastity, spanking, edging, denial, JOI Dislikes: public, illegal, permanent, anal, pee/poo, crossdressing, family/friends, videos Kik on request

11-24-2010, 12:41 PM	#3
rchard2scout Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2010 Posts: 12	I like it, but please use punctuation, otherwise your story is unreadable!

11-29-2010, 03:43 AM	#4
Zwak888 Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2010 Location: Australia Posts: 3	Sorry for the wait the next section: He decided that it would be best if he were to completely ‘scout’ the area by doing 2 laps of the waterslide, walking up the steps provided unfortunately no opportunity to look at a girls arse on the way up and in turn the next trip up the stairs. At the bottom of the waterslide, was the spa and with pure frustration as he came round the corner of the waterslide, he could tell that there was no one worth talking to here. This trip to the pool might after all be a complete waste of time. He returned to his bag and pulled out his goggles, as he thought it would be a great idea to swim some laps to pass the time, and possibly give him the belief that this was a worthwhile trip. As he walked down the ramp into the 50m pool, he instinctively felt his cock swivel into probably a 2-2.5 inch figure, hardly impressive. He decided it would be best if he was to swim 400m freestyle, to other people it might seem like a decent distance, but to him it was relaxing as he was a member of the swim team. As he finished the 400m and in turn took of his goggles, he once again glanced over the pool area, still no sign of anyone. To once again waste some more time he decided he would slowly stroll down the 25m of the 50m pool that it was possible to stand up at, although to the casual bystander it might seem a little perplexing he thought that it was a legitimate way to waste some and not seem acting in a suspicious manner, at least not in comparison to sitting down and starring at every person that walked by. Just as he was performing his final stroll in the pool back towards his bag, which was adjacent to the door he saw what he had been waiting for, could this possible be the person. What he had seen the bottom half of a body, but not any body, a female body, but not any female body, but one that had a perfect tan to it, and not only that this body was clad in a one-piece swimsuit. He didn’t have a long glance as the body moving down the set of stairs that led to the change room, quite a perplexing action he thought as it appeared the person was probably attired to go for a swim already. He decided it would be in his best interests if he was to swim 100m of freestyle as to not arise any more suspicion, as after all he had been strolling up and down the pool for 15 minutes already. As swam the lap he imagined all of the possible actions that might occur over the next few hours, he himself had a bit of a fetish for swimmers, and in particular one-piece swimsuits, the way that it showed the female body was just so beautiful, he also did favour women with a tan, quite a contradictory though considering he had quite the opposite of a tan on his body.

12-03-2010, 03:14 AM	#6
Zwak888 Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2010 Location: Australia Posts: 3	Sorry for the wait: After he eagerly finished his 100m he once again scanned the area to no avail, he once again began to stroll up and down the pool until he saw her. Wait. Two People. Twins. Wait. One more person. Three females in all, how had he become so lucky, all 3 of them were also rather attractive but more importantly around his age, he suddenly congratulated himself with his decision to go for a swim today. This first of the three was the one which he enjoyed the most, not that the other two were a disappointment. This first one was 5’7’’, tanned skin, a mix between Mediterranean and Brazilian, her face was gorgeous; dark brown breast length hair, dark brown eyes, a normal sized and well-shaped nose, an overall well-proportioned face. However the body of this person was the main seller, the one-piece probably roughly one size too small, gave away every curve and bump behind the black speedo one piece, simply plain with a little speedo symbol on the front on the left hand side. She had medium but perky breasts, her arse was nice, not to big yet not so small that it was hardly visible, her vagina was not visible under the tight fabric, a slight disappointment but he would soon plan to get to see her vag. The next girls looked identical to the first one, which was understandable as they were twins. This one however did not provide as much excitement to him as the first, the problem the swimsuit which she was wearing. In contrast to her sister who was wearing a one-piece, she was wearing a horizontally yellow and white striped modest bikini, with a pair of 20cm board shorts on on-top of her swimmers, he was slightly disappointed yet he could take away some potential excitement from her as the bikini and presumably her swimmers were tighten with the use of strings. The final girl came in with a towel over her bottom half, in comparison to the twins who had come in the towels in their hands. As she swiftly removed the towel from her body he saw why she had done this. She was 5’8’’, slightly tanned skin, and a slightly larger build than the twins. In contrast however she had blond hair, and deep blue eyes, not that he focused on that for long as his eyes wondered down to the parts of her body that was more interesting. She was also too wearing a string bikini this time a red one, she had slightly larger breasts than the twins however they did also seem a little bit saggier. That was not the detail that he was most impressed about however, the use of her towel before was due to the fact that the red swimmer that she had one were quite clearly too small for her, with the ass side already forming a part wedgie even after she had already just adjusted them, he came to the presumption that she had used one of the twins swimmer, and hence they were two small. As she turned around the same delight could not be repeated on her front as he could not see the swimwear slowly creeping up into her vagina. A disappointment however this inspection of the girls had led to his penis becoming rather excited and he knew that today would be the day that he got some action.