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Davros · 03-22-2008, 09:12 AM

It all looks rather... dare I say it? Messy.

Unsure if you did or not, but I think you should type it up in MSWord and use the grammar/spell checker. Also, spread things out a little more to make it easier to read, and also try and add more detail

Lollipop · 03-22-2008, 10:23 AM

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Originally Posted by AM.PM

if you want me to i could write a sequal to it but im only gonna wrightanother if you thought this one was realy good.

okay, it wasn't spectacular but it was quite good and i would LOVE to see a sequal to it! next time add some more detail and make it longer-i love reading peoples stories!

Naughtybaby · 03-22-2008, 10:32 AM

i think you should continue it instead of making another one

AM.PM · 03-22-2008, 12:02 PM

ok thanks for the suport guys.i might add on to this one or start a new one.

Bebe_Gurl · 03-22-2008, 12:08 PM

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Originally Posted by AM.PM

ok thanks for the suport guys.i might add on to this one or start a new one.

Sounds good 2 me!

03-22-2008, 10:32 AM	#18
Naughtybaby getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: somewhere in the US Posts: 256	i think you should continue it instead of making another one __________________ Secretive and sexy thats what i am so dont be mad if you dont get all my deets

03-22-2008, 12:02 PM	#19
AM.PM Distinguished Member Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: i now live in Seattle wa, the stupid city that looks nothing like Dublin!! Posts: 563 Blog Entries: 11	ok thanks for the suport guys.i might add on to this one or start a new one. __________________ Never take life seriously. Nobody gets out alive anyway. Don't ask me to be your mistress or slave. I will not accept so don't waste your time! These are videos I have to show you guys: http://ie.youtube.catch?v=xllgk-Glxs4 http://www.nbc.com/Saturday_Night_Li...html?mea=93343

03-22-2008, 09:12 AM	#16
Davros Account Banned Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 2,943	It all looks rather... dare I say it? Messy. Unsure if you did or not, but I think you should type it up in MSWord and use the grammar/spell checker. Also, spread things out a little more to make it easier to read, and also try and add more detail