Slave Island Feedback

Thank you rachie · 10-22-2012, 04:56 PM

Hey guys! I recently started writing my first story, Slave Island, and I recently posted the 6th part. The interest level has been dropping lately and I don't know why. Is my story getting old? I would really appreciate any feedback about the story and any ideas on how to get the interest level back up. Thanks!

http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=119825

Dare99 · 10-28-2012, 12:52 AM

I like it! I've been checking everyday for the next installment of the story

10-22-2012, 04:56 PM	#1
Thank you rachie Member Join Date: Jun 2012 Location: AUS Posts: 72	Slave Island Feedback Hey guys! I recently started writing my first story, Slave Island, and I recently posted the 6th part. The interest level has been dropping lately and I don't know why. Is my story getting old? I would really appreciate any feedback about the story and any ideas on how to get the interest level back up. Thanks! http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=119825 __________________ 23 years old, Straight/Bi-Curious, Male, Dare Master Likes: masturbation, shower, pain, private humiliation, spanking, CBT Limits: Totally-public, permanent, family/social suicide Check out my story, Slave Island! http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthrea...432#post790432

10-28-2012, 12:52 AM	#2
Dare99 Member Join Date: Jul 2010 Posts: 81	I like it! I've been checking everyday for the next installment of the story