heathermid

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kk this is my first story and im sorry if its crappy but i havent written one of these before so here it gos.

It was a normal day for Fowlerstien (fowlerstien is a girl) at heatherwood . As she sat in the portable in first period passing notes to her best friend Meena talking about her pervirted gym teacher Mr.black a crumpled note landed on her desk. Fowlerstien thought that the note wasnt for her so she passed it back to the thrower Lonner. This time the note hit her in the head which made Fowlerstien mad because she doesnt apperciate things being thrown at her head. Although this time she actualy did read it which said :Fowlerstien is sooo anoying!nobody likes u!!.This maid Fowlerstien very angry but then she thought "oh well im better then him any way" and goes back to wrighting her note to her friend. Once first period passed her,meena and emi and maddy(Fowlerstiens other friends) all headed to the assembly .

After the assembley meena and her headed for science where they went wild doing tones of dares. The first dare Fowlerstien had to do was put penut butter in her underwear (which made her smell like penut butter).It wasnt to bad although Fowlerstien felt sticky and wet when ever she sat down.Meena had to flap her arms around whenever she walked which wasnt too bad because they were taking a test and she didnt need to get up for any reason.although Fowlewrstiens next dare made her perfect day go down hill......

( tell me what u think of it because i have a realy good ending to this)

[Bebe_Gurl]

I hate you why were they taking a test in an assembly? But otherwise good. Be carful not to rush, take your time and explain things in detail. (don't give away the ending) and you could also step up the dares a bit, this could turn out pretty good tho...

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if u reread it bebe_gurl i didnt say that fowlerstien and meena were taking a test at the assembly i said they went to an assembly then took a test during science

[Bebe_Gurl]

O, Sorry!! my bad...

[Davros]

Careful on the spelling/grammar... and seems a little rushed. Take your time - the best stories take time. Otherwise, a nice story for a beginner.

This time the note hit her in the head which made Fowlerstien mad because she doesnt apperciate things being thrown at her head.

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The first dare Fowlerstien had to do was put penut butter in her underwear (which made her smell like penut butter).

made me laugh (this isn't a bad thing )

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thanks guys i will improve my grammer

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Well after Meena did her dare she dared Fowlerstien to have a connectible wedgie(bra and underwear attached together by a ballet band) . Fowlerstien did as she was told .When she sat down for the first time she had winced in pain but she toughed it out. Although our next period was home-ec. by now she was aching but her friend made her bend down 5 times for three minutes. As she bent down for the third time, Lonner (who was in there home-ech class to) noticed the ballet band on her back as she bent down. Then as he looked lower (on her butt) he saw a streak of brownish stuff smeared on her back where her ballet band was connected. He immediately thought that Fowlerstien had crapped her pants. Since he secretly had crush on her but didn’t want to show he decided to embarrass her instead. He got a pair of scissors and lifted up her t-shirt very carefully so she wouldn’t notice him and cut the ballet band. This was not the brightest idea because this made one half of the band hit him in the face smearing peanut butter on across his cheeks. Fowlerstien was horrified (but relieved at the same time because the pain from the wedgie was not gone)because ..........................

[Bebe_Gurl]

Beacuse y? and i hate loaner.

[Davros]

Originally Posted by Bebe_Gurl

Beacuse y? and i hate loaner.

Loaner xDD

Because... erm, that's the cliffhanger, of which you usually wait a day or two to find out...

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ok im back .anways ............

Because this made her bra get unhooked and slip off and flew off with the ballet band!!This caused alot of attention to all the guys and girls in the classroom however Mis.Cox (the home-ech teacher) didnt notice a thing.Fowlerstien felt like her stomache was about to fall out of her butt as her cheeks were now the color of crann berry juice. Lonner however didnt think this was going to be quite as a success because he had managed to take off Fowlerstiens bra and anoy her at the same time.although as he saw fowlerstien reaching for the bra he snatched it up and put it in his boxer before she could blink. Meena was laughing her head off as she found this quite amusing while Fowerstien was trying to pull down Lonners pants and get her bra.However when Mis.Cox saw Fowlerstien try to pull down his pants she yelled at the top of her lungs "FOWLERSTIEN WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING!!?" Lonner and Fowlerstien froze on the spot while the teacher looked at them.......................

srry about the cliff hangers but i dont have time to finish this today.tell me what u think of it so far.

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me again.as i was saying>>>>>>>

Lonner and Fowlerstien froze on the spot while the teacher looked at them in discust.She had told Fowerstien that she was gonna get a detention and apalajize to Lonner. Fowerstien was in rage by that time but didn't want to get introuble so she had told the teacher what happend but Miss.Cox still said she had to say sorry. Fowlertien stomped toward Lonner and said "Lonner i hate you! But i need to say sorry so sorry!!". Lonner however had other ideas and said " the only ways i will accept your apology is by having you kiss me " . By then Lonner thought he was a big shot because if she didn't do it then she would have a saturday school. Fowlerstien's eyes grew wide as she glared at Lonner but then said fine. She had grabed him by the arm and kissed his hand. Now Fowlerstien thought this was a geniouse plan until he had grabbed her waist right when she was about to go. As she struggled to get out of his arm he pulled his face towards his and started kissing her. Fowlerstien had lost alot of her pride and self respect when doing dares but she certinly didnt want to give up her dignitiy as well so she zipped her lips shut so that he couldn't continue his master plan.As she continued to try to get free Lonner felt more manly when showing off to his friends so he started humping her as well ( his cock began to grow hard). This was the last straw for Fowlerstein so she finaly kicked as hard as she could at his cock.he yelped in pain and fell to his nees while shutting his eyes and holing his privates.Fowlerstien had finaly regained her self respect and headed towards her seat (where her friend sat still mocking her) although she was now braless.Lonner now thought she was a real bitch but kept the bra as a suivinere that he could show his friends.

[Bebe_Gurl]

you go fowlerstien!!! and loaner is weird and gross. why did you HAVE to pick...HIM

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do you guys think this was a good first try story??

[Bebe_Gurl]

Wait, is it over? awwww. if it is good for your first story, I can't wait to watch you grow as a writer

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if you want me to i could write a sequal to it but im only gonna wrightanother if you thought this one was realy good.