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nice, soft and easy going owner. | 6 | 16.22% | |
strict, mercyless and hard, but not too cruel owner. | 14 | 37.84% | |
extreme, sadistic, cruel, mean and twisted! a psycho in a way. | 15 | 40.54% | |
other... ( please leave your suggestion as a comment ) | 2 | 5.41% | |
Voters: 37. You may not vote on this poll |
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08-17-2016, 09:28 AM | #1 |
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need some help with an upcoming story
Hi,
a good friend asked me for my thoughts, since she couldn`t decide, so, i suggested i could ask you all... kinda figured it was the best way... won`t go much into detail, but, she wants to write a mind control bdsm story. she`s written few one on one stories before, but now she wishes to expand her writing. what she`s unsure of, is how the story should be, what type of person should the main character be. thanks in advance for your vote |
08-17-2016, 10:11 AM | #2 |
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The character should be a combination of nice and extreme. Think two different personalities depending on who is around and the situation. He could also switch back and forth in one scene, so you'd also have his regret to incorporate.
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08-17-2016, 11:35 AM | #3 |
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i think that since the story is about mind control, the main character should be manipulative and nice but also have a sadistic/extreme side.
Hence, at times, the main character manipulates the secondary character or whoever into thinking whatever the main character wants them to think, when in turn, the sadistic actions contradict what was said. I hope that makes sense.
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08-17-2016, 03:13 PM | #4 | |
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08-17-2016, 03:17 PM | #5 |
getDare Devil
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you're welcome, i think it would be a great story!
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08-19-2016, 01:14 PM | #6 |
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thank you all for voting and your lovely comments, we saw them and talked quite a bit about it. and your other variant is very nice and could well be implimented in either choice 2 or 3.
we talked about it, and she says that 2 and 3 are the best options in her opinion. but each has it`s ups and downs, for example, 2 is for a much bigger number of readers, while 3rd option has very few limits overall meaning that you can let your darker fantasies roll, but, most people just wouldn`t find it fitting their reading preference... |
08-20-2016, 01:07 AM | #9 |
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Huh, well it also depends on the age of the protagonist, a younger person I would go with strict but caring, and protective. On the other hand a older person would be more twisted, because of his experiences in life, of being betrayed, cheated on, and all those good negative stuff.
So on the story, is it going to be just two, and maybe a handful of other people, or a group, like a motorcycle gang story?
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08-21-2016, 06:11 AM | #10 | |
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as for the theme, it`s kinda like one owner, and many slaves, of various social and economic statuses. |
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08-24-2016, 01:26 AM | #11 |
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That's cool, also I want to share this with you. I'm sure your going to love this site.
http://www.tameri.com/write/plotnstory.html
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