[Fiction] the best job ever

[vinny.b]

This is my first story and all feedback is welcome.


My job is the best thing you could do, my job is to drive a sex limo. Now this means that i can pick up people who want to have some fun on the way to somewhere. And if i am lucky i get to join in on that fun and this was the best night of my life. I got a call from a girl who wanted a ride, now i said ok and i had know idea of what a good thing had just happind to me. I got in the lime and went to the house to pick her up and there she was with nothing on. It was like a Christmas gift without the wraping paper, a was so happy, she said "Hi my name is Hanna whats youres?" "Jim". "Where do you want to go?" "I think that i want to go to...

[vinny.b]

this is very short i know but i hope to get the updates longer

[Rachie]

Originally Posted by vinny.b

a was so happy, she said "Hi my name is Hanna

Tip: read through the part when written, wait awhile and re read it before posting.

The first parts a little short (understand stated).

Ps: the poll will show you little, a lot of non readers will influence the vote (stop).

Keep writing if you enjoy it and take it from there. It's not always about what others think. Eg) if it's helping you: mentally, improve spelling, etc keep going.

Tip: try to start some sentences off differently, reads a little plain.

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