the young slave still lives

sxemama24 · 09-27-2008, 08:47 PM

there once was a young. Slave she once had a happy life. Until she discoverd getdare.com . she loved posting dares and looking at everyone elses posts. Until she got involved with this one boy. He was really nice. so they decieded to meet in person at a hotel and her mom was not awair of this. once they met he was nice and they talked. the boy brought up a topic, the topic was s/m slave master) and after 5 mins the young girl became the young slave. the boy who was now the master told hr that she had to go to that hotel every day for the rest of her life.not knowing what would happen.so they started to make out on the bed. the master took off her pants then he reached for his panties she pushed him off the bed the master got up slapped her and she fell on to the bed he grabbed a rope,a whip,and a role of duct tape. 1st he tied her to the bed. 2nd..............................to be continued...........

Redneckgirl88 · 09-27-2008, 09:36 PM

So far this seems really intresting.. it also makes me nervous... what happens to the young slave... please continue.. So far though it is a good start.

kitkat · 09-28-2008, 09:54 AM

Keep going, it sounds interesting.

sxemama24 · 09-28-2008, 04:16 PM

thanx i'll try to you guys are awesome hang in there i'm working on it

sxemama24 · 09-28-2008, 04:32 PM

..............he put duct tape over her mouth so no one could here her crys for help.3rd he whipped her vagina so that it had slash marks all over it. before her master let her go he told her if she didnt come back that he would track her down and killed her..............(will finnish soon!

ty_la · 09-28-2008, 05:02 PM

why did you make a new thread for this?

applebooty · 09-28-2008, 05:05 PM

I was wondering the same thing. o.O You might want to ask a moderator to merge the two threads so people don't get lost.

SubMissChievous · 09-28-2008, 05:07 PM

I just did merge it

Please, for all your new installments just reply to this thread. It makes the story easier to read for users as they won't miss any part of it this way

Greggs · 04-30-2009, 04:35 PM

this story is just scaring me!! i thought it was supposed to be a turn on xD

very scary!!!

Ziggy · 04-30-2009, 06:46 PM

Its rushed posts are too short but other than that it could become a good story

Officelover · 04-30-2009, 06:51 PM

This is, sorry, one of the worst stories on the site. It's totally unrealistic, in short posts, unoriginal, and lacking in punctuation.

Please fix these things!

Elin0553 · 04-30-2009, 09:02 PM

I kinda like it

25rob1985 · 05-01-2009, 07:06 AM

please do continue

The godfather · 05-01-2009, 08:30 AM

it's rushed, the plot is clichéd and the installments are short. the spelling is bad and you didn't even give anyone a name. sorry but this is one of the worst stories on getdare.
if you want to improve it try longer installments and more description.

Ciandon · 05-04-2009, 07:42 PM

Am I the only one who noticed that this story's last update was in September of '08?

09-27-2008, 08:47 PM	#1
sxemama24 Account Banned Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 3	the young slave still lives there once was a young. Slave she once had a happy life. Until she discoverd getdare.com . she loved posting dares and looking at everyone elses posts. Until she got involved with this one boy. He was really nice. so they decieded to meet in person at a hotel and her mom was not awair of this. once they met he was nice and they talked. the boy brought up a topic, the topic was s/m slave master) and after 5 mins the young girl became the young slave. the boy who was now the master told hr that she had to go to that hotel every day for the rest of her life.not knowing what would happen.so they started to make out on the bed. the master took off her pants then he reached for his panties she pushed him off the bed the master got up slapped her and she fell on to the bed he grabbed a rope,a whip,and a role of duct tape. 1st he tied her to the bed. 2nd..............................to be continued........... __________________ Last edited by sxemama24; 09-28-2008 at 04:20 PM.

09-28-2008, 04:16 PM	#4
sxemama24 Account Banned Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 3	no prob thanx i'll try to you guys are awesome hang in there i'm working on it __________________

09-28-2008, 04:32 PM	#5
sxemama24 Account Banned Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 3	more of the young slave still lives ..............he put duct tape over her mouth so no one could here her crys for help.3rd he whipped her vagina so that it had slash marks all over it. before her master let her go he told her if she didnt come back that he would track her down and killed her..............(will finnish soon! __________________

04-30-2009, 06:51 PM	#11
Officelover Truth or Dare Enthusiast Join Date: May 2008 Location: New England Posts: 2,602 Blog Entries: 107	This is, sorry, one of the worst stories on the site. It's totally unrealistic, in short posts, unoriginal, and lacking in punctuation. Please fix these things! __________________ 20 Trans Femme Nonbinary Ass Collector Writes Poetry On Aluminum Foil with Gold Gel Pens Fills Mason Jar with Vodka I'm Doing A Cleanse White Kid with Black Nails

04-30-2009, 09:02 PM	#12
Elin0553 Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: My home is so impossibly long, no ammount of words or letters could comprehend the legth and th Posts: 103 Blog Entries: 7	I kinda like it __________________ Owned Rainbow Slut

09-27-2008, 09:36 PM	#2
Redneckgirl88 Member Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Washingtion State, USA Posts: 36	So far this seems really intresting.. it also makes me nervous... what happens to the young slave... please continue.. So far though it is a good start.

09-28-2008, 09:54 AM	#3
kitkat Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Aus Posts: 168	Keep going, it sounds interesting.

09-28-2008, 05:02 PM	#6
ty_la getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Canada Posts: 469	why did you make a new thread for this?

09-28-2008, 05:05 PM	#7
applebooty Account Banned Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: SexyTown, U.S.A Posts: 174 Blog Entries: 1	I was wondering the same thing. o.O You might want to ask a moderator to merge the two threads so people don't get lost.

09-28-2008, 05:07 PM	#8
SubMissChievous Prodigy Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Canada Posts: 4,466	I just did merge it Please, for all your new installments just reply to this thread. It makes the story easier to read for users as they won't miss any part of it this way

04-30-2009, 04:35 PM	#9
Greggs Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2009 Posts: 3	this story is just scaring me!! i thought it was supposed to be a turn on xD very scary!!!

04-30-2009, 06:46 PM	#10
Ziggy Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2009 Posts: 19	Its rushed posts are too short but other than that it could become a good story

05-01-2009, 07:06 AM	#13
25rob1985 getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 265	please do continue

05-01-2009, 08:30 AM	#14
The godfather Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Ireland Posts: 192	it's rushed, the plot is clichéd and the installments are short. the spelling is bad and you didn't even give anyone a name. sorry but this is one of the worst stories on getdare. if you want to improve it try longer installments and more description. __________________ loves: mastrubation, humiliation likes: mild pain, spanking dislikes: piss, limits: public, very painful, permanent/ long lasting, illegal, dangerous, poo

05-04-2009, 07:42 PM	#15
Ciandon Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Texas Posts: 169 Blog Entries: 3	Am I the only one who noticed that this story's last update was in September of '08? __________________ I used to be here a lot when I was younger. Now I'm here less so, but I've missed the community.