Pleasing My Conservative Girlfriend - Page 8

Lovesfundares · 07-29-2009, 03:37 PM

Once again i fell in love with this, but like previously stated by betty, if he cheats on her ill die, like just drop dead.

im in love with this story
like i loved twilight
and this is almost that good
your the next get dare idol
WEWT

quidproquo · 07-29-2009, 03:56 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lovesfundares

Once again i fell in love with this, but like previously stated by betty, if he cheats on her ill die, like just drop dead.

im in love with this story
like i loved twilight
and this is almost that good
your the next get dare idol
WEWT

Thank you.

Who was the last getDare idol?

italian99 · 07-29-2009, 06:01 PM

Yeah, if he cheated on Leah it would completely kill the story for me. Great installment by the way.

quidproquo · 07-29-2009, 11:01 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mascot

I love how you use everyone's opinions so much, your a great writer. I can't wait for the next part, do you think it might be up today?

I can't really write the next chapter until I decide what should happen next, and I haven't. It's a little more complicated than, 'should he cheat?'

It should be up soon though. Possibly tomorrow. Depends on how long it is. I haven't even started it.

Dicedarefan666 · 07-29-2009, 11:22 PM

and if it were up to me, he would talk with alice about working it out with Leah, and keep it non-sexual not even TorD... but... that's just my opinion... so it's probably wrong.

You've written the story VERY well so far, and I trust you'll continue to do so.

quidproquo · 08-03-2009, 12:37 PM

Chapter Eight: Unrevealed

A few days later...

Leah was holding me by the shoulders, trying to get me to look her in the eye. I stared down at the ground.

“I don't see why you have a problem with this. Most guys would be thrilled to have their girl take her clothes off. Am I not pretty enough?” She tried to laugh, but her whole body was rigid with tension, and it came out awkwardly, like she had never laughed before. I ignored her comment about her beauty.

“I need to know why.”

Leah looked surprised. “Why what?”

“Listen, Leah, we've been dating for almost a year, and you've hardly ever wanted to do anything physical. You've always been reluctant that way, and I've always been okay with that. What's different?”

“Can't I just have gotten more comfortable with you?”

“No, not this quickly.”

I looked down. Leah's shorts were half unzipped, revealing red panties.

“Well, what do you think happened?” she asked.

“I think you're afraid I'm going to go after someone more sexually daring, like Alice, and you're trying to compete, and that's not a good reason to take your clothes off for me. I love you the way you are, with your clothes on, and I don't want you to give this to me just because you're afraid I'll get it somewhere else if you don't. I already told you, I'd rather be with you and do nothing physical at all than be with anyone else in the world doing anything. I know that's it's—”Leah interrupted me.

“That's not why. I trust you. I know you're not going to go after another girl.”

“Then why? And don't tell me you just suddenly got more comfortable with the idea, because I know you didn't. You've been shaking ever since you tried to take your pants off and your muscles are rock hard. You're no where close to comfortable.”

Leah bit her lip and nodded slowly.

“Okay, I'm not at all comfortable with it. It makes me nervous like you wouldn't believe. But I do want to do it, even though it makes me nervous. Isn't that enough?”

“No.”

“What else do you need?”

“I need to know why you want to do it even though you're nervous.”

“It's just like the first time I went on a roller coaster. I wanted to go, I thought it would be fun, I was excited about it, but I was also really really scared. Eventually I just made myself do it, and you know what? I didn't have fun the first time, but nothing bad happened either, and I got over my fears, and the next time I was a little less nervous and I did have fun. Now I love roller coasters.”

“That's an okay reason, but that's not why you're doing this. Besides, I don't want it to be tense and nervous like that. I want it to be comfortable and natural.”

“How do you know it's not why I want to do this?”

“Because I know you, Leah, and I know when you're hiding something from me.”

Leah sighed and said nothing for a long time.

“I'm right, aren't I?”

“Yea, sorta.”

“Sorta?”

“It's not as much that I'm hiding something from you now as I've always been hiding something, and now I'm not.”

“I don't understand.”

“Why can't I just take off my pants and let that be that?”

“Because I want to know you more than I want to get in your pants. That's the difference between love and lust.”

“Falling in love is harder than I thought. It'd be so much easier if I could just be whoever I wanted to be, whoever you wanted me to be.” Leah looked like she was in pain.

“How about we just try you being who you are?”

Leah looked frantic. “What if you don't like the real me?”

“That's the risk that love takes. Opening up and wondering if you'll be rejected or hurt or betrayed. It's a leap of faith. It's one I've taken towards you, and it's one I'm asking you to take towards me. I can't promise that I'll never hurt you, I'm only human, but I'm pretty sure that whatever side you reveal that I haven't seen isn't going to make me not want to be with you. It will probably make me fall in love with you more. But there is risk in opening up, and I'm asking you to take it for me.”

“So, what exactly do you want to know?”

“Why do you want to take your clothes off all the sudden?”

It took Leah a long time to respond.

Abruptly, Leah started speaking so quickly it took all my concentration to catch all her words.

“It's kinda like what you said. I, umm, haven't been showing you all of me. You know the reserved, conservative, sexually naïve Leah, because, well, that's how I was raised to be around boys, especially boys I like. But when I'm not around boys or my family I'm not like that. It's not that I've been lying to you or anything, I really do have pretty strict morals about sex and stuff, and I am pretty socially conservative and so forth, but well, since I was about 11, I've been developing a more adventurous, rebellious side. That part of me wants to explore and experience new things, and because of that I'm not as naïve as my other half would have you believe. I thought that it was just a phase that would go away, but it's become more and more a part of who I am, and I don't know what to do about that. Part of me wants to grow up to be this quiet, submissive, reclusive, naïve housewife like my mom, but the other part of me wants to explore everything my life could be, swear, drink, smoke pot, go backpacking in Europe, get a high octane business career, marry you and fuck your brains out every single night.”

I stared at Leah in complete shock, it was taking all the effort I could muster to keep my face somewhat calm looking. However, she didn't seem to be finished.

“... And I realize this means I'm not the girl you thought I was when we started dating. I've done all kinds of things in these stupid games my friends play, and every time I hate myself for it, but whenever it comes up I can't say no, and it's just so exciting. I'm a virgin and all, and I've never touched a boy besides you but I'm not pure like you think I am. I guess they would say I'm not a mind virgin. Ever since I met you I have all these fantasies about us doing really dirty stuff, and I keep promising myself that I'll stop, but it's like an addiction and I can't stop. And it's not just sexual stuff, it's really gross, messed up stuff. So, that's the side of me you don't know, and now you probably won't want to be with me, but I figured I should start showing you that side now, because I know you're falling in love with me, and if you're doing that, well, you need to know what you're getting into while you have time to get out. That's why it scares me. So, umm, that's the other half of me...” Leah finished awkwardly.

It took me awhile to speak. “None of this, umm, changes how I feel about you, and I would really like to get to know all the sides of you I can, so, I— umm, would like to get to know your adventurous, more sexual side, if that's okay with you.”

Leah smiled a soft, relieved smile. “Yea, that's okay with me,” she whispered.

“Are you sure you want to go this far tonight?”

“Yes.”

“Okay, if we're going to do this, we're doing it on my terms, my way, got it?”

“I wouldn't want it any other way.”

“Okay, well, that means we're not rushing it, and we're not going to do it with you shaking like you're about to jump out of a plane. It's going to be comfortable and natural.”

“I'm not sure I can just—”

“Trust me, okay? We'll take however much time we need.”

“Okay.”

“Call your parents. Tell them you won't be home tonight because you're sleeping over with one of your girlfriends. I don't want us to have a time limit. My parents are fine, they won't ask questions. That should give us some time and privacy.”

“Okay.”

I went downstairs while Leah called her dad.

“Mom, Leah's going to stay with me tonight, can you make sure to give us some room.”

She looked worried. “Honey, are you sure you're ready for—”

“Mom.”

“Right, give you space, got it.”

“Thanks mom.”

I went back upstairs.

Leah was waiting for me. “My dad says it's fine, so, we should have all night if we need it.”

“Good.” I sat down on my bed. “Now, come lie down.”

The color drained out of Leah's face and she pressed her lips together, but the approached me obediently. She sat down next to me. I put my arm around her, and she stiffened.

“Everything is going to be fine.”

To Be Continued...

BettyBoop · 08-03-2009, 12:52 PM

Brilliant, truly brilliant. I'm liking the direction it's going, the relationship between the two characters and Leah's other side.

Jacques · 08-03-2009, 02:27 PM

I've never posted a comment on a story before, but the psychological side of your characters is really, really good and so different I had to. Your development has been really good, and even if you hadn't intended it to go in the direction it has the thing as a whole fits together really well.

The switching between the two of them and the group worked really well, and I like the way you've held off on explaining his meeting with Alice. You clearly have a bigger picture in mind.

I don't know whether you've thought about it, but if it won't fit in to this story fluidly, you should think about writing a prequel of alice's 'adventurous' side's development when you've completed the part of this story you want to tell.

Dicedarefan666 · 08-03-2009, 02:44 PM

Another fantastic installment, and as always, I can't wait for the next!

Lovesfundares · 08-03-2009, 09:36 PM

i think i might marry your story. just print it and marry it an dmake love to it. it is honestly that good. you give your characters so much life its like reading a book and not porn. i love it =)

norcoatomik · 08-03-2009, 09:39 PM

it was worth the wait

Lolly · 08-04-2009, 12:49 AM

This is a really good story. Unlike most other stories where it's a straight out nudity/sex approach without a good plot to revolve around. This story is like one of those where you start out at the bottom of the mountain and you start progressing up side slowly until you reach the top.
This is in my opinion.

I'm curious about what happened during those few days that you chose to leave out. And what happened during the meeting with Alice?

callofduty4 · 08-05-2009, 08:22 PM

i reall agree with Lovesfundares this is some reall good stuff this is better than my life keep it up

master 4 u · 08-06-2009, 01:51 AM

i usually dont like the soppy side of dares but i have to say i have just read all the chapters of your story so far and am hooked!

why the hell didnt i play truth or dare when i was 16!

guess i'm making up for lost time now!

JK69 · 08-06-2009, 05:26 AM

when are you going to post the next chapter?

07-29-2009, 03:37 PM	#106
Lovesfundares Account Banned Join Date: May 2009 Location: indiana Posts: 263	Once again i fell in love with this, but like previously stated by betty, if he cheats on her ill die, like just drop dead. im in love with this story like i loved twilight and this is almost that good your the next get dare idol WEWT __________________ just bein me =) http://lfd-brodytunis.tumblr.com/

07-29-2009, 06:01 PM	#108
italian99 Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 43	Yeah, if he cheated on Leah it would completely kill the story for me. Great installment by the way. __________________ Likes: Outdoor dares, masturbation, mild pain, mild public Dislikes: Permanent, Family, Poo, Piss, Very Public, Lots of Pain, Anal

07-29-2009, 11:22 PM	#110
Dicedarefan666 getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 403	I love this story and if it were up to me, he would talk with alice about working it out with Leah, and keep it non-sexual not even TorD... but... that's just my opinion... so it's probably wrong. You've written the story VERY well so far, and I trust you'll continue to do so.

08-03-2009, 12:37 PM	#111
quidproquo Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: The US of A Posts: 109	Chapter Eight: Unrevealed Chapter Eight: Unrevealed A few days later... Leah was holding me by the shoulders, trying to get me to look her in the eye. I stared down at the ground. “I don't see why you have a problem with this. Most guys would be thrilled to have their girl take her clothes off. Am I not pretty enough?” She tried to laugh, but her whole body was rigid with tension, and it came out awkwardly, like she had never laughed before. I ignored her comment about her beauty. “I need to know why.” Leah looked surprised. “Why what?” “Listen, Leah, we've been dating for almost a year, and you've hardly ever wanted to do anything physical. You've always been reluctant that way, and I've always been okay with that. What's different?” “Can't I just have gotten more comfortable with you?” “No, not this quickly.” I looked down. Leah's shorts were half unzipped, revealing red panties. “Well, what do you think happened?” she asked. “I think you're afraid I'm going to go after someone more sexually daring, like Alice, and you're trying to compete, and that's not a good reason to take your clothes off for me. I love you the way you are, with your clothes on, and I don't want you to give this to me just because you're afraid I'll get it somewhere else if you don't. I already told you, I'd rather be with you and do nothing physical at all than be with anyone else in the world doing anything. I know that's it's—”Leah interrupted me. “That's not why. I trust you. I know you're not going to go after another girl.” “Then why? And don't tell me you just suddenly got more comfortable with the idea, because I know you didn't. You've been shaking ever since you tried to take your pants off and your muscles are rock hard. You're no where close to comfortable.” Leah bit her lip and nodded slowly. “Okay, I'm not at all comfortable with it. It makes me nervous like you wouldn't believe. But I do want to do it, even though it makes me nervous. Isn't that enough?” “No.” “What else do you need?” “I need to know why you want to do it even though you're nervous.” “It's just like the first time I went on a roller coaster. I wanted to go, I thought it would be fun, I was excited about it, but I was also really really scared. Eventually I just made myself do it, and you know what? I didn't have fun the first time, but nothing bad happened either, and I got over my fears, and the next time I was a little less nervous and I did have fun. Now I love roller coasters.” “That's an okay reason, but that's not why you're doing this. Besides, I don't want it to be tense and nervous like that. I want it to be comfortable and natural.” “How do you know it's not why I want to do this?” “Because I know you, Leah, and I know when you're hiding something from me.” Leah sighed and said nothing for a long time. “I'm right, aren't I?” “Yea, sorta.” “Sorta?” “It's not as much that I'm hiding something from you now as I've always been hiding something, and now I'm not.” “I don't understand.” “Why can't I just take off my pants and let that be that?” “Because I want to know you more than I want to get in your pants. That's the difference between love and lust.” “Falling in love is harder than I thought. It'd be so much easier if I could just be whoever I wanted to be, whoever you wanted me to be.” Leah looked like she was in pain. “How about we just try you being who you are?” Leah looked frantic. “What if you don't like the real me?” “That's the risk that love takes. Opening up and wondering if you'll be rejected or hurt or betrayed. It's a leap of faith. It's one I've taken towards you, and it's one I'm asking you to take towards me. I can't promise that I'll never hurt you, I'm only human, but I'm pretty sure that whatever side you reveal that I haven't seen isn't going to make me not want to be with you. It will probably make me fall in love with you more. But there is risk in opening up, and I'm asking you to take it for me.” “So, what exactly do you want to know?” “Why do you want to take your clothes off all the sudden?” It took Leah a long time to respond. Abruptly, Leah started speaking so quickly it took all my concentration to catch all her words. “It's kinda like what you said. I, umm, haven't been showing you all of me. You know the reserved, conservative, sexually naïve Leah, because, well, that's how I was raised to be around boys, especially boys I like. But when I'm not around boys or my family I'm not like that. It's not that I've been lying to you or anything, I really do have pretty strict morals about sex and stuff, and I am pretty socially conservative and so forth, but well, since I was about 11, I've been developing a more adventurous, rebellious side. That part of me wants to explore and experience new things, and because of that I'm not as naïve as my other half would have you believe. I thought that it was just a phase that would go away, but it's become more and more a part of who I am, and I don't know what to do about that. Part of me wants to grow up to be this quiet, submissive, reclusive, naïve housewife like my mom, but the other part of me wants to explore everything my life could be, swear, drink, smoke pot, go backpacking in Europe, get a high octane business career, marry you and fuck your brains out every single night.” I stared at Leah in complete shock, it was taking all the effort I could muster to keep my face somewhat calm looking. However, she didn't seem to be finished. “... And I realize this means I'm not the girl you thought I was when we started dating. I've done all kinds of things in these stupid games my friends play, and every time I hate myself for it, but whenever it comes up I can't say no, and it's just so exciting. I'm a virgin and all, and I've never touched a boy besides you but I'm not pure like you think I am. I guess they would say I'm not a mind virgin. Ever since I met you I have all these fantasies about us doing really dirty stuff, and I keep promising myself that I'll stop, but it's like an addiction and I can't stop. And it's not just sexual stuff, it's really gross, messed up stuff. So, that's the side of me you don't know, and now you probably won't want to be with me, but I figured I should start showing you that side now, because I know you're falling in love with me, and if you're doing that, well, you need to know what you're getting into while you have time to get out. That's why it scares me. So, umm, that's the other half of me...” Leah finished awkwardly. It took me awhile to speak. “None of this, umm, changes how I feel about you, and I would really like to get to know all the sides of you I can, so, I— umm, would like to get to know your adventurous, more sexual side, if that's okay with you.” Leah smiled a soft, relieved smile. “Yea, that's okay with me,” she whispered. “Are you sure you want to go this far tonight?” “Yes.” “Okay, if we're going to do this, we're doing it on my terms, my way, got it?” “I wouldn't want it any other way.” “Okay, well, that means we're not rushing it, and we're not going to do it with you shaking like you're about to jump out of a plane. It's going to be comfortable and natural.” “I'm not sure I can just—” “Trust me, okay? We'll take however much time we need.” “Okay.” “Call your parents. Tell them you won't be home tonight because you're sleeping over with one of your girlfriends. I don't want us to have a time limit. My parents are fine, they won't ask questions. That should give us some time and privacy.” “Okay.” I went downstairs while Leah called her dad. “Mom, Leah's going to stay with me tonight, can you make sure to give us some room.” She looked worried. “Honey, are you sure you're ready for—” “Mom.” “Right, give you space, got it.” “Thanks mom.” I went back upstairs. Leah was waiting for me. “My dad says it's fine, so, we should have all night if we need it.” “Good.” I sat down on my bed. “Now, come lie down.” The color drained out of Leah's face and she pressed her lips together, but the approached me obediently. She sat down next to me. I put my arm around her, and she stiffened. “Everything is going to be fine.” To Be Continued...

08-03-2009, 12:52 PM	#112
BettyBoop Angel of Dare Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: England. Posts: 8,249 Blog Entries: 105	Brilliant, truly brilliant. I'm liking the direction it's going, the relationship between the two characters and Leah's other side. __________________ ★Boop Boop de Boop.★ female, engurrland. Ask me anything, click. My tumblr. 18+ ▼

08-03-2009, 02:27 PM	#113
Jacques Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: UK Posts: 568 Blog Entries: 6	I've never posted a comment on a story before, but the psychological side of your characters is really, really good and so different I had to. Your development has been really good, and even if you hadn't intended it to go in the direction it has the thing as a whole fits together really well. The switching between the two of them and the group worked really well, and I like the way you've held off on explaining his meeting with Alice. You clearly have a bigger picture in mind. I don't know whether you've thought about it, but if it won't fit in to this story fluidly, you should think about writing a prequel of alice's 'adventurous' side's development when you've completed the part of this story you want to tell. __________________ "All the world's a stage..." The MERICALE of LIFF!!! Betty Boop: "The Man. The Myth. The Legend. You're awesome."

08-03-2009, 02:44 PM	#114
Dicedarefan666 getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 403	Wow Another fantastic installment, and as always, I can't wait for the next!

08-03-2009, 09:36 PM	#115
Lovesfundares Account Banned Join Date: May 2009 Location: indiana Posts: 263	i think i might marry your story. just print it and marry it an dmake love to it. it is honestly that good. you give your characters so much life its like reading a book and not porn. i love it =) __________________ just bein me =) http://lfd-brodytunis.tumblr.com/

08-03-2009, 09:39 PM	#116
norcoatomik Distinguished Member Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: canada Posts: 732	it was worth the wait

08-04-2009, 12:49 AM	#117
Lolly getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Nowhere in particular Posts: 456 Blog Entries: 11	This is a really good story. Unlike most other stories where it's a straight out nudity/sex approach without a good plot to revolve around. This story is like one of those where you start out at the bottom of the mountain and you start progressing up side slowly until you reach the top. This is in my opinion. I'm curious about what happened during those few days that you chose to leave out. And what happened during the meeting with Alice? __________________ Peanut butter jelly time! Do you want fries with that?

08-05-2009, 08:22 PM	#118
callofduty4 Member Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: dont worry Posts: 76	i reall agree with Lovesfundares this is some reall good stuff this is better than my life keep it up

08-06-2009, 01:51 AM	#119
master 4 u Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: UK Posts: 9	awesome i usually dont like the soppy side of dares but i have to say i have just read all the chapters of your story so far and am hooked! why the hell didnt i play truth or dare when i was 16! guess i'm making up for lost time now!

08-06-2009, 05:26 AM	#120
JK69 Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 2	when are you going to post the next chapter?