This babysitting job isn't working out... (Fiction)

[HSsportsstar 1]

gotcha, wont happen again, and thanks for the story, hope your next one will written just as well

[daremenudeguy]

wat its over!?!? ive been following this for a while and if its possible could you continue ealir than a month

[wicked]

Thanks for the ratings =)


I may or may not start earlier then a month. When I said 'month', that was just an estimate

[Elin0553]

I just luv it so much Mabey its 'cause I like going comando..

lol

[erick92]

Very good ending. I must say to be 100% honest, your overall writing has gotten a lot better from your first post to your last. From when I commented on you going into unneeded detail to now where any detail you do go into lets you picture the whole story in your head without getting worthless things that don't help to make that picture.

This story actually let me make the whole thing happen in my head. Every single part you can see and you can paint it in your head making almost a movie while reading. It just makes the story so much better and easier to follow. Kudos to you wicked. Very well done story, I really hope to see your second one develop.
10/10

[wicked]

Thanks Erick =D





*makes post longer so that this can be posted*

[Dare861]

Impressive story.

- DareDude861
Back from inactivity

[ccent]

good 5 star love it

[adammareno]

please continue the story

[wicked]

Thanks guys =)


As long as it has been bumped, I'd just like to say I'll be adding another part soon. And soon, as in when my other story has more in it.

[wicked]

Expect an update here within a week

[blueboy]

Amazing story! Please post the edition segment soon, b/c I cannot wait to read it. Keep up the great work.

[Person]

Okay... make another edition to it, because that was a stupid ending, no offense...

[wicked]

I wrote four or five pages, and I'll be showing only some of it:

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Well, here I am, risking my dignity! I had to escape from her... she went crazy... Felicia doofus. Well... I was winning for half of the fight, but then she started getting insane and.. yeah... you know what she did? She made me shave all my body hair and everything this morning... whatever.
I'm driving to Sharon's house, naked. Felicia said she would bring my clothes over... but... I just now realize she's probably lying...
Well, I arrive in Sharon's driveway. I get out and walk up to the front door. I ring the doorbell, open the door and walk inside, and shut it behind me. “Hello. Sharon?”
Yeah, my dick raised a little and increased in size but it isn't hard... yet...
Then I heard someone walking up to me, and then I saw Sharon in purple jeans and a blue Hello kitty t-shirt, with black sneakers.
“Oh, hey Greg.”
She blushed a little. “Why are you naked?”
“It's a long story..”
“Well.. um... it's kinda a bad time...”
“Why?”
“Don't you remember!?”
“Um...”
Oh my god...
“My mom told you when you agreed to baby sit!”
“Damn... what... was it?”
“I'm having a slumber party..?”
DDDAAAAAAAMMMMNN!!!!!!
“DDAAAAAAAAMMMMNNNN!!!!!”
And she was laughing at how terrified and embarrassed I looked....
Wait... this is really stupid how I ended up naked! Who did this to me?!!
Then Sharon said “The guy who wrote it...”
And I said “...what?”
“Sharon, who is here?”
And I covered up my dick&balls with my hands... except it is hard to do that when it is hard...
Sharon gestured 'Don't worry about it...'
And I had an expression on my face that said 'What?'
And then some random 9 year old girl was standing next to Sharon.
DDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMMMMNNNNNIIITTTTTTTTT!!!!!!
She giggled... “Who is that?”
“This is Greg, our babysitter.”
“Him!!?” She couldn't stop looking at me... DAMN!!
Which I can't cover up very well!
“Yeah.. he... um... doesn't like clothes very well.”
“Sharon!!”
“Hey girls! Come meet our cute babysitter!”
“That's it! I'm leaving!”
I walked to the door and opened it, walked out and slammed it behind me.
Stupid frikkin kids!
I was stomping up to my car when I heard the house door open.
“Greg!”
I ignored her. I opened the car and looked for something to cover myself up with inside it..
“Hey, Greg! I'm sorry!”
...and all I could find was this book I never read, an empty coffee container, and a newspaper. I took the coffee container and covered myself.
“Greg! Please come back inside!”
I shut the door and walked to the porch.. I may look stupid, but I'm tired of all these kids seeing me nude...
Sharon laughed.
“Sharon, if I'm babysitting you and... how many?”
“Me and six friends.”
“What the hell!”
“Sorry...” she laughed...
“If I'm babysitting naked, then you and your friends have to do what I say!”
“Um.. sure... one minute...”
She went inside and left the door open a couple inches...
This is frikkin humiliating!
“What?”
“Is he really naked!?”
....
“Like what?”
....
“What if he...”
“But...”
...
“Okay!”
....
and Sharon came back out...
“What the hell were you and them blabbing about!”
“Greg... we promise to not bug you. We will leave you alone and not look at you or talk about you being naked!”
“You promise!”
“Yes.”
“It's okay! We like our sitters naked!”
Sharon turned around..laughed..went inside and I heard her say something but too much of those annoying little girl laughing noises to hear.....
And she came back out.
“Okay, well.. come on in Greg.”
“And they agree to do whatever I say!”
“Just as long as we don't get in trouble or hurt!”
“Whatever...”
I came inside leaving the coffee container on me...
And the first thing I see is seven friggin little girls all aged around 8-10....
They were all blushing, and four of them trying not to look...
“Don't mind us Greg... we'll... just be in the living room!”
Whoever said that... sounded suspicious.... and they all left, five of them looking at me while leaving...
This is bullshit!
I looked around this room to see if the phone was on the hook.. Where is the damn phone hook or whatever you call i-there it is!
Damn it! It's not on there!
And I looked around the room to see where it could be!
“No Stephanie! Don't tell anyone to come over!”
I immediately turned my head and saw this damned 9 year old holding a phone in the kitchen at the end of the hallway.
“Okay! I won't!”
“You pinky promise!”
“Yes Sharon!”
And they did something with their pinky's.
I speed walked to her holding the coffee container over me...
“Hey! Don't even call anyone!”
“Why not?”
“Because I'm the sitter here, and you have to do what I say!”
“Okay okay!”
“Can I just have the phone?”
“Why?”
“Because I need to make a call!”
“Who?”
“It doesn't matter who! Just give me it!”
“How are you supposed to hold it with that coffee container on your wiener?” And a giggle...
“I'll take it with one hand!”
“Okay...”
She suspiciously-like handed me the phone... I reached out my arm.... I took it... and then she hit the container! And it fell to the floor...
They all laughed at once, and laughed harder at the sight of my.... whatever! I tried to keep cool and not make it look like I was embarrassed! walked back to the other end of the hall and just dialed Felicia's number!
Ring... second ring... third ring.... fourth ring... fifth ring.... answering machine...
“Damn!”
I tried her cell...
Ring.... second ring... ring three.... ring.... another ring... lost count.... voice mail....
“Felicia! Hey, sorry about what happened! Look, could you stop by and drop off my clothes? Thanks!”
I hung up... but then I picked up the phone, checked the battery, full, and hid it under a cushion on a chair... and then I put it under the living chair... or whatever you call 'em. I quickly checked to see if any of the stupid kids saw me... I didn't see anyone...
I walked through the hall with my half-erect penis with my jiggling balls... and I slowed down... and looked around... no one here... then I noticed movement in the living room. All seven of the girls were in there doing something. So I went into the bathroom to grab a-
“What the hell!”
They took the towels! What gives!
I was so friggin pissed! I looked around the bathroom and the kitchen.... but most everything to cover myself up with was taken... but I found a pan... I used that!
I walked to the girls to yell at them!
“Ewwww!! Don't put the the pan there!”
“Gross! Ew, Sharon!!”
“What?”
“Look!”
“Well, give him something else!”
“But you said to take everything!”
“Hey!”
“SHARON!! Why would you do that!!”
“I'm sorry! It's just funny.”
“Yeah, that is REAL funny! Cut the crap and hand me a pillow!”
Sharon tossed a pillow. I caught it, turned around and dropped the pan on the carpet.
“So who wants to play truth or dare!”

[Officelover]

Please, keep going, keep going! This is absolutely awesome! I want MORE!