Incident At School [FICTION] - Page 6

molten man · 07-30-2007, 09:22 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sonshinegirl653

just take your time (even though the wait it excruciating) because im sure it will be worth it after the long, hard wait.

i would second that!!

Gotmilk272727 · 08-15-2007, 01:39 PM

i really dont mean to nag but the wait is just to much! youre such an awsome writer

molten man · 08-15-2007, 09:37 PM

hey anonimousbob.. the waiting has gone on for eternity now. please write soon..

Thanks

anonimousbob · 08-24-2007, 01:40 AM

I'll try, but I am still busy. Feel free to send me any ideas you think would go well in the story

the dude · 08-29-2007, 09:56 AM

dude i underdtand how it is to be busy becuz i havnt been on since april and all these ppl keep complaining that its been too long since i wrote anything but i just added another part to my favorite 1 i wrote alled my crazy girlfriends problem and it was good becuz i had a few months to think of ideas and it was better than if i would have wrote it right away!So yall stop bothering him to write more becuz it'll be better if he has more time for ideas!

molten man · 08-29-2007, 10:20 PM

hey anonimousbob.. Have your exams finished and u busy with other things?? or exams are still on??

gotmilk727272 · 08-30-2007, 03:59 PM

this story is awsome

anonimousbob · 09-11-2007, 10:49 AM

I'm having some time issues right now and don't know how to continue. If anyone wants to try carrying it on, please feel free to. I might later post how I would have finished it

molten man · 09-21-2007, 11:50 PM

k. no promlemo. But please continue this story at a later stage!!

gotmilk727272 · 10-21-2007, 09:12 PM

i geuss your done this now?

anonimousbob · 10-22-2007, 01:15 AM

I am still busy and haven't had any good ideas. Other people can continue if they want

Marc · 10-22-2007, 10:45 AM

As mentioned elsewhere by someone else, this does irritate me. Please can authors have an idea of how to finish their stories, or at least be able to end their story - there is no need to have an open-ended story (unless it is an 'interactive' one like the current 'Ten Words only' story)!

Thanks!

anonimousbob · 10-23-2007, 02:03 AM

I did have a general idea of how it would end, but had not specifically filled out the detail. Besides, I am very busy as I have said and originally started writing this for fun, posting it here to see what people thought of it rather than writing it for the site from the start

molten man · 10-25-2007, 10:09 PM

kk. anonimousbob. Please be free as soon as posible and complete this syory!!

anonimousbob · 10-26-2007, 04:38 PM

I finally got some spare time and had a go at continuing

Gemma removed her fingers and I was left with my thoughts for a while. Today was the last day of the trip, and I was sure it would be the worst, afterall they would want to make the most of the last opportunity to toy with me.

For our last day we were going to an amusement park, a fun last day of recreation and as far as I saw it, a multitude of opportunities for pain and humiliation. We left around 10ish with me stuck in a tight thong, in a wedgie of course, and a large bra beneath my usual clothes, I also had the usual duty of carrying my mistresses’ bags, fearing what was within them.

The coach ride was to last an hour, and I spent much of that time with my trousers down in an attempt to humiliate me in some way. I would have felt immune to this, but with so many of my school colleagues on the coach I couldn’t help but feel vulnerable despite the 2 empty rows in front of us.

When we finally arrived and got through the queue I was taken straight to the toilets, girls’ obviously, and told to get changed.

I know it’s short, but this sets up the next bit, I will try and do some more

08-15-2007, 09:37 PM	#78
molten man Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Mumbai, India Posts: 946	hey anonimousbob.. the waiting has gone on for eternity now. please write soon.. Thanks __________________ MMan 26/m/straight Skype: molten_man007 Kik: molten_man

08-24-2007, 01:40 AM	#79
anonimousbob Distinguished Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: UK Posts: 918 Blog Entries: 5	I'll try, but I am still busy. Feel free to send me any ideas you think would go well in the story __________________ 27/M/GMT Ask me anything http://anonimousbob.tumblr.com/ask yes: secluded public, crossdressing,, chastity sexual, anal (including enemas if you want), slight pain, anything else not on the above list I can't think of right now no: openly public/involving others, bodily waste, extreme pain Add me at [email protected] Check out my profile and album on Kinktalk I am looking for a mistress to serve right now

08-29-2007, 09:56 AM	#80
the dude Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Up ur girlfriends a*s Posts: 120	dude i underdtand how it is to be busy becuz i havnt been on since april and all these ppl keep complaining that its been too long since i wrote anything but i just added another part to my favorite 1 i wrote alled my crazy girlfriends problem and it was good becuz i had a few months to think of ideas and it was better than if i would have wrote it right away!So yall stop bothering him to write more becuz it'll be better if he has more time for ideas! __________________ You have 2 choices in the world.To be afraid of what's in the darkness. Or to be whats in the darkness to be afraid of... I AM THE DARKNESS www.myspace.com/jess_is_that_dude

08-29-2007, 10:20 PM	#81
molten man Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Mumbai, India Posts: 946	hey anonimousbob.. Have your exams finished and u busy with other things?? or exams are still on?? __________________ MMan 26/m/straight Skype: molten_man007 Kik: molten_man

09-11-2007, 10:49 AM	#83
anonimousbob Distinguished Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: UK Posts: 918 Blog Entries: 5	I'm having some time issues right now and don't know how to continue. If anyone wants to try carrying it on, please feel free to. I might later post how I would have finished it __________________ 27/M/GMT Ask me anything http://anonimousbob.tumblr.com/ask yes: secluded public, crossdressing,, chastity sexual, anal (including enemas if you want), slight pain, anything else not on the above list I can't think of right now no: openly public/involving others, bodily waste, extreme pain Add me at [email protected] Check out my profile and album on Kinktalk I am looking for a mistress to serve right now

08-15-2007, 01:39 PM	#77
Gotmilk272727 Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: poco,B.C,Canada Posts: 14	i really dont mean to nag but the wait is just to much! youre such an awsome writer

08-30-2007, 03:59 PM	#82
gotmilk727272 Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 5	this story is awsome

09-21-2007, 11:50 PM	#84
molten man Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Mumbai, India Posts: 946	k. no promlemo. But please continue this story at a later stage!! __________________ MMan 26/m/straight Skype: molten_man007 Kik: molten_man

10-21-2007, 09:12 PM	#85
gotmilk727272 Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 5	i geuss your done this now?

10-22-2007, 01:15 AM	#86
anonimousbob Distinguished Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: UK Posts: 918 Blog Entries: 5	I am still busy and haven't had any good ideas. Other people can continue if they want __________________ 27/M/GMT Ask me anything http://anonimousbob.tumblr.com/ask yes: secluded public, crossdressing,, chastity sexual, anal (including enemas if you want), slight pain, anything else not on the above list I can't think of right now no: openly public/involving others, bodily waste, extreme pain Add me at [email protected] Check out my profile and album on Kinktalk I am looking for a mistress to serve right now

10-22-2007, 10:45 AM	#87
Marc Warning: Contains Nuts Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: London/Berkshire, UK Posts: 1,097	As mentioned elsewhere by someone else, this does irritate me. Please can authors have an idea of how to finish their stories, or at least be able to end their story - there is no need to have an open-ended story (unless it is an 'interactive' one like the current 'Ten Words only' story)! Thanks! __________________ Hugs! Marc Warning: May contain nuts. Likes: CFNM, WaM, Zentai, nudity, Cuffed, life model, body painting model, live TorD, being a naked chauffeur, to be continued.... Limits: No family, no work, no illegal, nothing beyond end of session, social suicide, swapping likes for dislikes, account control, to be continued... Dislikes: Anal, blood, scat, to be continued... https://www.zeemaps.com/map?group=150827 KIK: CFNM_Woody (mention getDare) Vote on my current poll, please

10-23-2007, 02:03 AM	#88
anonimousbob Distinguished Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: UK Posts: 918 Blog Entries: 5	I did have a general idea of how it would end, but had not specifically filled out the detail. Besides, I am very busy as I have said and originally started writing this for fun, posting it here to see what people thought of it rather than writing it for the site from the start __________________ 27/M/GMT Ask me anything http://anonimousbob.tumblr.com/ask yes: secluded public, crossdressing,, chastity sexual, anal (including enemas if you want), slight pain, anything else not on the above list I can't think of right now no: openly public/involving others, bodily waste, extreme pain Add me at [email protected] Check out my profile and album on Kinktalk I am looking for a mistress to serve right now

10-25-2007, 10:09 PM	#89
molten man Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Mumbai, India Posts: 946	kk. anonimousbob. Please be free as soon as posible and complete this syory!! __________________ MMan 26/m/straight Skype: molten_man007 Kik: molten_man

10-26-2007, 04:38 PM	#90
anonimousbob Distinguished Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: UK Posts: 918 Blog Entries: 5	I finally got some spare time and had a go at continuing Gemma removed her fingers and I was left with my thoughts for a while. Today was the last day of the trip, and I was sure it would be the worst, afterall they would want to make the most of the last opportunity to toy with me. For our last day we were going to an amusement park, a fun last day of recreation and as far as I saw it, a multitude of opportunities for pain and humiliation. We left around 10ish with me stuck in a tight thong, in a wedgie of course, and a large bra beneath my usual clothes, I also had the usual duty of carrying my mistresses’ bags, fearing what was within them. The coach ride was to last an hour, and I spent much of that time with my trousers down in an attempt to humiliate me in some way. I would have felt immune to this, but with so many of my school colleagues on the coach I couldn’t help but feel vulnerable despite the 2 empty rows in front of us. When we finally arrived and got through the queue I was taken straight to the toilets, girls’ obviously, and told to get changed. I know it’s short, but this sets up the next bit, I will try and do some more __________________ 27/M/GMT Ask me anything http://anonimousbob.tumblr.com/ask yes: secluded public, crossdressing,, chastity sexual, anal (including enemas if you want), slight pain, anything else not on the above list I can't think of right now no: openly public/involving others, bodily waste, extreme pain Add me at [email protected] Check out my profile and album on Kinktalk I am looking for a mistress to serve right now