♥ Strip Poker with a Twist --- the Aftermath ♥

[Davestrippoker]

Great part and as above said, love the teaser cliffhangers even if can be agonising at times. keep up the good work

[shaggy.canada]

thanks Rachie great chapter

[Blue Balloon]

Don't want to ruffle any feathers but....
People - this is not one of the best written stories on here. It is not always filled with 'great chapters'. This story - particularly this installment - is one that is solely popular because of the previous issues. Parts One and Two were good - but not great. They deserved reads - but not two million. The sole reason for their popularity was the games located within. If you want to play games, buy an X-Box. This is, last time I checked, a forum for posting stories. Speaking of stories - there are better ones out there. Check out Leopard's stories for example - great prose, great content, lots of views. And it is achieved without the cheap gimmick of 'games' and 'contests'. Again, don't take this too personally everyone. The stories are better than anything I could write.... actually no they're not. They're decent stories, but ones that do not, in anyway, deserve the absurd amount of attention they have gotten. Thank you for reading.

RACHIE EDIT

Everyones entitled to an opinion and i agree that Leo's story is far better (in my opinion) Leo's a good friend and has helped me out a loads on here. (As i did with the start of his story)

REF LEO'S STORY

Originally Posted by Rachie

Spent around 90minutes reading. Fantastic story, Can't wait for you to send me more.

Any help required feel free to ask.

(Don't wish to give the story away)

RATED 5 STARS

Love Rachie
x x x x

I wouldn't call myself a writer and have previously said, the only reason this story started was as a dare and has continued with readers support. I'm Dyslexic and story writing has helped me in many ways. However as you state there are better written stories due to this.

[italia13calcio]

Originally Posted by Blue Balloon

Don't want to ruffle any feathers but....
People - this is not one of the best written stories on here. It is not always filled with 'great chapters'. This story - particularly this installment - is one that is solely popular because of the previous issues. Parts One and Two were good - but not great. They deserved reads - but not two million. The sole reason for their popularity was the games located within. If you want to play games, buy an X-Box. This is, last time I checked, a forum for posting stories. Speaking of stories - there are better ones out there. Check out Leopard's stories for example - great prose, great content, lots of views. And it is achieved without the cheap gimmick of 'games' and 'contests'. Again, don't take this too personally everyone. The stories are better than anything I could write.... actually no they're not. They're decent stories, but ones that do not, in anyway, deserve the absurd amount of attention they have gotten. Thank you for reading.

This is absurd.... you are clearly jealous of Rachel's popularity.... if you can write a better story, why dont you?

[owlart]

Thanks RACHIE, good Chapter, Amber's going to have to sit out the pain for longer. The pain when they get taken off is going to be even more though!

[Lincoln.Amber]

Take no notice of the jelous person, your stories and puzzles are a great addition to getdare. cant wait for more

[princessjessie]

very sexy and much enjoyed reading it, love you rachel xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

[12356416514a]

@Blue Balloon:

I would thank him for his opinion. Negative comments are good too, you can use them to improve yourself. I wouldn't just mark him as a troll as others might do.

Originally Posted by Blue Balloon

Don't want to ruffle any feathers but....
People - this is not one of the best written stories on here.

I think it is the best written story on here. I have read some of the others and most of them are boring or they aren't finished.

Originally Posted by Blue Balloon

It is not always filled with 'great chapters'. This story - particularly this installment - is one that is solely popular because of the previous issues. Parts One and Two were good - but not great. They deserved reads - but not two million.

Well, I don't know. It's really not always filled with good chapters. Sometimes there are like 3 or 5 parts in a row that are really boring. You wait like days for the next chapters and then it is boring like hell.

Honestly, I don't know why this story is so popular. I mean I liked it from the beginning and it has almost everything I like. First I wasn't sure if I should like it or not, because of that incest parts in the beginning. They are kinda weird and I wasn't sure if I should like them or not. I decided to read the rest and I like it now. Weird is not always bad, sometimes weird is good. I like the weird chapters.

I think this story has so many clicks because I spend a lot of time in it. I viewed it a lot to check if the new part was released and also made some backups, just in case of "no internet". If you go to literotice.com you will find stories that are better written and they have less clicks.

The 2 million views shouldn't bother you. The stories on this site have so many views because they are updated so slowly. Other sites just release the stories in one day or they release like 20 parts at once. You click those stories once or twice but this has to be checked every day for updates. And you also have to browse forward and backwards to find the parts because others answer too.

Originally Posted by Blue Balloon

The sole reason for their popularity was the games located within. If you want to play games, buy an X-Box.

I don't understand what you try to say. What games do you mean? The puzzles? Puzzles are lame.

Ohh and btw, a computer is better for games then a xbox 360 or ps3.

Originally Posted by Blue Balloon

This is, last time I checked, a forum for posting stories.

c'mon, there are a lot of great forums for stories. Most of the story archives delete their stories after some years and those forums bring them up again. Most of the good stories are published in 2000-2006, most of them are lost.

Originally Posted by Blue Balloon

Speaking of stories - there are better ones out there. Check out Leopard's stories for example - great prose, great content, lots of views. And it is achieved without the cheap gimmick of 'games' and 'contests'. Again, don't take this too personally everyone. The stories are better than anything I could write.... actually no they're not. They're decent stories, but ones that do not, in anyway, deserve the absurd amount of attention they have gotten. Thank you for reading.

Maybe this story gets so much attention because the poster is female? Just give it a try, create a fake profile and say that you are a girl, all the other users will jump on you.

I don't like Leopards stories, I think this story is better.

Anyway, thank you for you opinion, it's good to read something new and fresh. I think you already noticed it, the others only say things like "great...waiting for more"

Well I hope you are not mad at me Rachie This was meant in a friendly way.

RACHIE EDIT

I'm never mad with comments, and agree with a lot of what has been said. (I don't write the story/update the story just to say that its had so many views lol) Thank you for the feedback

Love Rachie
x x x x

[slutjuice]

Not at all the places I was expecting, for the pegs, nicely written Rachie, and funny idea, whoever got the stars!

[12356416514a]

If I had retrieved that message I would answer: Pussy, Asshole.

Rachie Edit

This was the same picture sent to J.M.N around a month ago with little/no other information, these were the two areas he specified.

[blue eyes]

I was expecting either tits pussy or ass. Who was the player that won, would love to have seen it happen though. Still a great story in my opinion no matter what some think

[Cute emma]

Love the attention to detail you always give. great graphic and an intense part again.

[Clarabelle]

I agree with RACHIE that everyone is entitled to their opinion but i don't keep coming back for the competitions they are a nice addition but I keep coming back for the addictive chapters and storyline

[J.M.N]

Great new chapter RACHIE and yes i was given the message, but i had no idea what the reason behind it was, it could've been anything

[12356416514a]

RACHIE EDIT

I'm never mad with comments, and agree with a lot of what has been said. (I don't write the story/update the story just to say that its had so many views lol) Thank you for the feedback

Love Rachie
x x x x

Well thank you for being so friendly

This was the same picture sent to J.M.N around a month ago with little/no other information, these were the two areas he specified.

And thank you for keeping it close to the original