Fiction: Mark's Babysitting Adventure - Page 4

Demon Thief · 01-07-2010, 11:23 AM

Part 10

Mark walked back to Alex, certain that whatever Alex had to show him could not be anything good. He had gotten himself out of a sticky situation, but now it looked like his freedom wouldn't last for long.
Alex once again held up his phone. Mark looked at it and saw a picture of himself naked. He got angry and looked at Alex with hatred in his eyes.
"What the hell! Why did you take another picture of me?!" Mark shouted.
"Well, you were going to win, so I wanted to keep you for a while. Don't worry, I'll delete this one on Sunday." Alex said.
"You promise?" Mark asked, defeated.
"I promise," Alex answered. "Don't worry, I won't have you do anything else tonight. The only thing I want you to do is go to bed as the same time as us, and to wear whatever I give you. Now leave."
Mark walked out of Alex's room and looked at his watch. It was quarter after eight. Plenty of time to think of a plan. He headed downstairs and saw Steven watching cartoons on TV. Mark nodded to him and sat down in an armchair furthest away from the TV.
For an hour Mark thought of ways to get even with Alex and Zack. Finally, at 9:30, he had come up with the perfect plan. The only problem was that he wouldneed help carrying this out. But who to ask? Most of his friends were busy, and even if they weren't, Mark didn't want to involve them in this. His only visible option was to try and win Steven to his side. He looked up and saw Alex and Zack were nowhere in sight, but Steven was still watching TV. He opened his mouth to get Steven's attention, but before he could say anything, he heard footsteps coming down the stairs.
Mark closed his mouth as Alex and Zach entered the living room. Alex announced, "It's nearly bedtime. Right, Mark?"
"Right," Mark agreed. It was near the bedtime Linda had told him. He and Steven got up and headed upstairs with Alex and Zach. As they headed up, Zack gave Mark a small bundle of clothes and whispered that he had to wear those for the rest of the night.
At the top of the stairs, Mark asked where the guest room was, but Alex said, "You have to sleep in Steven's room tonight."
"What!" Steven exclaimed. "I don't want him in my room."
"Let him sleep with you, or else," Alex said.
"Fine. This way, Mark," Steven said, taking his hand and leading him down the hall, but not as far as Alex's room.

DareMad · 01-07-2010, 12:23 PM

what are the clothes!!!!!

misspiggy7 · 01-07-2010, 05:38 PM

dang! u always leave us hanging write more soon plz!

Demon Thief · 01-10-2010, 11:16 PM

I'll write more soon. Don't worry, I won't leave you all hanging for too much longer.

MasterOmega · 01-11-2010, 04:51 AM

Just read this story through, this is awesome. Nice twists, although I was a bit dissapointed to find that you used the same thing twice (being black-mailed by picture twice). Ohterwise, nice punctuation, grammar ect. I have subscribed, so you better get writing.

Demon Thief · 01-11-2010, 10:16 PM

I didn't mean to use the same thing twice, but what I originally had planned didn't work out too well with the rest of the story. Don't worry, it probably won't happen again.

Continuing from where I left off...

Part 11

As Steven starting leading Mark to his room, Alex tapped him on his shoulder and pointed toward the bathroom, telling him to change there.
Mark had no choice but to obey, so he headed toward the bathroom, leaving all three boys in the hall waiting for him.
Once inside, he took his first good look at the bundle of clothes he was holding. They were pajama bottoms and a top, both colored blue with various cartoon characters on them. Mark was shocked as he held them up to see them better when a small object fell out of the pj's onto the floor. He bent down to pick it up when he realized it was a pair of white briefs.
Mrk knew he had to wear these, so he just gritted his teeth and changed into the briefs and pj's. They were all uncomfortable on him, but they still fit. Then he went back out into the hall after using the toilet.
Alex and Zack started laughing their heads off as soon as Mark stepped into the hallway, but Steven didn't make a sound. Mark guessed he was a victim of more humiliating stunts than this. This meant that he was probably one step closer to getting Steven on his side and getting revenge on Alex and Zack.
Steven led Mark into his room, and the other boys followed. Alex said, "Since you both pretty much have to do as I say, you'll both sleep together tonight. I suggest that you two get plenty of sleep. We have a lot in store for you two tomorrow." Zack nodded in agreement, but Mark, while looking at him, could see that Zack looked a little uncomfortable with everything that was happening. Could it be that Zack was also under Alex's control? He had no way of knowing or finding out.
Mark and Steven got into the only bed in the room, which was barely big wnough for both of them. As Alex and Zack left, Alex said, "I'll be checking on you at random times during the night, so if I catch either one of you out of bed, you'll both have to do a major punishment in the morning."
"What if I have to go to the bathroom?" Steven asked.
"Then you have to hold it," Alex answered, as he left the room.
Aw crap! This is SO not worth fifty bucks!, Mark thought.

MasterOmega · 01-12-2010, 03:19 AM

Nice update, but this does kinda push the limits of my morals a bit. A 16 yr old boy sleeping with an 8 yr old boy? This just sounds wrong in my opinion, but it's still appealing in a perverted kinda way.

Still, can't wait for the next update.

William · 01-12-2010, 05:46 AM

This story keeps geting better don't stop I like it but needs more crazy dares like anything that would b heaps good

will9022 · 01-12-2010, 04:25 PM

this story is great! and wh cares if a 16 year old and an 8 year old are sharing a bd, they arent "doing" anything. Please continue when you get the chance!

MasterOmega · 01-12-2010, 08:59 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by will9022

this story is great! and wh cares if a 16 year old and an 8 year old are sharing a bd, they arent "doing" anything. Please continue when you get the chance!

All I was saying is that this goes against my morals a little bit. No need to be so obnoxious. People do have different opinions than yours, and I would like it if you could respect them.

xava · 01-12-2010, 11:32 PM

this story is really good

id love more regular posts though :P

and the age thing i didnt pick up on i just made my own ages i think haha but yeah everyone has their opinions and morals and all should respect that

jambalaya · 01-13-2010, 07:19 AM

I don't want to be pushy here, but this story is too good to be less than an epic. I suggest you make this as long as you can. This is just too great that I can't say every complement that I can think off. This is just great. Great Job!

Demon Thief · 01-13-2010, 02:40 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by MasterOmega

Nice update, but this does kinda push the limits of my morals a bit. A 16 yr old boy sleeping with an 8 yr old boy? This just sounds wrong in my opinion, but it's still appealing in a perverted kinda way.

Still, can't wait for the next update.

I apologize if it goes against your morals, but it's not like they want to do this. I'm not a fan of those type of things myself, so fear not, nothing perverted is going to happen. All this is doing is uniting both boys closer together to get back at the one brother.

I thought I'd get that out now.

jambalaya · 01-13-2010, 05:16 PM

Please do as you please. With all due respect to the opinions of the people in this community, it is still good if you make this as good as you possibly can. I highly commend this story, do not fear to explore your imagination. But yeah, kudos to everyone's opinion. And more kudos to this story.

MasterOmega · 01-13-2010, 10:52 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Demon Thief

I apologize if it goes against your morals, but it's not like they want to do this. I'm not a fan of those type of things myself, so fear not, nothing perverted is going to happen. All this is doing is uniting both boys closer together to get back at the one brother.

I thought I'd get that out now.

Lol, you don't need to apologize. I understand that you are just using it as a plot device.

When can we expect the next update?

01-07-2010, 11:23 AM	#46
Demon Thief getDare Devil Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: In the US Posts: 1,013	Part 10 Mark walked back to Alex, certain that whatever Alex had to show him could not be anything good. He had gotten himself out of a sticky situation, but now it looked like his freedom wouldn't last for long. Alex once again held up his phone. Mark looked at it and saw a picture of himself naked. He got angry and looked at Alex with hatred in his eyes. "What the hell! Why did you take another picture of me?!" Mark shouted. "Well, you were going to win, so I wanted to keep you for a while. Don't worry, I'll delete this one on Sunday." Alex said. "You promise?" Mark asked, defeated. "I promise," Alex answered. "Don't worry, I won't have you do anything else tonight. The only thing I want you to do is go to bed as the same time as us, and to wear whatever I give you. Now leave." Mark walked out of Alex's room and looked at his watch. It was quarter after eight. Plenty of time to think of a plan. He headed downstairs and saw Steven watching cartoons on TV. Mark nodded to him and sat down in an armchair furthest away from the TV. For an hour Mark thought of ways to get even with Alex and Zack. Finally, at 9:30, he had come up with the perfect plan. The only problem was that he wouldneed help carrying this out. But who to ask? Most of his friends were busy, and even if they weren't, Mark didn't want to involve them in this. His only visible option was to try and win Steven to his side. He looked up and saw Alex and Zack were nowhere in sight, but Steven was still watching TV. He opened his mouth to get Steven's attention, but before he could say anything, he heard footsteps coming down the stairs. Mark closed his mouth as Alex and Zach entered the living room. Alex announced, "It's nearly bedtime. Right, Mark?" "Right," Mark agreed. It was near the bedtime Linda had told him. He and Steven got up and headed upstairs with Alex and Zach. As they headed up, Zack gave Mark a small bundle of clothes and whispered that he had to wear those for the rest of the night. At the top of the stairs, Mark asked where the guest room was, but Alex said, "You have to sleep in Steven's room tonight." "What!" Steven exclaimed. "I don't want him in my room." "Let him sleep with you, or else," Alex said. "Fine. This way, Mark," Steven said, taking his hand and leading him down the hall, but not as far as Alex's room. __________________ "How many seconds in eternity?" And the shepherd's boy says, "this is a mountain of pure diamond. It takes an hour to climb it and an hour to go around it. Every hundred years a little bird comes and sharpens its beak on the diamond mountain. And when the entire mountain is chiseled away then the first second of eternity will have passed." You must think that's a hell of a long time. Personally, I think that's a hell of a bird. 14 years on GetDare!

01-10-2010, 11:16 PM	#49
Demon Thief getDare Devil Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: In the US Posts: 1,013	I'll write more soon. Don't worry, I won't leave you all hanging for too much longer. __________________ "How many seconds in eternity?" And the shepherd's boy says, "this is a mountain of pure diamond. It takes an hour to climb it and an hour to go around it. Every hundred years a little bird comes and sharpens its beak on the diamond mountain. And when the entire mountain is chiseled away then the first second of eternity will have passed." You must think that's a hell of a long time. Personally, I think that's a hell of a bird. 14 years on GetDare!

01-11-2010, 04:51 AM	#50
MasterOmega Member Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 86	Just read this story through, this is awesome. Nice twists, although I was a bit dissapointed to find that you used the same thing twice (being black-mailed by picture twice). Ohterwise, nice punctuation, grammar ect. I have subscribed, so you better get writing. __________________ Likes: Bondage, Humiliation, Stripping, not sure really. Will try stuff that isn't in limits. Dislikes: Pee, Dirty, again not sure. Limits: Poo, Outdoors/Public, Family, Public, Extreme pain, Permanent, Illegal etc. GetDare Castle Royalty

01-11-2010, 10:16 PM	#51
Demon Thief getDare Devil Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: In the US Posts: 1,013	I didn't mean to use the same thing twice, but what I originally had planned didn't work out too well with the rest of the story. Don't worry, it probably won't happen again. Continuing from where I left off... Part 11 As Steven starting leading Mark to his room, Alex tapped him on his shoulder and pointed toward the bathroom, telling him to change there. Mark had no choice but to obey, so he headed toward the bathroom, leaving all three boys in the hall waiting for him. Once inside, he took his first good look at the bundle of clothes he was holding. They were pajama bottoms and a top, both colored blue with various cartoon characters on them. Mark was shocked as he held them up to see them better when a small object fell out of the pj's onto the floor. He bent down to pick it up when he realized it was a pair of white briefs. Mrk knew he had to wear these, so he just gritted his teeth and changed into the briefs and pj's. They were all uncomfortable on him, but they still fit. Then he went back out into the hall after using the toilet. Alex and Zack started laughing their heads off as soon as Mark stepped into the hallway, but Steven didn't make a sound. Mark guessed he was a victim of more humiliating stunts than this. This meant that he was probably one step closer to getting Steven on his side and getting revenge on Alex and Zack. Steven led Mark into his room, and the other boys followed. Alex said, "Since you both pretty much have to do as I say, you'll both sleep together tonight. I suggest that you two get plenty of sleep. We have a lot in store for you two tomorrow." Zack nodded in agreement, but Mark, while looking at him, could see that Zack looked a little uncomfortable with everything that was happening. Could it be that Zack was also under Alex's control? He had no way of knowing or finding out. Mark and Steven got into the only bed in the room, which was barely big wnough for both of them. As Alex and Zack left, Alex said, "I'll be checking on you at random times during the night, so if I catch either one of you out of bed, you'll both have to do a major punishment in the morning." "What if I have to go to the bathroom?" Steven asked. "Then you have to hold it," Alex answered, as he left the room. Aw crap! This is SO not worth fifty bucks!, Mark thought. __________________ "How many seconds in eternity?" And the shepherd's boy says, "this is a mountain of pure diamond. It takes an hour to climb it and an hour to go around it. Every hundred years a little bird comes and sharpens its beak on the diamond mountain. And when the entire mountain is chiseled away then the first second of eternity will have passed." You must think that's a hell of a long time. Personally, I think that's a hell of a bird. 14 years on GetDare!

01-12-2010, 03:19 AM	#52
MasterOmega Member Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 86	Nice update, but this does kinda push the limits of my morals a bit. A 16 yr old boy sleeping with an 8 yr old boy? This just sounds wrong in my opinion, but it's still appealing in a perverted kinda way. Still, can't wait for the next update. __________________ Likes: Bondage, Humiliation, Stripping, not sure really. Will try stuff that isn't in limits. Dislikes: Pee, Dirty, again not sure. Limits: Poo, Outdoors/Public, Family, Public, Extreme pain, Permanent, Illegal etc. GetDare Castle Royalty

01-07-2010, 12:23 PM	#47
DareMad Account Banned Join Date: May 2009 Location: UK Posts: 24	what are the clothes!!!!!

01-07-2010, 05:38 PM	#48
misspiggy7 Account Banned Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Not sure, there's a wheel, and a nozzle i lick for water, and lots of wood shavings to snuggle in Posts: 142	dang! u always leave us hanging write more soon plz!

01-12-2010, 05:46 AM	#53
William Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2010 Posts: 6	This story keeps geting better don't stop I like it but needs more crazy dares like anything that would b heaps good

01-12-2010, 04:25 PM	#54
will9022 Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New York, USA Posts: 156	this story is great! and wh cares if a 16 year old and an 8 year old are sharing a bd, they arent "doing" anything. Please continue when you get the chance!

01-12-2010, 11:32 PM	#56
xava Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 146	this story is really good id love more regular posts though :P and the age thing i didnt pick up on i just made my own ages i think haha but yeah everyone has their opinions and morals and all should respect that __________________ 18/m bi - feel free to pm me if u want to chat/ask me anything check out my story! and let me know if u think i should post another 1 http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=32755 likes: masturbation, risky, cum, nudity, wedgie, a little humiliation and some anal dislikes: poo, messy, family, cross dressing, very public

01-13-2010, 07:19 AM	#57
jambalaya Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2009 Posts: 22	I don't want to be pushy here, but this story is too good to be less than an epic. I suggest you make this as long as you can. This is just too great that I can't say every complement that I can think off. This is just great. Great Job!

01-13-2010, 05:16 PM	#59
jambalaya Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2009 Posts: 22	Please do as you please. With all due respect to the opinions of the people in this community, it is still good if you make this as good as you possibly can. I highly commend this story, do not fear to explore your imagination. But yeah, kudos to everyone's opinion. And more kudos to this story.