My Ex-Girlfriend [FICTION] - Page 3

sjsully06 · 07-10-2007, 10:30 AM

The three men entered the room and i knew i was in for a long day. the first man sat down next to me and started to stroke my penis, i had an instant erection. the second man started to stoke his own penis, he made it rise then he removed my ball gag and put his ppenis in my mouth, pulling in and out, in and out, the third man made him self cum and he spread it on my whole body, they were making me there bitch. the second man cummed deep in my throat, it was so deep i couldnt traste the saltyness. it had now been thirty minutes of being fucked in the mouth by three people, my ass started to hurt. my diaper was wet with cum and piss.

1 hour later they were still going at it. and they finally stopped, ok we must leave now they said, but he stated how they would be back everyday at noon.

a little later brittany entered the room smiling, she told me before i could ask that she was happy because of what she did to me. so naturally i instantly thought it was because she made me get raped, but then she said...

the warning on the butt plug states that if left in your anus for to long it stretches out your anal tissue making you lose all control of your bowel movements for life, you are in my control as a baby forever. you will be shitting yourself every 5 mins and you will do what i say or you will be stuck in a poopy diaper for a week. i also have a gift for u, since you are now such a little baby i got you a crib that i can lock you in....

molten man · 07-11-2007, 03:42 AM

nice work. u developing it fantasticallY!

sjsully06 · 07-11-2007, 09:00 AM

Why dont more people take over, I'm going to take a break so I can finish a scipt to my movie, I will come back and add more later, but for today more people should add because that is the point to the story anyways...

sjsully06 · 07-11-2007, 09:05 AM

O, also, thanks for all the compliments moltenman

insanehuman455 · 07-11-2007, 10:28 AM

they locked me in the crib for the night wearing a sissy nightie and a diaper. i had secretly removed the butt plug so i still had control of my bowels, but it wouldnt be long until she noticed. i couldnt sleep that night, just thinking about what my life has become. here i was locked in a babies crib at 18 years old. i drifted to sleep and dreamed that i was 40 years old and still sissified and diapered. i snapped awak. "i cant live like this. im not putting up with this shit anymore" i thought to myself, i had been a football player, no childs crib can hold me in. I strained myself but broke free. everyone was gone it was only 8 at night, the put me to bed early. i stripped off the diaper and and nightiee and put on some of my old clothes. i went into my dads room and got his pistol out of his drawer. i sat on the couch watching TV waiting for their return. the door opened and Brittany screamed, "what the fuck are you doing!" "IM doing whatever the hell i want, and your gunna be doing whatever the hell i want too." i raised the gun to her to ler her know i was serious. "you made my life a living hell, now its my turn" i handcuffed my parents and brittany together then tied them to a pole. you wait here well i check through what you just but for me at the store. "a shock collar, very nice. this will come in handy. Revenge is sweet, oh yes revenge is sweet." i stripped off their clothes and took a picture of them. "Insurance" i said happily. I called up brittanies ex boyfriends and told them the situation. they said they would be happy to help. i was goining to make birttany regret ever knowing me, or even better the day she was born.

sjsully06 · 07-11-2007, 11:50 AM

You just ruined the whole story

sjsully06 · 07-11-2007, 11:53 AM

I was screaming my head off, Brittany ran in said what the fucks wrong. I just had a dream that I shot and killed you and my parents. You what! she screamed, you want me dead, no i dreamed it, i said. I dont care if your dreaming or not, for that, you are getting the worst punishment ever, starting tomorrow. The next day I woke up with shit in my diaper, my bowels must have released as i was sleeping, then brittany walked in with a whip...

insanehuman455 · 07-11-2007, 05:48 PM

the story has to resolve some time, and what 18 year old guy wouldnt fight back, it will just end up being a redundant mess, but if thats the why you want to do it than, i guess ill comply

"meet your newest enemy, we can call him MR whippy. any time you do something bed Mr whippy comes out. understood, and now for your actions and thoughts last night MR whippy is goin to have to set you straight. She made my lay face down and snapped the whip at my back, and told me to jack off and that she wont stop until i come, i began goin at it as hard as i could but the whip hurt so much i couldnt cum. i shifted the shit around my diaper and started jackin off with it. it gave me just the edge needed. i had been whipped 20 times before i came. my whole diaper and groin was covered in shit, tears were forming at my eyes from the pain. "Is the baby gunna cry?" taunted brittany. i felt like ripping her face off, but new i couldnt do anything, i was just gunna have to get used to this, it had always secretly been a fantasy of mine, but the grass is always greener on the other side. brittany then announced it was time to go shopping at the mall. "now what shall you wear today?" she said in a sadistic tone...

sjsully06 · 07-11-2007, 09:00 PM

It will get resolved, prolly with some excape, but not with a gun, also not yet, i still many ideas...

molten man · 07-12-2007, 12:59 AM

man. i would say since it was sjsully06 who took it 2 this level.. he has d rite 2 decide how it ends!!

sjsully06 · 07-12-2007, 09:48 AM

I was wearing a baby blue frilly sissy dress, and we were geting into the car, about to go to the mall. I had to get out of letting everyone see me, that when I had an idea. While I couldnt control my bowel movements, maybe if i tried hard enough i could force a bowel. With out her noticing I pulled my diaper down and shit on the seat of her car, i then scooped it up as quick as i could and i threw it at the back of her head. Revenge is sweet, i knew i would be punished really badly, but i didnt care... I was out of going to the mall.

1 HOUR LATER

I had just recieved the worst punishment ever. I was whipped, had the largest didldo forced so far up my butt it bled. Thats it I yelled, I had snapped, I stood up and attacked brittany, I punched her and wailed on her, It felt so good....

1 Month Later

I had injured brittany so badley she was a veggie for life, she couldnt move or talk, my paretns walked in on me and calld the police, i was brought to jail and had a court case, i was given 5 years in prison, but that wasnt the worse of it, my parents told brittany's parents what had been going on, and her dad, being really rich, payed the court system to make me wear a sissy dress everyday since i was already stck in diapers, this would be hell, me looking like a little bitch with really tough men...

I was walking down the line of cells every inmate yelling names at me, i was ld into my cell, it seemed empty, the guard closed the door, then i heard it, in the toughest voice iv ever heard, a man behind me said, Hey Baby!

doxanything · 07-12-2007, 11:03 AM

i will be your slave

molten man · 07-13-2007, 12:29 AM

sjsully06 what happened 2 d story!! i think it wen a little too far??

sjsully06 · 07-13-2007, 12:52 AM

I didnt do it... my friend was over and he did it, o well...

il try to fix it later

its worse than what the other kid did to..lol

insanehuman455 · 07-13-2007, 09:06 AM

well i originally was planning for him to think he was getting revenge but the dad would have knowledge that the gun wasnt loaded and was just waiting out to see what he did, then once again resume conrol, this time with counter revenge in mind

but yeah the last post was quite terrible, but thinking about the story it can go on for quite long with out a conclusion because if you take it day by day for a month thats 30 posts worth, so if he is in slavery for just the summer thats like at least 70 posts worth, so i say ignore/delete the jail post and everyone just have fun writting the story, this is also a good area for new writers to test their writing skills without making a completely new story on their own.

07-11-2007, 03:42 AM	#32
molten man Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Mumbai, India Posts: 946	nice work. u developing it fantasticallY! __________________ MMan 26/m/straight Skype: molten_man007 Kik: molten_man

07-11-2007, 09:05 AM	#34
sjsully06 Account Banned Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 121	O, also, thanks for all the compliments moltenman __________________ The truth is that I may write amazing stories about bondage and other things like master/slave. But the truth is that I can write it, but I dont do it, so stop asking me to be your slave or master. Also for the last time when I do dares I dont do poo, painful, messy, or public. So even if I do wear diapers, I wont shit one...

07-11-2007, 11:50 AM	#36
sjsully06 Account Banned Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 121	You just ruined the whole story __________________ The truth is that I may write amazing stories about bondage and other things like master/slave. But the truth is that I can write it, but I dont do it, so stop asking me to be your slave or master. Also for the last time when I do dares I dont do poo, painful, messy, or public. So even if I do wear diapers, I wont shit one...

07-11-2007, 11:53 AM	#37
sjsully06 Account Banned Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 121	I was screaming my head off, Brittany ran in said what the fucks wrong. I just had a dream that I shot and killed you and my parents. You what! she screamed, you want me dead, no i dreamed it, i said. I dont care if your dreaming or not, for that, you are getting the worst punishment ever, starting tomorrow. The next day I woke up with shit in my diaper, my bowels must have released as i was sleeping, then brittany walked in with a whip... __________________ The truth is that I may write amazing stories about bondage and other things like master/slave. But the truth is that I can write it, but I dont do it, so stop asking me to be your slave or master. Also for the last time when I do dares I dont do poo, painful, messy, or public. So even if I do wear diapers, I wont shit one...

07-11-2007, 09:00 PM	#39
sjsully06 Account Banned Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 121	It will get resolved, prolly with some excape, but not with a gun, also not yet, i still many ideas... __________________ The truth is that I may write amazing stories about bondage and other things like master/slave. But the truth is that I can write it, but I dont do it, so stop asking me to be your slave or master. Also for the last time when I do dares I dont do poo, painful, messy, or public. So even if I do wear diapers, I wont shit one...

07-10-2007, 10:30 AM	#31
sjsully06 Account Banned Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 121	The three men entered the room and i knew i was in for a long day. the first man sat down next to me and started to stroke my penis, i had an instant erection. the second man started to stoke his own penis, he made it rise then he removed my ball gag and put his ppenis in my mouth, pulling in and out, in and out, the third man made him self cum and he spread it on my whole body, they were making me there bitch. the second man cummed deep in my throat, it was so deep i couldnt traste the saltyness. it had now been thirty minutes of being fucked in the mouth by three people, my ass started to hurt. my diaper was wet with cum and piss. 1 hour later they were still going at it. and they finally stopped, ok we must leave now they said, but he stated how they would be back everyday at noon. a little later brittany entered the room smiling, she told me before i could ask that she was happy because of what she did to me. so naturally i instantly thought it was because she made me get raped, but then she said... the warning on the butt plug states that if left in your anus for to long it stretches out your anal tissue making you lose all control of your bowel movements for life, you are in my control as a baby forever. you will be shitting yourself every 5 mins and you will do what i say or you will be stuck in a poopy diaper for a week. i also have a gift for u, since you are now such a little baby i got you a crib that i can lock you in....

07-11-2007, 09:00 AM	#33
sjsully06 Account Banned Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 121	Why dont more people take over, I'm going to take a break so I can finish a scipt to my movie, I will come back and add more later, but for today more people should add because that is the point to the story anyways...

07-11-2007, 10:28 AM	#35
insanehuman455 Member Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 71	they locked me in the crib for the night wearing a sissy nightie and a diaper. i had secretly removed the butt plug so i still had control of my bowels, but it wouldnt be long until she noticed. i couldnt sleep that night, just thinking about what my life has become. here i was locked in a babies crib at 18 years old. i drifted to sleep and dreamed that i was 40 years old and still sissified and diapered. i snapped awak. "i cant live like this. im not putting up with this shit anymore" i thought to myself, i had been a football player, no childs crib can hold me in. I strained myself but broke free. everyone was gone it was only 8 at night, the put me to bed early. i stripped off the diaper and and nightiee and put on some of my old clothes. i went into my dads room and got his pistol out of his drawer. i sat on the couch watching TV waiting for their return. the door opened and Brittany screamed, "what the fuck are you doing!" "IM doing whatever the hell i want, and your gunna be doing whatever the hell i want too." i raised the gun to her to ler her know i was serious. "you made my life a living hell, now its my turn" i handcuffed my parents and brittany together then tied them to a pole. you wait here well i check through what you just but for me at the store. "a shock collar, very nice. this will come in handy. Revenge is sweet, oh yes revenge is sweet." i stripped off their clothes and took a picture of them. "Insurance" i said happily. I called up brittanies ex boyfriends and told them the situation. they said they would be happy to help. i was goining to make birttany regret ever knowing me, or even better the day she was born.

07-11-2007, 05:48 PM	#38
insanehuman455 Member Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 71	the story has to resolve some time, and what 18 year old guy wouldnt fight back, it will just end up being a redundant mess, but if thats the why you want to do it than, i guess ill comply "meet your newest enemy, we can call him MR whippy. any time you do something bed Mr whippy comes out. understood, and now for your actions and thoughts last night MR whippy is goin to have to set you straight. She made my lay face down and snapped the whip at my back, and told me to jack off and that she wont stop until i come, i began goin at it as hard as i could but the whip hurt so much i couldnt cum. i shifted the shit around my diaper and started jackin off with it. it gave me just the edge needed. i had been whipped 20 times before i came. my whole diaper and groin was covered in shit, tears were forming at my eyes from the pain. "Is the baby gunna cry?" taunted brittany. i felt like ripping her face off, but new i couldnt do anything, i was just gunna have to get used to this, it had always secretly been a fantasy of mine, but the grass is always greener on the other side. brittany then announced it was time to go shopping at the mall. "now what shall you wear today?" she said in a sadistic tone...

07-12-2007, 12:59 AM	#40
molten man Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Mumbai, India Posts: 946	man. i would say since it was sjsully06 who took it 2 this level.. he has d rite 2 decide how it ends!! __________________ MMan 26/m/straight Skype: molten_man007 Kik: molten_man

07-12-2007, 09:48 AM	#41
sjsully06 Account Banned Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 121	I was wearing a baby blue frilly sissy dress, and we were geting into the car, about to go to the mall. I had to get out of letting everyone see me, that when I had an idea. While I couldnt control my bowel movements, maybe if i tried hard enough i could force a bowel. With out her noticing I pulled my diaper down and shit on the seat of her car, i then scooped it up as quick as i could and i threw it at the back of her head. Revenge is sweet, i knew i would be punished really badly, but i didnt care... I was out of going to the mall. 1 HOUR LATER I had just recieved the worst punishment ever. I was whipped, had the largest didldo forced so far up my butt it bled. Thats it I yelled, I had snapped, I stood up and attacked brittany, I punched her and wailed on her, It felt so good.... 1 Month Later I had injured brittany so badley she was a veggie for life, she couldnt move or talk, my paretns walked in on me and calld the police, i was brought to jail and had a court case, i was given 5 years in prison, but that wasnt the worse of it, my parents told brittany's parents what had been going on, and her dad, being really rich, payed the court system to make me wear a sissy dress everyday since i was already stck in diapers, this would be hell, me looking like a little bitch with really tough men... I was walking down the line of cells every inmate yelling names at me, i was ld into my cell, it seemed empty, the guard closed the door, then i heard it, in the toughest voice iv ever heard, a man behind me said, Hey Baby! __________________ The truth is that I may write amazing stories about bondage and other things like master/slave. But the truth is that I can write it, but I dont do it, so stop asking me to be your slave or master. Also for the last time when I do dares I dont do poo, painful, messy, or public. So even if I do wear diapers, I wont shit one...

07-12-2007, 11:03 AM	#42
doxanything Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 143	i will be your slave

07-13-2007, 12:29 AM	#43
molten man Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Mumbai, India Posts: 946	sjsully06 what happened 2 d story!! i think it wen a little too far?? __________________ MMan 26/m/straight Skype: molten_man007 Kik: molten_man

07-13-2007, 12:52 AM	#44
sjsully06 Account Banned Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 121	I didnt do it... my friend was over and he did it, o well... il try to fix it later its worse than what the other kid did to..lol __________________ The truth is that I may write amazing stories about bondage and other things like master/slave. But the truth is that I can write it, but I dont do it, so stop asking me to be your slave or master. Also for the last time when I do dares I dont do poo, painful, messy, or public. So even if I do wear diapers, I wont shit one...

07-13-2007, 09:06 AM	#45
insanehuman455 Member Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 71	well i originally was planning for him to think he was getting revenge but the dad would have knowledge that the gun wasnt loaded and was just waiting out to see what he did, then once again resume conrol, this time with counter revenge in mind but yeah the last post was quite terrible, but thinking about the story it can go on for quite long with out a conclusion because if you take it day by day for a month thats 30 posts worth, so if he is in slavery for just the summer thats like at least 70 posts worth, so i say ignore/delete the jail post and everyone just have fun writting the story, this is also a good area for new writers to test their writing skills without making a completely new story on their own.