Fiction: The Surprise - Page 2

J.M.N · 01-25-2012, 12:14 AM

So nice to see a great old story being continued

great chapter and looking forward to the next.

Ps thanks for the pm, it was a great way of telling us that you were back writing

Rachie · 01-25-2012, 02:23 AM

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Originally Posted by slutpup

Special Thanks to Rachie for helping me edit the parts!!

Thanks for the positive comments jeff10145, Rachie, thefunman, and hadesnyberg!

Your always welcome, look forward to reading what she decided to strip. How brave / daring will she be, will she try to bargain with her friend?

Love Rachie
x x x x

slutjuice · 01-25-2012, 06:27 AM

Nice story! Your doing a great job, and you seem to have a nice thought at least for the beginning of the story!

daremaster 1 · 01-25-2012, 02:03 PM

Wow! This is pretty amazing! Glad to see it continue.

slutpup · 01-25-2012, 03:09 PM

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Originally Posted by J.M.N

So nice to see a great old story being continued

great chapter and looking forward to the next.

Ps thanks for the pm, it was a great way of telling us that you were back writing

Thanks.
Ps your welcome. I thought since I haven't been writing for a while, the least I could do was let you guys know the story's not dead.

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Originally Posted by Rachie

Your always welcome, look forward to reading what she decided to strip. How brave / daring will she be, will she try to bargain with her friend?

Love Rachie
x x x x

Oh, just wait and see

. I'm sure you'll be surprised!!

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Originally Posted by slutjuice

Nice story! Your doing a great job, and you seem to have a nice thought at least for the beginning of the story!

Thanks. I hope it has a nice thought as the story geets going.

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Originally Posted by daremaster 1

Wow! This is pretty amazing! Glad to see it continue.

Thanks . I'm glad you like it!!

slutpup · 01-27-2012, 03:01 PM

Special thanks to Rachie for helping me edit my parts!

Thanks for the positive comments J.M.N, Rachie, slutjuice, and daremaster 1! You guys rock!

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Looking up pleadingly Lily realised it was the big moment. Should she take off her bra or panties. After a few seconds she slowly reaches for her panties. Nikki gasped.

"What?" asked a nervous Lily.

"I was not expecting that!"

"I know. That's why I did that!" Lily said, smiling. She slowly moves her hands down to her panties and slowly pulls them off. She reveals a shaved area and glows red with embarrassment.

"You shave?" Nikki asks, surprised.

"Yes. I do." Lily said, embarrassed. "Well, anyway, back to the game! Nikki, truth or dare?"

"Dare."

"I dare you to call 3 people, tell them your in your underwear, and that you want to play Truth or Dare with them!" Lily said, smiling devilishly.

"WHAT? NO WAY!!"

"Fine. Give me a back-out. Then we will be even." Lily says, smirking.

"Never mind. I don't want you to get any more back-outs!" Nikki says, smirking. She grabs her cell phone and looks through her contacts. She hits a button and puts it on speaker phone. It rings.

"Hello?"

"Hey, Lucy?"

"Yeah. What?"

"I just wanted to tell you that I'm in my underwear and I wanted to play truth or dare with you."

"Why are you in your underwear?"

"Because I'm playing with Lily and she dared me to strip to my underwear."

"Wait. You got Lily to play? I'll be right over. Where? Your house?"

"Yeah"

"Okay, bye!"

"Bye"

Nikki hangs up the phone and smirks at Lily. She looks through her phone and finds the perfect person.

"I'm going to call......."

TO BE CONTINUED...
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Who will Nikki call?
Will Lucy actually show up?
Keep reading The Surprise to find out!

Rachie · 01-27-2012, 03:03 PM

Wow shocked

Nice way of including a new player (Lucy) Same name as an extra person in my story lol.

Wonder who will the other 2 be?

Love Rachie
x x x x

slutjuice · 01-27-2012, 06:09 PM

nice, and as Rachie said, nice way to bring more players.

daremaster 1 · 01-27-2012, 07:36 PM

Love new people, love it!

slutpup · 01-28-2012, 07:46 AM

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Originally Posted by Rachie

Wow shocked

Nice way of including a new player (Lucy) Same name as an extra person in my story lol.

Wonder who will the other 2 be?

Love Rachie
x x x x

I have a dog named Lucy and she was in my room while I was writing this. lol

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Originally Posted by slutjuice

nice, and as Rachie said, nice way to bring more players.

Thanks

. I thought it would just get boring with just Lily and Lucy so I thought more players would be better/funner.

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Originally Posted by daremaster 1

Love new people, love it!

Thanks

Your gonna love the next part!

slutpup · 01-28-2012, 02:09 PM

Special thanks to Rachie for helping me fix my spelling!!!

Thanks Rachie, slutjuice, and daremaster 1 for your positive comments!!

You guys are awesome!
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I'm going to call Dillon." Nikki said, laughing hysterically.

"W-W-What? Dillon? NO!"

"You said 3 people. I'm calling Dillon." Nikki said as there was a knock on the door.

"YOU GET IT!!" They both said together.

"How about we both get it." Nikki suggested. Lily nodded. They both crept out of Nikki's room and went downstairs. They got to the door and Nikki opened it. Lucy was standing there, smiling, and staring at Lily.

"Hi Lucy! Watcha staring at?" Lily said, giggling.

"You shave?"

"Yes. So, you ready to play?"

"Yes. Yes I am." Lucy said, giggling as she follows Lily and Nikki up the stairs to Nikki's room. "So, what are you doing now?"

"Nikki has too call 2 more people and ask them to play." Lily explained.

"Yes, I was about to call Dillon." Nikki said with an evil grin on her face. She picks up her phone and dials his number. It rings.

"Hello?"

"Hey Dillon. It's Nikki. I just wanted to tell you that I'm in my underwear and I want to play truth or dare with you."

"Ummm, okay. I have 2 questions. 1) Why the hell are you in your underwear? 2) Who are you playing with?"

"I'm playing with Lily and Lucy just showed up. I'm in my underwear because Lily dared me to strip to my underwear."

"Wait, Lily's playing?"

"Yes"

"I'll be right over. Your house?"

"Yeah, see ya soon. Bye."

"Bye" They hang up.

"I really hate you Nikki!" Lily yells, almost crying as she watches Nikki pick the third person.

"Oh, I love you too!" Nikki says sarcastically. "Ahh, I have the perfect person! This person will be a surprise." Nikki says as she turns off speaker phone and steps out of her room. After a few minutes, there is a knock on the door. Nikki goes and gets it. Lily and Lucy hear 3 voices downstairs, but they only recognize 2 of them. They gasp as they see.....

TO BE CONTINUED.....
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Who's the 3rd mystery player?
Why did they gasp?
Keep reading The Surprise to find out!!

Rachie · 01-28-2012, 02:11 PM

Look forward to finding out who the other person will be?

Lovely suspense again.

Well Done

Love Rachie
x x x x

daremaster 1 · 01-28-2012, 02:11 PM

Your right, I was going to like that chapter. I could never call someone lin that way though.

J.M.N · 01-29-2012, 12:22 PM

Great suspense, looking foward to the next chapter

thefunman · 01-30-2012, 06:39 AM

Wow I love the story, can't wait to hear more of it.

01-25-2012, 12:14 AM	#16
J.M.N Getdare's Head Whore Join Date: Jun 2011 Location: UK Posts: 1,401 Blog Entries: 14	So nice to see a great old story being continued great chapter and looking forward to the next. Ps thanks for the pm, it was a great way of telling us that you were back writing __________________ [20:16:43] Jameser: ‹@J.M.N› don't worry you're definitely one of the lads here [22:05:21] 1Pupil: Best moderator of getDare to me One day when the light is glowing I’ll be in my castle golden But until the gates are open I just wanna feel this moment "Bdsm. That's were u get spanked!" I love weiners and nuts. "JMN is the one that most the tweenagers want to see in a kilt"

01-25-2012, 06:27 AM	#18
slutjuice Distinguished Member Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: USA Posts: 523	Nice story! Your doing a great job, and you seem to have a nice thought at least for the beginning of the story! __________________ FAVORITE!: lesbian stuff (I have lovely female roommate to help) Likes: pain, friends, public, holding items, long term, ruined orgasms, bondage. Limits: illegal, some permanent, pics, cam. PM me anything you want me to write with sharpie on my body.

01-27-2012, 03:01 PM	#21
slutpup Distinguished Member Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: MN Posts: 703 Blog Entries: 8	Part 4 Special thanks to Rachie for helping me edit my parts! Thanks for the positive comments J.M.N, Rachie, slutjuice, and daremaster 1! You guys rock! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Looking up pleadingly Lily realised it was the big moment. Should she take off her bra or panties. After a few seconds she slowly reaches for her panties. Nikki gasped. "What?" asked a nervous Lily. "I was not expecting that!" "I know. That's why I did that!" Lily said, smiling. She slowly moves her hands down to her panties and slowly pulls them off. She reveals a shaved area and glows red with embarrassment. "You shave?" Nikki asks, surprised. "Yes. I do." Lily said, embarrassed. "Well, anyway, back to the game! Nikki, truth or dare?" "Dare." "I dare you to call 3 people, tell them your in your underwear, and that you want to play Truth or Dare with them!" Lily said, smiling devilishly. "WHAT? NO WAY!!" "Fine. Give me a back-out. Then we will be even." Lily says, smirking. "Never mind. I don't want you to get any more back-outs!" Nikki says, smirking. She grabs her cell phone and looks through her contacts. She hits a button and puts it on speaker phone. It rings. "Hello?" "Hey, Lucy?" "Yeah. What?" "I just wanted to tell you that I'm in my underwear and I wanted to play truth or dare with you." "Why are you in your underwear?" "Because I'm playing with Lily and she dared me to strip to my underwear." "Wait. You got Lily to play? I'll be right over. Where? Your house?" "Yeah" "Okay, bye!" "Bye" Nikki hangs up the phone and smirks at Lily. She looks through her phone and finds the perfect person. "I'm going to call......." TO BE CONTINUED... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Who will Nikki call? Will Lucy actually show up? Keep reading The Surprise to find out! __________________ PM me dares! I will try any dare that gets sent that *doesn't* have anything to do with *any* of my limits! I need help figuring out my likes, dislikes and some limits! Dare me! Likes: Mouth soaping, writing lines, spanking, anal, slight pain, certain public things Dislikes: ??? Limits: Certain public things, permanent, major pain, any type of sex, family, friends If you think I deserve a punishment for not updating my story, punish me.

01-27-2012, 03:03 PM	#22
Rachie I am the cutest butterfly ever Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: In my Bed, Posts: 6,606 Blog Entries: 2	Wow shocked Nice way of including a new player (Lucy) Same name as an extra person in my story lol. Wonder who will the other 2 be? Love Rachie x x x x __________________ RACHIE'S GETDARE USER GUIDE / MANUAL STRIP POKER WITH A TWIST (Story) BED HABITS LOLA.FOX WISHES SHE WAS MY FAVORITE USER <3

01-27-2012, 06:09 PM	#23
slutjuice Distinguished Member Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: USA Posts: 523	nice, and as Rachie said, nice way to bring more players. __________________ FAVORITE!: lesbian stuff (I have lovely female roommate to help) Likes: pain, friends, public, holding items, long term, ruined orgasms, bondage. Limits: illegal, some permanent, pics, cam. PM me anything you want me to write with sharpie on my body.

01-25-2012, 02:03 PM	#19
daremaster 1 getDare God Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: <3 Posts: 3,032	Wow! This is pretty amazing! Glad to see it continue.

01-27-2012, 07:36 PM	#24
daremaster 1 getDare God Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: <3 Posts: 3,032	Love new people, love it!

01-28-2012, 02:09 PM	#26
slutpup Distinguished Member Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: MN Posts: 703 Blog Entries: 8	Part 5 Special thanks to Rachie for helping me fix my spelling!!! Thanks Rachie, slutjuice, and daremaster 1 for your positive comments!! You guys are awesome! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I'm going to call Dillon." Nikki said, laughing hysterically. "W-W-What? Dillon? NO!" "You said 3 people. I'm calling Dillon." Nikki said as there was a knock on the door. "YOU GET IT!!" They both said together. "How about we both get it." Nikki suggested. Lily nodded. They both crept out of Nikki's room and went downstairs. They got to the door and Nikki opened it. Lucy was standing there, smiling, and staring at Lily. "Hi Lucy! Watcha staring at?" Lily said, giggling. "You shave?" "Yes. So, you ready to play?" "Yes. Yes I am." Lucy said, giggling as she follows Lily and Nikki up the stairs to Nikki's room. "So, what are you doing now?" "Nikki has too call 2 more people and ask them to play." Lily explained. "Yes, I was about to call Dillon." Nikki said with an evil grin on her face. She picks up her phone and dials his number. It rings. "Hello?" "Hey Dillon. It's Nikki. I just wanted to tell you that I'm in my underwear and I want to play truth or dare with you." "Ummm, okay. I have 2 questions. 1) Why the hell are you in your underwear? 2) Who are you playing with?" "I'm playing with Lily and Lucy just showed up. I'm in my underwear because Lily dared me to strip to my underwear." "Wait, Lily's playing?" "Yes" "I'll be right over. Your house?" "Yeah, see ya soon. Bye." "Bye" They hang up. "I really hate you Nikki!" Lily yells, almost crying as she watches Nikki pick the third person. "Oh, I love you too!" Nikki says sarcastically. "Ahh, I have the perfect person! This person will be a surprise." Nikki says as she turns off speaker phone and steps out of her room. After a few minutes, there is a knock on the door. Nikki goes and gets it. Lily and Lucy hear 3 voices downstairs, but they only recognize 2 of them. They gasp as they see..... TO BE CONTINUED..... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Who's the 3rd mystery player? Why did they gasp? Keep reading The Surprise to find out!! __________________ PM me dares! I will try any dare that gets sent that *doesn't* have anything to do with *any* of my limits! I need help figuring out my likes, dislikes and some limits! Dare me! Likes: Mouth soaping, writing lines, spanking, anal, slight pain, certain public things Dislikes: ??? Limits: Certain public things, permanent, major pain, any type of sex, family, friends If you think I deserve a punishment for not updating my story, punish me.

01-28-2012, 02:11 PM	#27
Rachie I am the cutest butterfly ever Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: In my Bed, Posts: 6,606 Blog Entries: 2	Look forward to finding out who the other person will be? Lovely suspense again. Well Done Love Rachie x x x x __________________ RACHIE'S GETDARE USER GUIDE / MANUAL STRIP POKER WITH A TWIST (Story) BED HABITS LOLA.FOX WISHES SHE WAS MY FAVORITE USER <3

01-29-2012, 12:22 PM	#29
J.M.N Getdare's Head Whore Join Date: Jun 2011 Location: UK Posts: 1,401 Blog Entries: 14	Great suspense, looking foward to the next chapter __________________ [20:16:43] Jameser: ‹@J.M.N› don't worry you're definitely one of the lads here [22:05:21] 1Pupil: Best moderator of getDare to me One day when the light is glowing I’ll be in my castle golden But until the gates are open I just wanna feel this moment "Bdsm. That's were u get spanked!" I love weiners and nuts. "JMN is the one that most the tweenagers want to see in a kilt"

01-30-2012, 06:39 AM	#30
thefunman getDare Succubus Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Florida, USA Posts: 1,766	Wow I love the story, can't wait to hear more of it.