[Fiction] Alex's Truth or Dare "fun."

[EB32]

I love the concept and the dares. just wish there was more detail and the chapters were a bit longer; being a writer I can understand if you just aren't feeling it (if that's the problem), which is why if I'm not feeling it, I don't even attempt to write. I wait until I have that feeling. that is when things seem to just flow and writing a long chapter seems to only take minutes.

[hewwwo(:]

Originally Posted by daremaster 1

Well it be getting more interesting?

i dunno. if you don't like it, nobody's forcing you to continue reading.

Originally Posted by Turtleking280

All I can say is that you're too hard on yourself. Like Rachie said, reread, as a few things don't really make sense.
But besides that, it is good.

thank you so much! xx

Originally Posted by Daring nemder

Wow amazing it just gets better!!!

awww, you're sweet. (: xx

Originally Posted by EB32

I love the concept and the dares. just wish there was more detail and the chapters were a bit longer; being a writer I can understand if you just aren't feeling it (if that's the problem), which is why if I'm not feeling it, I don't even attempt to write. I wait until I have that feeling. that is when things seem to just flow and writing a long chapter seems to only take minutes.

thanks for your feedback. I seriously appreciate it. xx


so anybody who is reading, I might not have a chapter today, because I have plans. (a life, she has?! no way!) I'm hoping to wrap up the story by Friday when I leave for vacation for a week. But anyways, stick around 'cause there will be more soon! xoxo

[Rachie]

Originally Posted by hewwwo(:

(well, nobody's even looked at this yet, but I'm afraid I'll forget my ideas if I stop.

I had read

What I Do with my story that's on here, is write daily if practically possible. I also have multiple chapters pre written at all times (8+ if pos)

I can then change / edit content if wish, you can also proof read at a later date, you are more likely to spot things.

..........

Latest parts read a lot better thank you, however idioms highly recommend you proof read at least once before posting, and this can also check the layout etc.

All the best

Love RACHIE - (iPod)
x x x x

[hewwwo(:]

Originally Posted by Rachie

I had read

What I Do with my story that's on here, is write daily if practically possible. I also have multiple chapters pre written at all times (8+ if pos)

I can then change / edit content if wish, you can also proof read at a later date, you are more likely to spot things.

..........

Latest parts read a lot better thank you, however idioms highly recommend you proof read at least once before posting, and this can also check the layout etc.

All the best

Love RACHIE - (iPod)
x x x x

thank you so much for your advice, rachie. i really appreciate it! you're so nice! i'll definitely start proofreading. and i kind of thought it was about an hour later in the day than it actually is, so I'll probably get some in right now. but thank you again! xx

[hewwwo(:]

Before I knew it, I was up in a handstand with Jake pouring vodka in my vagina. I had absolutely no idea how they were even going to take shots out of me, but they were. I honestly had no idea that was even possible. But somehow, it was. Now Austin was holding my hips, and tilting me forward as Jake put his lips to my vagina. He started to suck, then moved his tongue around because he "was just making sure he got everything." Then, Austin and Jake switched positions. Then went Kevin, Reilly, and Katherine. After it was all over, I decided I needed a shot, and took the bottle from Kevin who was holding it at that point. After we were all slightly drunk, we wanted more. Now, after this, none of us can remember exactly what happened. Which means it was a good idea for us to leave the video camera on.

"Alright guys, who's next?" Katherine said and staggered over to the circle. She practically fell over onto Jake (not that he cared at all).

"I believe it's my turn." I said. "So, Reilly. I dare you to.." I was drunk at this point, so it was hard for me to come up with a dare. "show us all your favorite sex position using Austin."

"Well," Reilly said pushing Austin to the ground. "I like to be on top." She giggled. She slowly climbed on top of him, and started kissing him. "That's how I like it." Reilly got off of Austin who now, had the slightest boner. "Um, Kevin. I dare you to put on a blindfold, let all us girls do whatever we want with you and then you have to guess who did what. For every girl you guess wrong, that's how many minutes you must leave a bag of ice on your penis."

Kevin obviously didn't object to this dare, so he put on his blindfold and laid down on the floor. Reilly started first, kissing him on the lips, the next, then the stomach, and finally ended with kissing his penis. I went next. I didn't exactly know what to do, so I just gave him a hand job and ended it. Katherine, however, sat down on his face and let him lick her. When he was done with that, he took off the blindfold. He guessed everybody correctly, and we were all to drunk to even wonder if he cheated.

"Jake," Kevin said. "Pick a girl to shoot a quick porno with." Obviously, Jake chose Katherine and they did just as they were instructed. They made a quick, five minute porno. It was really nothing special though. After that was over, Katherine proposed an idea.

"How about we do a contest. Whoever is first to back out of a dare must be the group's slave for the weekend." Everybody agreed. "But for now, it's Jake's turn." Jake dared Austin to cum into a glass and drink it. Austin dared Katherine to masturbate for ten minutes, but she couldn't cum. And then Katherine dared me. "Alex. Take a picture of you masturbating and text it to your dad."

"No! I can't do that!" I said forgetting about the bet. Send a naked picture to my dad.. psh. I'm no fan of incest, thank you very much. I thought.

"Alright, then you'll just be our slave." said Austin. I begged and pleaded for a couple minutes, and then decided on being the slave. What's the worst they could do?!

[EB32]

you totally could have gotten around that last dare! though being drunk I doubt you could have thought that clearly haha. Anyway, good addition. Better detail at first; It felt a bit rushed at the end, but that was probably cause you had to go. Right?

[hewwwo(:]

Originally Posted by EB32

you totally could have gotten around that last dare! though being drunk I doubt you could have thought that clearly haha. Anyway, good addition. Better detail at first; It felt a bit rushed at the end, but that was probably cause you had to go. Right?

that's what i was thinking too.. haha.
and yeah, i was rushed. sorry! i'll probably go back and edit tomorrow or something.
but thank you very much! xx

[Daring nemder]

Wow I didn't think it was possible for it to get any better hats off!

[tiger22matt]

Another great installment.

[hewwwo(:]

Originally Posted by Daring nemder

Wow I didn't think it was possible for it to get any better hats off!

Originally Posted by tiger22matt

Another great installment.

thank you both! xx

[Silvercola]

I love ur writing

[hewwwo(:]

Originally Posted by Silvercola

I love ur writing

thanks so much! xx

[hewwwo(:]

"Wait," said Katherine. "You're seriously going to be our slave just so you don't have to send a nudie picture to your dad?" Katherine smiled a cold, evil smile. "Are you sure you're up for this?" and with that, I could tell she had a lot in store for me.

"What other choice do I have. You don't understand what would happen to me if my dad saw a naked picture of me. He knows I'm here, he'd come over and break everything up." I tried for a guilt trip, but my drunken brain wasn't working to it's full capability.

"Well then, it looks like we're going to have fun." Kevin smiled. "Hmm, slave. What should your first task be?" He was directing the last part more towards the group than me, but he still addressed it to me for some reason. I expected Katherine to speak up, but for some reason she didn't. Maybe she was waiting. "Well first of all, slave. We need to set some ground rules. You will always address us as master/mistress. Never can you speak unless spoken to. If you fail, there will always be punishments. Umm, anything else? How long should this last?"

"How about we let her decide." Katherine said. She picked up a set of dice and had me roll. "The number she rolls in the first dice times the number on the second dice is the number of days she has to be our slave. But even then, infront of anybody besides the six of us, there is no such thing." She handed me the dice and I shook them in my hands. Please be snake eyes, please be snake eyes. I pleaded in my head. Shit. A five and a six. 30 days.. a whole month. "Well, well." Katherine said. "Thirty whole days." She held her finger to my collar bone and started to circle me, allowing her finger to touch anywhere she pleased. "What are we going to do with you, my little slut?"

(sorry, guys! this one has to be short. I forgot I had to leave soon and I'm not dressed. I promise I'll add more later today.)

[hewwwo(:]

"I've got an idea." Reilly said, blindfolding me. Soon after that, I heard whispers and felt two large arms carry me and throw me on some soft surface. I figured out that it was a bed once i felt my hands and feet being tied to the posts. When Katherine removed my blindfold, I saw that it was Katherine's bedroom. "Who's going first?" Reilly asked.

"How about I do?" said Katherine. That surprised me. Then I remembered what she said earlier and figured that this was where her evil was going to come out. Everybody else left and I saw the video camera on the other side of the room. "Well, well, well, you dirty slut. What should I do with you?" She paused. "Well? Speak up, slave."

"I don't know, Mistress." Katherine raised her eyebrows at me. "Well, I've been such a-" I paused. This was ridiculous. "dirty slut. You should punish me." Katherine smiled and nodded.

"You're right. I should definitely punish you." She peered under the bed and pulled out a box. From the angle I was at, the only thing I could see was a bottle of toothpaste. But as she pulled further, I could see sex toys. That was what the whole box consisted of. Minus the toothpaste, and some clothes pegs. She picked up the clothes pegs and I wondered what she was going to use them for. She placed one down hard on my nipple and I let out a little cry. "What was that, slave? More pain? Sure thing." She tore off the clothes peg and applied toothpaste to both nipples and my clit. Then, she continued putting clothes pegs all over my boobs and my pussy.

"Uh oh," Katherine fake frowned as she looked at my pussy. "What's going on down there?" She was referring to me getting wet. Something about being dominated made me hot, but I wasn't sure what. "That can't do." She started tearing off the clothes pegs again. She put her head so that her lips were hovering over my toothpaste covered nipples. She started to lick off the toothpaste. Then she went on to the other nipple. Next, she put her face at my vagina. Then, she started licking. It took all my might to try to not get even more wet. But obviously that didn't help. "Alright, slut. We'll meet again soon." She left the room, leaving me tied to the bed and the box of sex toys out on the floor.

After a few minutes I started to calm down. My nipples were getting less erect when Austin walked in. "Why hello, slave. Oh look, Katherine's left us some toys!" he said sifting through the box. He pulled out an electric toothbrush. "Oh, good." He turned on the toothbrush and put it against my clit. It was the greatest sensation. "Now, slave." He said. "You can't have an orgasm." That was hard. I ended up being seconds away from cumming when he took the toothbrush off my clit. "Open up." he said and started brushing my teeth with the same toothbrush. "This is what you get for being so filthy, slave." He then shoved the large (and still vibrating) end of the electric toothbrush up my vagina and left the room.

About ten minutes had passed, and I was still alone and holding in this major orgasm. Thinking about my Masters/Mistresses didn't help. Oh, why did that turn me on so much? Finally, I let out a loud moan and had my orgasm. While this was happening, I didn't hear my next Master come in.

"Slave." I heard a voice boom. "What do you think you're doing?!" I turned my head and saw Jake come in. "You're a dirty, dirty slut." His gaze moved from my face to my vagina. "And what's this?! Stubble?" he asked running his hand across my vagina. "Well, that won't do!" he said. He rummaged around in the box of toys and came out with a razor and some shaving cream. "You're wet enough as it is, so we don't need water." He ran his fingers all over my pussy, moving the wetness all over. He applied the shaving cream and started shaving. "You know what?" he said. "This is taking too long. I'll be right back." He returned a few minutes later with some hot wax and a roll of paper towels. he ripped off a paper towel and cleaned my vagina. Next he applied hot wax and added strips of paper towel. He pulled and pulled until all the wax and "stubble" was gone and my vagina was bright red. Then he added more hot wax and walked away, letting it dry. As he walked out the door he muttered "dumb slut." or something alone those lines. If I weren't still bound I would have been masturbating. I wasn't sure why this whole slave thing turned me on so much, and suddenly, I wasn't dreading the next 30 days. But first, we had to get through tonight.

[hadesnyberg]

i think this is an outstanding story you should write storys offline too