04-07-2011, 08:16 PM | #16 |
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Like everyone else I gotta agree with Dylan what he said pretty much sums up my opinions. Keep up the good work and post the next chapter soon!
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04-08-2011, 07:45 PM | #17 |
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Really great, that spacing actually really helped (also it made it look longer, which is always a plus XD). Cannot wait to read more!
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04-09-2011, 12:04 AM | #18 |
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Great story i love it, I can't wait for you to write more!U
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04-13-2011, 07:15 PM | #19 |
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DONT STOP WRITING!! This story was awesome! Please continue it
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sorry guys ive been out of the country for a little while on vacation, ill write more once i get back which will be around monday. sorry again
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04-20-2011, 06:43 AM | #21 |
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04-20-2011, 01:06 PM | #22 |
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hey guys heres the next part-
sorry again for taking so long!
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04-20-2011, 01:08 PM | #23 |
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hey guys heres the next part-
sorry again for taking so long! \All week Troy couldn’t get any work done. He spent most of his time thinking about Thomas and anticipating when they would get to chill again. Every time he fantasized about Thomas and him together he would get goose bumps and couldn’t help but smile. Thomas was feeling the same way about Troy. They had been texting all week about random stuff, like their classes and such. On Friday, Thomas went over to Troy’s locker after school. “Hey, do you wanna come over today?” “Yeah, for sure man” “Sweet, ill meet you outside the school in 5, I just gotta get my bag from my locker.” They met outside and started walking to Thomas house. After a few blocks, their hands started brushing together as they were walking side by side. Troy looked up at Thomas as grabbed hold of his hand, and they kept walking. They were both smiling nonstop. “So what do you wanna do when we get to your house?” Troy asked “I dunno, wanna get our bikes and ride them down to the ravine or something? It’s a nice day.” “yeah that sounds nice” Troy said with a smile They got their bikes from Thomas’s house and rode down to the park and then down to the ravine on a path from there. It was a nice day out and they were having fun enjoying the first few days of warm weather they had had. After a while they were tired and went back to Thomas’s house. They went inside and were greeted by his mother sitting at the kitchen table reading the newspaper “Hi boys, how was the ride?” “Good” they said in unison They ran downstairs and plopped on the couch, picking up the xbox controllers to play some NHL 11. “You’re so going down bro” “it’s on!” They played the first game and Troy lost 4-2. “Alright how bout this, if I win the next game you have to do a dare for me- ANY dare!” Troy said playfully “Ok, im game. Lets go!” They played the first period and it was neck and neck, no one scored. The second period was the same way. They were both battling furiously to win, but this game was pretty even matched. With 1 minute left in the game, Troy dangled around Thomas’s players and scored. “NOOOO!” Yelled Thomas “Yes!!” Troy replied After a few minutes they calmed down, and Troy turned to Thomas and said in what he thought was a sexy voice: “So do you want to know what your dare is?” “Oh yes please” “hmmm… lets see. Uhh, I dare you to… give me a massage!” “haha, ok sure- by the way, do you want to sleep over tonight??” Thomas said with a smile Troy loved when Thomas smiled…he looked so damn cute. And that smile with his adorable puppy dog eyes was to die for: “Like I could say no when you look at me like that. But seriously, I would love to” “sweet, so do you want that massage now or wait until later when my parents go to bed and we can do it properly.” “Lets wait till they go to bed” “I was hoping youd say that. Wanna watch a movie? “Yeah, sure” Thomas put in whatever movie he first picked up. It didn’t really matter to him. They started off the movie on opposite ends of the couch, but within ten minutes they were almost right beside each other. Within another 10 they were cuddling together. Within another ten minutes they were softly making out, not caring one bit about the movie- or anything for that matter. Thomas just felt so right when he was with Troy. He had no worries in the world, and he felt so secure. He got butterflies every time he looked at Troy, almost nervous that this would end. And every time they broke apart from making out, one look in Troy’s eyes and he realized he never wanted to let go. They waited until they heard Thomas’s parents go upstairs, then they made their way up to Thomas room. “How bout that massage”
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04-20-2011, 02:45 PM | #24 |
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Okay, this is officially one of my favorite stories on gD! Its awesome how it's about love instead of most stories that are about sex and dares. I really love it sizzle, keep it up! <3
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04-22-2011, 01:45 PM | #26 |
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Damn! So I FINALLY got to reading this story sizzle, and what can I say. IT'S AMAZING! I wish I could've commented much earlier just so you could know how great of a job you are doing. One of the best. You're an excellent writer and I love how the story is progressing. Definitely not rushing into anything. Is this story based on any non-fiction or is it all fiction?
Just wow. You're doing a great job. I love reading it. Keep up the fantastic work! Can't wait for the next update!
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04-24-2011, 05:59 AM | #27 |
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neww part
“How bout that massage?” Troy said to Thomas playfully “Ohhh I almost forgot” Thomas winked Thomas went to the washroom to find some oil for the massage. He found some, and went back to his bedroom. He turned down the lights a bit and put on some faint music... whatever was on his itunes. “Ok get undressed” They both stripped down to their underwear and got on the bed. Troy lay down, ready. Thomas awkwardly mounted him, sat back on his butt, and got out the lotion. He poured some onto his hands and began rubbing into Troy’s back. He rubbed the oil all down his back and torso, feeling the soft smooth skin. He started at the shoulders and rubbed well into his neck, trying to give him a solid massage. “Just relax” “he could feel Troy breathe deeply and felt his body untense. He kept making his way lower and lower, until he got to the waistband of his boxer-briefs. He hesitated for a minute, before slowly peeking his hand under the tip of them, his heart pounding. Was this the right thing to do? Was Troy comfortable with this? He knew he wanted it more than anything. To have Troy’s arms and body wrapped around him, to be lovingly embraced. Troy seemed to not have moved, so he got brave, faced his nerves, and slowly pulled down his boxers revealing his perfectly shaped, round, smooth ass. He started rubbing a little bit on top of the cheeks before he got out the lotion and dropped a generous amount onto troy’s lower back. He rubbed it in thoroughly on Troy’s butt, and eventually started gently tracing his crack down to the hole. He was tempted to put his finger in, but restrained. He instead teased the hole a little bit by applying pressure, and then he continued with the massage. He felt Troy shudder with pleasure. His hands made their way to the back of Troy’s thighs, and he continued with a light massage until he got to the feet, and stopped. At this time, he had a huge boner obviously, and was sure Troy had an even bigger one. But they had never seen each other naked- this was a big step. --------------------------- Troy lay down on the bed and got ready for the massage. He felt the cool, refreshing oils drip onto his back and he tried to breathe deep and relax. He then felt Thomas’s soft hands rubbing his sore neck and he let out a little groan. “Ahh this feels so good” he muttered under his breath The massage continued, With Troy being extremely turned on by this- The guy who he really liked giving him a full massage with them both practically naked and with hard ons- yeah, this was gonna be a good night. But he was still nervous. He noticed Thomas stopped at the waistband of his boxer-briefs. He exhaled coolly. He really hoped Thomas decided to keep going. He wanted this so badly. To his extreme satisfaction he noticed that after a bit of an awkward pause, Thomas began pulling down his boxers. His dick started aching to be touched, has so into it. He closed his eyes and let Thomas take him. He tensed up when he felt his hole almost get penetrated- “Am I ready for that yet?” he thought to himself. The end of the massage came quicker than he had hoped. Thomas had come to the ends of his feet; he had nowhere left to rub. He was sad until he heard those beautiful, beautiful words come nervously out of Thomas’s mouth: “Turn over”
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04-24-2011, 01:03 PM | #28 |
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I love the multi-point-of-view. Gave it a little twist haha. Good job! Can't wait for the next chapter.
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04-24-2011, 03:28 PM | #29 |
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Pretty amazing, what you're writing there. I hope you keep going and I just have to read more.
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04-24-2011, 09:54 PM | #30 |
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Great new chapter! I love this story, and I'm glad that you haven't really rushed into sex. You're taking the time to build the characters and their relationship, which is wonderful!!
Well done!
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