[Non-Fiction] Me and my fantasies: inside a 14 year old girl

[erinmc]

Originally Posted by henryzz

Interesting story. Can I ask for an attempt at proper puctuation and capititalization?

i dunno, can you??

[Lyn]

Originally Posted by erinmc

i dunno, can you??

Hahahaha you're so funny!

[henryzz]

Originally Posted by erinmc

i dunno, can you??

I should have thought of that myself. It's my type of humour. Seriously though it would make it easier tk read. I know it can be difficult to get into a habit of writing with punctuation. It took me a couple of years and many people getting frustrated with me before I cracked it.

[zac]

LOVE THIS.....just make sure you take your time in description tho xx

[erinmc]

Originally Posted by henryzz

I should have thought of that myself. It's my type of humour. Seriously though it would make it easier tk read. I know it can be difficult to get into a habit of writing with punctuation. It took me a couple of years and many people getting frustrated with me before I cracked it.

haha sorry i was writing it late adn rushed

[pymani96]

I'm a bit behind, so i've just read all if it. It is well good, so i'll be second person to vote tonight.
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Pymani96

[erinmc]

Originally Posted by pymani96

I'm a bit behind, so i've just read all if it. It is well good, so i'll be second person to vote tonight.
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Pymani96

so what do u vote for??

and vote guys cuz i can post another story on weds

[Jake_NN_Bake]

I don't really care which one you post cause they are really good, but if i had to pick i'd choose Number 1.

[ConverseLuv]

Wow sounds lyk u hav a fun life! I've done lyk nothing besides hugging n cuddling n gettin changed in the same room as guys (in a closet they wer outside the closet) n once tryin on a dress with two of my friends n one was a guy n he saw me in my bra, no biggie :P I hope wen I go to high school nxt yr I'll hav fun

[pymani96]

Originally Posted by erinmc

so what do u vote for??

and vote guys cuz i can post another story on weds

Yeah, that's what i voted for!
Pymani96

[Lyn]

Originally Posted by erinmc

so what do u vote for??

and vote guys cuz i can post another story on weds

I'll vote for #1

[pymani96]

Originally Posted by erinmc

so what do u vote for??

and vote guys cuz i can post another story on weds

Sort of lost the plot. I wasn't paying attention to the earlier posts as the later posts. I vote #1 for the next part.
Pymani96

[Dylan xX]

Originally Posted by erinmc

I've been reading getDare forums for a couple years but i never get an account...too lazy, i guess. But i read them every night and I just cant get enough, especially Dylan and Connor stories and other MxM stories...idk why. I ADMIRE them like no other.

Thanks erin, that means a lot .

And even though I'm Connorsexual (lmao), I love how you put the audience inside your mind and body, simple and clean .

I'd say the only problem with this is punctuation, caps and grammar. Other than that, well done! Keep it up

-Dylsterr

[zac]

Originally Posted by erinmc

so what do u vote for??

and vote guys cuz i can post another story on weds

forgot to vote.....i say no. 1 xxx

[yomoma15]

greattt story(: i vote for number one next(: