Fiction: Sleepaway Camp Slave - Page 2

Annynamous · 03-21-2010, 05:47 PM

Just an FYI matt is the kid that Luke became friends with at the initiation.

Annynamous · 03-21-2010, 07:19 PM

Chapter 7

"What?" matt said
"Luke here is our slave. You will join him as a second slave" Dan replied
"And why would I agree to that?"
"Rick and Joe why don't you show him"
Matt was carried off out back behind the bathroom.*
"Wait!" I pleaded "Please let him go he doesn't have anything to do with this!"
"Well now he does. Plus, now you have a friend to suffer with" said Dan.*
I didn't know what to think. I guess I kind of was glad I wouldn't be alone... But matt didn't deserve this. Then again, neither did I.
"Also you just disobeyed multiple rules!" said Dan and he shoved my head back in the toilet. He also gave me a wedgie at the same time and I had my thong back on so it HURT! Then he took me out back where Joe was holding up matt by a wedgie and Rick was punching him.*
Dan pointed to the dumpster sitting next to where we were and said "throw them in" They threw matt and i in. Matt was shouting and cursing at them. I felt the dumpster begin to move. "Stop!" I whispered to matt but he didn't listen. Then all of the sudden we were rolling down a hill. Food scraps flew all over us as we were thrown around in the dumpster like popcorn. We finnaly stopped moving and matt an I laid there in pain. "What is wrong with them?" matt croaked.
"I don't know"

Jellybones · 03-21-2010, 07:26 PM

Im really liking this! I cant wait for more. Thanks for such frequent updates!

cudles12323 · 03-21-2010, 08:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Jellybones

Im really liking this! I cant wait for more. Thanks for such frequent updates!

yea most authors suck at doing that

elektro · 03-21-2010, 08:27 PM

oohhh! this is a good story! add something where one of the guys shave you completely everywhere! and they use a shoestring or something and tie it around your balls to make a leash.

Demon Thief · 03-21-2010, 10:00 PM

This is different from a lot of things I've read. I hope to read more shortly.

Annynamous · 03-22-2010, 01:27 PM

No update today but I will give you another nice long one tomorrow. Glad you guys are enjoying it!

maxim · 03-22-2010, 04:49 PM

It's ok, I am glad you are going on with this story.

Annynamous · 03-23-2010, 02:49 PM

Chapter 8

When we finnaly regained our strength matt kicked the dumpster open. I screamed "NO!"
Our maters were standing outside the dumpster. "That isn't a very welcoming way to greet someone slave"
"You are the worst people alive!" I screamed "What the hell is wrong with you?!" I was losing it "Get AWAY!"*
"You just made a big mistake" said Dan.*
He was right. I had basiclly just commited suicide. They were going to kill us.
"Get up."*
We did.
"Both of you bend over and pull down your pants and underwear"
"Whats going on?" said matt
"You are going to be punished"*
"But matt didn't do anything!" I protested
"Well he will have to suffer from your mistake"
Then he began to whip us on our bare bottoms.*
"owww!"
"Shut up!"
After at least 10 lashes each he stopped. *
"Tie these around your balls" Dan handed us two shoestrings. We did, not wanting to be whipped again. When we were done he Gave each string a hard yank. We cringed.*
"These will be your leashes." said Dan*
Joe and Rick each took a string. They yanked us all the way back to our cabin. Then they pushed us down on my bunk.*
"Hmm what should we do with the two of you next?"

Hey everyone hope you're enjoying this story. I've got plans to put a huge twist in the story but you guys can choose when it happens. Should it come in the next chapter or should I wait a little while? I'm still taking other suggestions too. Thanks. *
*

glasssbottle174 · 03-23-2010, 03:30 PM

this has been really really good. keep it up

Annynamous · 03-23-2010, 03:58 PM

Haha just realized that in the first chapter one of the guys was called Nick and I've been calling him Rick lol sorry bout that. I'll keep him as Rick now

maxim · 03-23-2010, 04:43 PM

Oooh, I like huge twists!
and suprsingly I like this story
suprising because I usually don't like blackmail
stories.. SO, Keep up the good work

Annynamous · 03-23-2010, 06:53 PM

Chapter 9

"I have an idea" said Rick*
They went over to the other side of the cabin and had a whispered conversation.*
Then they stopped and came back over to us.*
"Stand backs facing each other" said Dan.*
We did and he tied us together with a rope and pulled us by our 'leashes' behind the cabin.
Then Joe began to pour maple syrup all over us. It was all gross and sticky. Then they brought us over to a big mud pit and rolled us around in it. But the worst was yet to come *Lastly they walked us over to the horse farm that happened to be at the camp. I started to scream as they began to pull us toward the horses manure pile. That didn't stop them from throwing us into the pile.*
"Ewww" we shouted*
Our masters laughed "we'll be back in an hour or so"
After they left I whispered to matt "we need to find a way to stop this!"*
"I know but how?" matt replied "they're bigger and stronger than us"
"I don't know. I just don't know."

Chapter 10
When they came back to get us I thought our noses were going to fall off from the horrible stench. They brought us back to the cabin and fed us, but not letting us wash or untying us. "I have to go to the bathroom" I said
"Me too" said matt*
"go in your pants" said Dan "and that is an order"
We did adding to the grossness of our situation.*
"See you guys later" said Dan. "We are going to play football so have fun tyed up while were gone!" they all laughed
"I hate this!" matt shouted.*
"Wait a second" I said "we have to roll over to that bed"*
When we got over to the bunk matt said "what are you doing?"
I stuck my head under the bunk and used it to pull a magazine out from under the bunk. I grinned. "I have some great news" I pushed the porn magazine over where Matt could see it.*

Thanks for the comments!

maxim · 03-23-2010, 07:01 PM

I like it.
Although, It seems like you are starting to rushg things
Ooh, Porn >.<

Annynamous · 03-24-2010, 05:42 PM

New post tomorrow. Btw is this good singing? http://songcovers5000.blogspot.com/2...f-jupiter.html

03-21-2010, 05:47 PM	#16
Annynamous Account Banned Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 109	Just an FYI matt is the kid that Luke became friends with at the initiation. __________________ Likes: wedgies, swirly, pee, ball torture, sock gag OK (good for punishments): poo, frontal hanging wedgie, sleeping Limits: Xdress, public, anyone else, messy, anal, sexual, hanging wedgie, masturbation http://songcovers5000.blogspot.com/2...f-jupiter.html <--- me singing pm me with your opinion. Is it good?

03-21-2010, 07:19 PM	#17
Annynamous Account Banned Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 109	Chapter 7 "What?" matt said "Luke here is our slave. You will join him as a second slave" Dan replied "And why would I agree to that?" "Rick and Joe why don't you show him" Matt was carried off out back behind the bathroom.* "Wait!" I pleaded "Please let him go he doesn't have anything to do with this!" "Well now he does. Plus, now you have a friend to suffer with" said Dan.* I didn't know what to think. I guess I kind of was glad I wouldn't be alone... But matt didn't deserve this. Then again, neither did I. "Also you just disobeyed multiple rules!" said Dan and he shoved my head back in the toilet. He also gave me a wedgie at the same time and I had my thong back on so it HURT! Then he took me out back where Joe was holding up matt by a wedgie and Rick was punching him.* Dan pointed to the dumpster sitting next to where we were and said "throw them in" They threw matt and i in. Matt was shouting and cursing at them. I felt the dumpster begin to move. "Stop!" I whispered to matt but he didn't listen. Then all of the sudden we were rolling down a hill. Food scraps flew all over us as we were thrown around in the dumpster like popcorn. We finnaly stopped moving and matt an I laid there in pain. "What is wrong with them?" matt croaked. "I don't know" __________________ Likes: wedgies, swirly, pee, ball torture, sock gag OK (good for punishments): poo, frontal hanging wedgie, sleeping Limits: Xdress, public, anyone else, messy, anal, sexual, hanging wedgie, masturbation http://songcovers5000.blogspot.com/2...f-jupiter.html <--- me singing pm me with your opinion. Is it good?

03-21-2010, 10:00 PM	#21
Demon Thief getDare Devil Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: In the US Posts: 1,013	This is different from a lot of things I've read. I hope to read more shortly. __________________ "How many seconds in eternity?" And the shepherd's boy says, "this is a mountain of pure diamond. It takes an hour to climb it and an hour to go around it. Every hundred years a little bird comes and sharpens its beak on the diamond mountain. And when the entire mountain is chiseled away then the first second of eternity will have passed." You must think that's a hell of a long time. Personally, I think that's a hell of a bird. 14 years on GetDare!

03-22-2010, 01:27 PM	#22
Annynamous Account Banned Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 109	No update today but I will give you another nice long one tomorrow. Glad you guys are enjoying it! __________________ Likes: wedgies, swirly, pee, ball torture, sock gag OK (good for punishments): poo, frontal hanging wedgie, sleeping Limits: Xdress, public, anyone else, messy, anal, sexual, hanging wedgie, masturbation http://songcovers5000.blogspot.com/2...f-jupiter.html <--- me singing pm me with your opinion. Is it good?

03-22-2010, 04:49 PM	#23
maxim Account Banned Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: UNITED STATES Posts: 1,121 Blog Entries: 33	*It's ok, I am glad you are going on with this story.* __________________ [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]

03-21-2010, 07:26 PM	#18
Jellybones Member Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 61	Im really liking this! I cant wait for more. Thanks for such frequent updates!

03-21-2010, 08:27 PM	#20
elektro Account Banned Join Date: Mar 2010 Posts: 3	oohhh! this is a good story! add something where one of the guys shave you completely everywhere! and they use a shoestring or something and tie it around your balls to make a leash.

03-23-2010, 02:49 PM	#24
Annynamous Account Banned Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 109	Chapter 8 When we finnaly regained our strength matt kicked the dumpster open. I screamed "NO!" Our maters were standing outside the dumpster. "That isn't a very welcoming way to greet someone slave" "You are the worst people alive!" I screamed "What the hell is wrong with you?!" I was losing it "Get AWAY!"* "You just made a big mistake" said Dan.* He was right. I had basiclly just commited suicide. They were going to kill us. "Get up."* We did. "Both of you bend over and pull down your pants and underwear" "Whats going on?" said matt "You are going to be punished"* "But matt didn't do anything!" I protested "Well he will have to suffer from your mistake" Then he began to whip us on our bare bottoms.* "owww!" "Shut up!" After at least 10 lashes each he stopped. * "Tie these around your balls" Dan handed us two shoestrings. We did, not wanting to be whipped again. When we were done he Gave each string a hard yank. We cringed.* "These will be your leashes." said Dan* Joe and Rick each took a string. They yanked us all the way back to our cabin. Then they pushed us down on my bunk.* "Hmm what should we do with the two of you next?" Hey everyone hope you're enjoying this story. I've got plans to put a huge twist in the story but you guys can choose when it happens. Should it come in the next chapter or should I wait a little while? I'm still taking other suggestions too. Thanks. * * __________________ Likes: wedgies, swirly, pee, ball torture, sock gag OK (good for punishments): poo, frontal hanging wedgie, sleeping Limits: Xdress, public, anyone else, messy, anal, sexual, hanging wedgie, masturbation http://songcovers5000.blogspot.com/2...f-jupiter.html <--- me singing pm me with your opinion. Is it good?

03-23-2010, 03:30 PM	#25
glasssbottle174 getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 263	this has been really really good. keep it up

03-23-2010, 03:58 PM	#26
Annynamous Account Banned Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 109	Haha just realized that in the first chapter one of the guys was called Nick and I've been calling him Rick lol sorry bout that. I'll keep him as Rick now __________________ Likes: wedgies, swirly, pee, ball torture, sock gag OK (good for punishments): poo, frontal hanging wedgie, sleeping Limits: Xdress, public, anyone else, messy, anal, sexual, hanging wedgie, masturbation http://songcovers5000.blogspot.com/2...f-jupiter.html <--- me singing pm me with your opinion. Is it good?

03-23-2010, 04:43 PM	#27
maxim Account Banned Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: UNITED STATES Posts: 1,121 Blog Entries: 33	Oooh, I like huge twists! and suprsingly I like this story suprising because I usually don't like blackmail stories.. SO, Keep up the good work __________________ [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]

03-23-2010, 06:53 PM	#28
Annynamous Account Banned Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 109	Chapter 9 "I have an idea" said Rick* They went over to the other side of the cabin and had a whispered conversation.* Then they stopped and came back over to us.* "Stand backs facing each other" said Dan.* We did and he tied us together with a rope and pulled us by our 'leashes' behind the cabin. Then Joe began to pour maple syrup all over us. It was all gross and sticky. Then they brought us over to a big mud pit and rolled us around in it. But the worst was yet to come Lastly they walked us over to the horse farm that happened to be at the camp. I started to scream as they began to pull us toward the horses manure pile. That didn't stop them from throwing us into the pile. "Ewww" we shouted* Our masters laughed "we'll be back in an hour or so" After they left I whispered to matt "we need to find a way to stop this!"* "I know but how?" matt replied "they're bigger and stronger than us" "I don't know. I just don't know." Chapter 10 When they came back to get us I thought our noses were going to fall off from the horrible stench. They brought us back to the cabin and fed us, but not letting us wash or untying us. "I have to go to the bathroom" I said "Me too" said matt* "go in your pants" said Dan "and that is an order" We did adding to the grossness of our situation.* "See you guys later" said Dan. "We are going to play football so have fun tyed up while were gone!" they all laughed "I hate this!" matt shouted.* "Wait a second" I said "we have to roll over to that bed"* When we got over to the bunk matt said "what are you doing?" I stuck my head under the bunk and used it to pull a magazine out from under the bunk. I grinned. "I have some great news" I pushed the porn magazine over where Matt could see it.* Thanks for the comments! __________________ Likes: wedgies, swirly, pee, ball torture, sock gag OK (good for punishments): poo, frontal hanging wedgie, sleeping Limits: Xdress, public, anyone else, messy, anal, sexual, hanging wedgie, masturbation http://songcovers5000.blogspot.com/2...f-jupiter.html <--- me singing pm me with your opinion. Is it good?

03-23-2010, 07:01 PM	#29
maxim Account Banned Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: UNITED STATES Posts: 1,121 Blog Entries: 33	*I like it.* *Although, It seems like you are starting to rushg things* *Ooh, Porn >.<* __________________ [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]

03-24-2010, 05:42 PM	#30
Annynamous Account Banned Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 109	New post tomorrow. Btw is this good singing? http://songcovers5000.blogspot.com/2...f-jupiter.html __________________ Likes: wedgies, swirly, pee, ball torture, sock gag OK (good for punishments): poo, frontal hanging wedgie, sleeping Limits: Xdress, public, anyone else, messy, anal, sexual, hanging wedgie, masturbation http://songcovers5000.blogspot.com/2...f-jupiter.html <--- me singing pm me with your opinion. Is it good?