A slave too young - Page 2

≈ Wedgies ≈ · 09-27-2008, 02:41 PM

Hello? I am loving this story! Please continue!

Redneckgirl88 · 09-27-2008, 09:41 PM

I am loving this story... I was just able to start to post today... Please continue. I want to find out what happens..

dareboy2 · 09-28-2008, 03:40 PM

this is real good please continue!!!

tilly07 · 09-30-2008, 01:07 AM

I apologize for not posting in a while but I might decide to quit the story aswell as getdare due to being lied to by many guys pretending to be girls. I have been utterly dissapointed of what has happened and it will take a few days for me to figure out what to do. Again I apologize that it had to come to this but blame those who add me to msn/yahoo without permission and to those who prentended that they were girls.

Wayne King™ · 10-01-2008, 01:29 AM

Why!!!! No, please don't go...

Redneckgirl88 · 10-01-2008, 01:37 AM

Please you can't leave... You are a great writer.. and a good person.. People are just stupid, ignore them... Just to let you know... if you havent already figured it out.. i am a girl... Those guys who say thier girls.. are stupid and they shouldnt be doing it.. if they want to be a girl get a sex change... !!!! Either way please stay... and contiue..I know a lot of people want to know what happens in this story...

tilly07 · 10-01-2008, 01:38 AM

Fine I'll reconsider.

Redneckgirl88 · 10-01-2008, 06:10 PM

Oh yay... Thank you Thank You... *bows at your feet*...

IggyRide · 10-01-2008, 07:11 PM

PLEASE WRITE MORE

is this fiction or non-fiction?

tilly07 · 10-02-2008, 05:07 PM

Ok after the long pause of the story and deciding to continue I present you with the next part. Also this story is entirely Fiction(Not real).

The end of this part, I really don't know where it came from maybe what I was thinking about at that moment but I guess you can call it a cliff hanger or a turning point in the story.

Part 3:
It was silent for a few moments Alex staring into the webcam not knowing what to do next.
“Ok I back Rebecca replied”
“So how do you like the taste of your sister she questioned?”
“She tastes delicious Alex replied.”
“Great, so next go back to your sisters room get a bra, mini skirt, and a halter top.”
Alex proceeded with his next task and retrieved the clothes that were requested of him.

“Ok great, I want you to undress right now she demanded.”

Alex hesitated for a moment but began undressing and finally came to his boxers.

“Well… Rebecca said, what are we waiting for?”

“Let’s see if you are a man or a sissy.”

Alex slowly pulled off his boxers revealing his dick for Rebecca to see.

(Chuckles)

“Not bad not bad, Rebecca said with a gracious voice.”

“Ok I want you to put the clothes on right in front of me and then I want you to pose for the webcam so I may take photos of you.”

Alex grabbed the clothes and started to dress up and then started to pose for the webcam for 10 minutes until Rebecca motioned him to stop.

“That was great she said you’re becoming an obedient slave I should say.”

“Ok back to the real business now. When you signed the contract, there was a part stating that you would give me all your contact(s) information so I would like it if you could give me your email account(s), your MySpace, your cell phone numbers, and any other contact information you have.”

Alex was shocked for a moment wondering what the heck he just got himself into, and what to do. Alex finally decided to play it cool and follow what she said or it could turn out much worse. He began to collect all his information and proceeded to put it into a word document and sent it to Rebecca. After she had received the document she skimmed through the contacts and looked at one of his emails to see Mrs. Beth.

“Alex if I may ask who Mrs. Beth is?”

“Um well... (Sighs) she is one of my teachers from school.”

Rebecca awed in disbelief as if she had hit jackpot.

“Well well well, what a surprise, I wonder what your teacher would say if she saw these pictures of you.”

Alex was in utter shock unable to even utter a single word out of his already trembling body.

“OK Alex calm down I won’t send anything to her unless I had a reason to so relax.

“Alex breathed a sigh of relief and slouched in his chair as if he barely missed being struck by a deadly blow.

“Well take a 30 minute break I need to think of some ideas for later ok?”

Alex was relieved after the quiet odd welcoming of his mistress and went to the kitchen to get something to eat and watch some TV. As he entered the kitchen he went directly to the fridge took out a soda, made a sandwich, and hopped onto the couch. Alex ate and watched for nearly 20 minutes before finally pausing briefly to think of what has succumbed to the past hour. At moments pausing in shock and laughing at what he had done but at the same time felt enthusiastic and prepared for what he might encounter soon. Thinking back to what just happened, he was unsure if she was serious about what she had said about sending pictures to his teacher because she was hot and all but that would make a real fool of him if not get him in serious trouble. Alex turned to the clock and noticed his 30 minutes were about over and rushed to his room just in time for Rebecca’s return.

“Welcome back Alex, how was your break, did you have enough time to contemplate about being my slave?”

“Taking a deep breath, Alex said yes I have thought about everything and what might happen next.”

“Smiling Rebecca paused for a quick moment, well I have also formulated some ideas in my free time and we will get started in a minute, is that clear?”

“Yes mistress.”

“Good now go take off your clothes but leave on your boxers and wait for me.

Alex did just that and took a seat wondering if this day could get any more shocking then it has already been. A frown began to form on his face and he stared into the abyss wondering what he had just gotten himself into and if this could have been the worst mistake he has ever made. Turning to the webcam, Alex noticed that Rebecca was looking at him silently but with a guilty and worried face on.

“Alex…, Rebecca questioned a low comforting tone that sent a wave of calmness around the room.”

“Are you alright again she said with a comforting tone?”

Alex turned to face the webcam, his eyes glistening in the light but just gazed with a desolate look.

Wayne King™ · 10-03-2008, 01:18 AM

Wow! I love this story, go on!

LilAngel · 10-03-2008, 05:28 AM

This story has great potential, but just wondering about the second parts of your quotation marks somewhat makes it rather disorienting. You may want to try placing them after the words they actually say.

Sexy Guy 93 · 10-03-2008, 05:55 AM

Great story, I'm loving it, Can't wait for the next part

applebooty · 10-03-2008, 06:41 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by lil_black_angel

This story has great potential, but just wondering about the second parts of your quotation marks somewhat makes it rather disorienting. You may want to try placing them after the words they actually say.

Agreed. Lines like this:

“Smiling Rebecca paused for a quick moment, well I have also formulated some ideas in my free time and we will get started in a minute, is that clear?”

Should be:

Smiling, Rebecca paused for a quick moment. "Well, I have also formulated some ideas in my free time, and we will get started in a minute. Is that clear?"

Not bad though. Not bad at all. I hope you've decided to stay for good.

tilly07 · 10-07-2008, 02:15 AM

I will try to start working on the next part soon but I decided, please discard the part were they get into the silent conversation because to me it has ruined the whole story so again please ignore that part.

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09-30-2008, 01:07 AM	#19
tilly07 Account Banned Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Currently lost.. Posts: 204 Blog Entries: 1	I apologize for not posting in a while but I might decide to quit the story aswell as getdare due to being lied to by many guys pretending to be girls. I have been utterly dissapointed of what has happened and it will take a few days for me to figure out what to do. Again I apologize that it had to come to this but blame those who add me to msn/yahoo without permission and to those who prentended that they were girls. __________________ “I know it seems hard sometimes but remember one thing. Through every dark night, theres a bright day after that. So no matter how hard it get, stick your chest out, keep ya head up.... and handle it.”-Tupac Shakur

10-01-2008, 01:37 AM	#21
Redneckgirl88 Member Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Washingtion State, USA Posts: 36	Please you can't leave... You are a great writer.. and a good person.. People are just stupid, ignore them... Just to let you know... if you havent already figured it out.. i am a girl... Those guys who say thier girls.. are stupid and they shouldnt be doing it.. if they want to be a girl get a sex change... !!!! Either way please stay... and contiue..I know a lot of people want to know what happens in this story... __________________ 20/f/usa Yes i am in to s/m.. but right now i have to much on my plate.. so please do not ask me.. thank you! Limits: No family, friends, messy, permanment. Have a question just ask.

10-01-2008, 01:38 AM	#22
tilly07 Account Banned Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Currently lost.. Posts: 204 Blog Entries: 1	Fine I'll reconsider. __________________ “I know it seems hard sometimes but remember one thing. Through every dark night, theres a bright day after that. So no matter how hard it get, stick your chest out, keep ya head up.... and handle it.”-Tupac Shakur

10-01-2008, 06:10 PM	#23
Redneckgirl88 Member Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Washingtion State, USA Posts: 36	Oh yay... Thank you Thank You... bows at your feet... __________________ 20/f/usa Yes i am in to s/m.. but right now i have to much on my plate.. so please do not ask me.. thank you! Limits: No family, friends, messy, permanment. Have a question just ask.

09-27-2008, 09:41 PM	#17
Redneckgirl88 Member Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Washingtion State, USA Posts: 36	I am loving this story... I was just able to start to post today... Please continue. I want to find out what happens..

09-28-2008, 03:40 PM	#18
dareboy2 Account Banned Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: New York Posts: 181	this is real good please continue!!!

10-01-2008, 01:29 AM	#20
Wayne King™ Member Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 33	Why!!!! No, please don't go...

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10-02-2008, 05:07 PM	#25
tilly07 Account Banned Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Currently lost.. Posts: 204 Blog Entries: 1	Ok after the long pause of the story and deciding to continue I present you with the next part. Also this story is entirely Fiction(Not real). The end of this part, I really don't know where it came from maybe what I was thinking about at that moment but I guess you can call it a cliff hanger or a turning point in the story. Part 3: It was silent for a few moments Alex staring into the webcam not knowing what to do next. “Ok I back Rebecca replied” “So how do you like the taste of your sister she questioned?” “She tastes delicious Alex replied.” “Great, so next go back to your sisters room get a bra, mini skirt, and a halter top.” Alex proceeded with his next task and retrieved the clothes that were requested of him. “Ok great, I want you to undress right now she demanded.” Alex hesitated for a moment but began undressing and finally came to his boxers. “Well… Rebecca said, what are we waiting for?” “Let’s see if you are a man or a sissy.” Alex slowly pulled off his boxers revealing his dick for Rebecca to see. (Chuckles) “Not bad not bad, Rebecca said with a gracious voice.” “Ok I want you to put the clothes on right in front of me and then I want you to pose for the webcam so I may take photos of you.” Alex grabbed the clothes and started to dress up and then started to pose for the webcam for 10 minutes until Rebecca motioned him to stop. “That was great she said you’re becoming an obedient slave I should say.” “Ok back to the real business now. When you signed the contract, there was a part stating that you would give me all your contact(s) information so I would like it if you could give me your email account(s), your MySpace, your cell phone numbers, and any other contact information you have.” Alex was shocked for a moment wondering what the heck he just got himself into, and what to do. Alex finally decided to play it cool and follow what she said or it could turn out much worse. He began to collect all his information and proceeded to put it into a word document and sent it to Rebecca. After she had received the document she skimmed through the contacts and looked at one of his emails to see Mrs. Beth. “Alex if I may ask who Mrs. Beth is?” “Um well... (Sighs) she is one of my teachers from school.” Rebecca awed in disbelief as if she had hit jackpot. “Well well well, what a surprise, I wonder what your teacher would say if she saw these pictures of you.” Alex was in utter shock unable to even utter a single word out of his already trembling body. “OK Alex calm down I won’t send anything to her unless I had a reason to so relax. “Alex breathed a sigh of relief and slouched in his chair as if he barely missed being struck by a deadly blow. “Well take a 30 minute break I need to think of some ideas for later ok?” Alex was relieved after the quiet odd welcoming of his mistress and went to the kitchen to get something to eat and watch some TV. As he entered the kitchen he went directly to the fridge took out a soda, made a sandwich, and hopped onto the couch. Alex ate and watched for nearly 20 minutes before finally pausing briefly to think of what has succumbed to the past hour. At moments pausing in shock and laughing at what he had done but at the same time felt enthusiastic and prepared for what he might encounter soon. Thinking back to what just happened, he was unsure if she was serious about what she had said about sending pictures to his teacher because she was hot and all but that would make a real fool of him if not get him in serious trouble. Alex turned to the clock and noticed his 30 minutes were about over and rushed to his room just in time for Rebecca’s return. “Welcome back Alex, how was your break, did you have enough time to contemplate about being my slave?” “Taking a deep breath, Alex said yes I have thought about everything and what might happen next.” “Smiling Rebecca paused for a quick moment, well I have also formulated some ideas in my free time and we will get started in a minute, is that clear?” “Yes mistress.” “Good now go take off your clothes but leave on your boxers and wait for me. Alex did just that and took a seat wondering if this day could get any more shocking then it has already been. A frown began to form on his face and he stared into the abyss wondering what he had just gotten himself into and if this could have been the worst mistake he has ever made. Turning to the webcam, Alex noticed that Rebecca was looking at him silently but with a guilty and worried face on. “Alex…, Rebecca questioned a low comforting tone that sent a wave of calmness around the room.” “Are you alright again she said with a comforting tone?” Alex turned to face the webcam, his eyes glistening in the light but just gazed with a desolate look. __________________ “I know it seems hard sometimes but remember one thing. Through every dark night, theres a bright day after that. So no matter how hard it get, stick your chest out, keep ya head up.... and handle it.”-Tupac Shakur Last edited by tilly07; 10-02-2008 at 05:13 PM.

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LilAngel getDare Addict Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Australia Posts: 2,171 Blog Entries: 44	This story has great potential, but just wondering about the second parts of your quotation marks somewhat makes it rather disorienting. You may want to try placing them after the words they actually say. __________________ With love, from your favourite administrator. ♥ 8==========)~~~~~~~~ WORSHIPS KANGAROOS

10-03-2008, 05:55 AM	#28
Sexy Guy 93 Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 23	Great story, I'm loving it, Can't wait for the next part

10-07-2008, 02:15 AM	#30
tilly07 Account Banned Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Currently lost.. Posts: 204 Blog Entries: 1	I will try to start working on the next part soon but I decided, please discard the part were they get into the silent conversation because to me it has ruined the whole story so again please ignore that part. __________________ “I know it seems hard sometimes but remember one thing. Through every dark night, theres a bright day after that. So no matter how hard it get, stick your chest out, keep ya head up.... and handle it.”-Tupac Shakur