11-21-2010, 12:33 AM | #271 |
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Please continue its a great story I just read the whole thing I love it
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11-21-2010, 01:27 AM | #272 |
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Also love the story, as stated previously. and
C O N G R A T U L A T I O N S on reaching 100,000 viewers
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11-23-2010, 02:14 PM | #273 |
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Chapter 28
I woke up being poked in the nose by what I believed to be Rose’s toe, due to the fluorescent pink nail polish. “Ugh” I sniffed before carefully climbing out over the two girls. I was naked but it felt weirdly okay, more comfortable I’d ever felt nude before especially in front of people. I turned and looked at Sasha and Rose twisted around each other in my small bed, I felt strangely bonded with them now. I was very not involved in last night’s antics; I knew I wouldn’t be it was too alien for me even after everything that had happened. Especially after everything that had happened, I felt I needed to hold something back, keep some of my usual anxious, non-risk-taking self. I checked the time on my phone, 5:18am, I should have known it was too early. It was too quiet, no screaming girls, no laughing kids and no music. I opened the patio door blinds and squinted when the sun hit my face, I knew I’d never forget this camp. I could see a lake from here, the sun sparkled off it, and it made me feel like swimming. For a moment I thought about running down there naked as the day I was born and jumping into the water. I cautiously stepped onto the wooden panels that made the cabin patio, my skin warmed as I came out of the shade. I closed my eyes and absorbed the heat. “Ahhhhhhhhh” A high pitched squeal erupted from my room and I swivelled round expecting to witness a bloody trauma scene. I hopped through the door and saw Rose staring intently into the mirror with a look of absolute horror in her eyes. Though I should have been expecting it I was slightly shocked at her nakedness. The sunlight hit her skin and her figure was perfect, her back arched as she squinted at herself in the mirror before bending forward to get a closer look. I tore my eyes away from her remembering she had screamed. “What’s wrong Rose!” I looked at her to see if I could find what was making her look so distressed. “There is gum. There is gum IN MY HAIR! Who was chewing gum?! How did this even... ARGH!” She clenched her fists and actually stomped the ground before storming out red-faced across the hall to her room. I sighed, shook my head and laughed a little before yanking open a stiff draw below the mirror and pulling out a large purple t-shirt with a dinosaur on it. I pulled it over my head and went to poke Sasha. “How are you still asleep after that?” I muttered, Sasha’s face was squished into the bed and a puddle of drool outlined her face. “ew” I cringed and poked her nose. “I’m not asleep” she opened one eye “I just find it’s simpler for me to pretend I am when it comes to Rose” I giggled and tried to avert my eyes when she carelessly rolled over. She stretched and I couldn’t help but gaze at the length of her body. I was secretly glad that she and Rose were so comfortable with their nudity around me; I didn’t mind it at all. She rolled about, yawning and stretching, obviously not wanting to get up. Sasha finally groaned and sat up on the bed, she rubbed her eyes to help herself wake up, and then dragged herself into a standing position “I better go help her... Maybe I’ll get to cut her hair!” She grinned and then darted across the hall; I couldn’t help but watch her butt as she ran out of my room waving back at me. I closed the door behind her, eyeing the lake again. By now it was 5:35am and I was unsure but it was possible that some of the more peppy counsellors might be up and about. My patio door was still open and the blinds too, the sun was still partially hidden but I could hear birds. I slid the door but left it slightly open to allow a cool breeze to enter my room. Now standing in the silence I realised I was actually quite sleepy, I rearranged the sheets on my bed, pulled the dino tee off and curled up under the padded duvet. All I could think was that I would never sleep in pyjamas again. I kicked my legs, enjoying the feel of my bed sheets on my skin. Closing my eyes, I waited for the sun to rise.
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11-23-2010, 02:52 PM | #274 |
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short, but good detailed chapter. I liked it
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11-23-2010, 03:01 PM | #275 |
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Thanks for another chapter Betty
As always a great read over 750 words - would call that short Love Rachie x x x
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11-24-2010, 01:54 AM | #276 |
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Great chapter I hope your chapters become longer in the future in other words awesome job
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11-24-2010, 03:36 AM | #277 |
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Bella, is good, is good. Continue, please do!
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12-30-2010, 07:02 PM | #278 |
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I wrote this very late at night, it may be nonsense.
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12-30-2010, 07:38 PM | #279 |
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WOW....that's one AMAZING bit of nonsense.....if my nonsense was that articulate....i'd b SOO PROUD XD ahhhh much awaited update.....i was not disappointed
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12-30-2010, 07:47 PM | #280 |
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I should finish this finally within the next two or three chapters. I should stop starting new stories before I've finished others.
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12-30-2010, 07:50 PM | #281 |
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i love ur new story.....BUT I DON'T WANT THIS TO ENNNDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! D':
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01-01-2011, 06:35 AM | #282 |
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Dont end it so quickly I like this story please keep going
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01-01-2011, 07:41 AM | #283 |
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Well, I've been writing it on and off since 2009 so I wouldn't call it quickly.
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01-01-2011, 04:42 PM | #284 |
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Way too quick for my liking -_- xp
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