♥ Strip Poker with a Twist ---The Sequel ♥ - Page 102

Davestrippoker · 06-07-2011, 06:04 PM

Hope things are sorted now

Part was reasonable, can't expect them all to be full of action laughs
Can't wait for the next thrill

Silvercola · 06-07-2011, 08:05 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by daremaster 1

Maybe it can be longer but not better!

Yea I do think t could of been a bit better but I really don't like to hurt her feeling and disncourage rachie from writting because if all I heard was how terrible I am. I would say screw it. I think she knows the quality of work she sent out and I also think telling someone u suck a billion times is mean and saying could be better a million times too is mean. She is one of the few writers on this site to have a successful and interesting story that has lasted more than month and not died. She is also is a very brave person because writting a story is a challenge. Especially with a crowd like you in it and discouraging and demeaning her hard work ethic and commitment to this site. I think writing a story that makes sense is a challenge here also because anyone can write a story but does it hook you in and make sense or does it hook you in saying WTF can this guy even tell me he isn't on drugs? So Rachie your a rockstar and keep writing.

mystery girl · 06-08-2011, 01:38 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Silvercola

Yea I do think t could of been a bit better but I really don't like to hurt her feeling and disncourage rachie from writting because if all I heard was how terrible I am. I would say screw it. I think she knows the quality of work she sent out and I also think telling someone u suck a billion times is mean and saying could be better a million times too is mean. She is one of the few writers on this site to have a successful and interesting story that has lasted more than month and not died. She is also is a very brave person because writting a story is a challenge. Especially with a crowd like you in it and discouraging and demeaning her hard work ethic and commitment to this site. I think writing a story that makes sense is a challenge here also because anyone can write a story but does it hook you in and make sense or does it hook you in saying WTF can this guy even tell me he isn't on drugs? So Rachie your a rockstar and keep writing.

Yeah def dont stop writing. Have just read several parts at once, and the ones a few parts ago are certainly epic, some chapters suppose have to be fill ins. But wont complain about the parts length, with over 180 parts in 9 months who really can. cant wait for the next big thing, so keep writing

springer · 06-08-2011, 02:25 AM

Cannot wait for the next episode

daremaster 1 · 06-08-2011, 05:13 AM

I love this story and Rachie you made it awesome. You really have a true talent and should right more stories after this great one.

Rachie · 06-08-2011, 01:11 PM

Thanks for all of the kind messages

What is going to happen next?

Find out now, by reading …

Part 103 (188) STRIP POKER WITH A TWIST THE SEQUEL

“You too are both hot like this” said Adam wondering what his Sister would Dare Dani in a few moments time

Sarah then carefully came round to the front of Dani blocking her titty jugs from the view of the other players. “I think you need to let your hair down” said Sarah teasing the players a little more, while at the same time taking Dani’s hair out of the pony tale and letting it droop over her soon to be bare breast.

“Wow you look so sexy like that, I think I could fuck you right now” Sarah said stressing the words sexy and fuck.

The players weren’t sure if Sarah was still acting or being serious, but if she was acting, she was doing an amazing job of it.

Sarah slowly backed away from Dani letting the room get there first real glance of her that evening without a bra on.

“I agree with Sarah” said Adam quickly, “You look good enough to fuck, and hey you haven’t even got any underwear on.” He said, eventually laughing.

“Right is it time for Dani’s dare” asked John, wondering if Sarah would be able to come up with anything more arousing than the display that had just been preformed.

“Is it ok, if I dare Dani to do something within the week when we are all present” asked Sarah sounding hopeful.

“Yippee, it’s a birthday surprise” said Dani, reminding the group of her upcoming special birthday.

John cut Dani’s sentence short and said “As long as we are all given the opportunity to be there, to share the fun, and something is written down so we know the dare has not changed.”

“Yeah, I’m fine by that, I will need some of your help, and I am sure Dani is going to like the treat that I have in store for her” chuckled Sarah, before continuing “After all, I need to get my own back for her spilling the beans about us to”. Sarah sat rubbing her hands together making plans for the week ahead.

“Are we going to bake Dani a Birthday cake” asked Brian, not realising until then that it was a special birthday for Dani.

Sarah turned towards Brian and just smiled, deciding to say nothing at all.

“Ow I can’t wait to find out what is going to happen” mentioned David wondering how dirty minded Sarah could actually be. “It must be something good or she would never be sitting there in her bra and thong with the widest grin on her face that you have ever seen”.

“Can I just write a few words on a scrap of paper, to prove the dare has already been made up, however I don’t want to state too much as I don’t know if I can pull it off.” Said Sarah, still with the widest grin you can ever imagine.

“That’s fine” replied John handing a scrap of paper and a pen to Sarah who dutifully wrote down a few words rather than a sentence, and handed back to the ring leader (John).

Well is it time to find out what the next round (round 33) will uncover said Adam laughing as he thought about the word uncover.

However just before Sarah had time to collect the cards and shuffle them there became a knock at the door.

“Who the fucks this?” asked Adam surprised and not expecting anyone to call at his house at this time of the day.

John rubbed his hands together thinking what was possibly going to happen next, while Dani said “Lucy dear, just go and see who is at the door, I believe Sarah has left the keys in it and the bolt is across”

“Why the hell do I have to fucking go” asked Lucy, sounding depressed and believing she had been singled out.

TO BE CONTINUED ……………………………

Sorry for the tease about the dare, that will hopefully be written about in future parts.

Easy question, - who is at the door?
Why has Lucy got to go?

Keep reading Strip Poker with a Twist the Sequel for answers

daremaster 1 · 06-08-2011, 01:14 PM

You never disappoint Rachie. Looking forward to more!

Arthur · 06-08-2011, 01:15 PM

so soon another update... You are amazing :-D

ffgamer · 06-08-2011, 02:00 PM

oooooo what a cliffhanger

owlart · 06-08-2011, 02:32 PM

Thanks Rachel, good as ever.

I think it's going to be Ben at the door, and Lucy has to answer it because he thinks that she has been texting him!

italia13calcio · 06-08-2011, 02:49 PM

Love it! That's all I have to say.

shaggy.canada · 06-08-2011, 02:59 PM

Thank you for the story it is great and i love the quizes

lordbob · 06-08-2011, 03:27 PM

Quite nice update.

However is says "Are we going to bake Dani and birthday cake" Instead of "Are we going to bake Dani a birthday cake."

rachelssisiter · 06-08-2011, 05:57 PM

Great update and nicely leading us onto the next part can hardly wait

archie21 · 06-09-2011, 09:25 AM

lots of guessing and lots of comments... you asked for the posting and you got it.. can't wait to read what happened to Lucy...

06-08-2011, 01:11 PM	#1521
Rachie I am the cutest butterfly ever Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: In my Bed, Posts: 6,606 Blog Entries: 2	Thanks for all of the kind messages What is going to happen next? Find out now, by reading … Part 103 (188) STRIP POKER WITH A TWIST THE SEQUEL “You too are both hot like this” said Adam wondering what his Sister would Dare Dani in a few moments time Sarah then carefully came round to the front of Dani blocking her titty jugs from the view of the other players. “I think you need to let your hair down” said Sarah teasing the players a little more, while at the same time taking Dani’s hair out of the pony tale and letting it droop over her soon to be bare breast. “Wow you look so sexy like that, I think I could fuck you right now” Sarah said stressing the words sexy and fuck. The players weren’t sure if Sarah was still acting or being serious, but if she was acting, she was doing an amazing job of it. Sarah slowly backed away from Dani letting the room get there first real glance of her that evening without a bra on. “I agree with Sarah” said Adam quickly, “You look good enough to fuck, and hey you haven’t even got any underwear on.” He said, eventually laughing. “Right is it time for Dani’s dare” asked John, wondering if Sarah would be able to come up with anything more arousing than the display that had just been preformed. “Is it ok, if I dare Dani to do something within the week when we are all present” asked Sarah sounding hopeful. “Yippee, it’s a birthday surprise” said Dani, reminding the group of her upcoming special birthday. John cut Dani’s sentence short and said “As long as we are all given the opportunity to be there, to share the fun, and something is written down so we know the dare has not changed.” “Yeah, I’m fine by that, I will need some of your help, and I am sure Dani is going to like the treat that I have in store for her” chuckled Sarah, before continuing “After all, I need to get my own back for her spilling the beans about us to”. Sarah sat rubbing her hands together making plans for the week ahead. “Are we going to bake Dani a Birthday cake” asked Brian, not realising until then that it was a special birthday for Dani. Sarah turned towards Brian and just smiled, deciding to say nothing at all. “Ow I can’t wait to find out what is going to happen” mentioned David wondering how dirty minded Sarah could actually be. “It must be something good or she would never be sitting there in her bra and thong with the widest grin on her face that you have ever seen”. “Can I just write a few words on a scrap of paper, to prove the dare has already been made up, however I don’t want to state too much as I don’t know if I can pull it off.” Said Sarah, still with the widest grin you can ever imagine. “That’s fine” replied John handing a scrap of paper and a pen to Sarah who dutifully wrote down a few words rather than a sentence, and handed back to the ring leader (John). Well is it time to find out what the next round (round 33) will uncover said Adam laughing as he thought about the word uncover. However just before Sarah had time to collect the cards and shuffle them there became a knock at the door. “Who the fucks this?” asked Adam surprised and not expecting anyone to call at his house at this time of the day. John rubbed his hands together thinking what was possibly going to happen next, while Dani said “Lucy dear, just go and see who is at the door, I believe Sarah has left the keys in it and the bolt is across” “Why the hell do I have to fucking go” asked Lucy, sounding depressed and believing she had been singled out. TO BE CONTINUED …………………………… Sorry for the tease about the dare, that will hopefully be written about in future parts. Easy question, - who is at the door? Why has Lucy got to go? Keep reading Strip Poker with a Twist the Sequel for answers __________________ RACHIE'S GETDARE USER GUIDE / MANUAL STRIP POKER WITH A TWIST (Story) BED HABITS LOLA.FOX WISHES SHE WAS MY FAVORITE USER <3 Last edited by Rachie; 06-08-2011 at 03:33 PM.

06-08-2011, 02:00 PM	#1524
ffgamer getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Mar 2011 Posts: 287	oooooo what a cliffhanger __________________ Likes: Age play, Pet play, orgasm denial,Cross dressing,pee maybe more. dislikes: Public, pain, family, anal, scat, messy

06-08-2011, 02:49 PM	#1526
italia13calcio Account Banned Join Date: Mar 2011 Location: USA Posts: 178	Love it! That's all I have to say. __________________ My story: http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=76217 My story contest: http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthrea...742#post515742

06-08-2011, 02:59 PM	#1527
shaggy.canada Member Join Date: Jun 2011 Posts: 54	Thank you Thank you for the story it is great and i love the quizes

06-08-2011, 03:27 PM	#1528
lordbob Account Banned Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: The place where kittys are. Posts: 440 Blog Entries: 4	Quite nice update. However is says "Are we going to bake Dani and birthday cake" Instead of "Are we going to bake Dani a birthday cake." __________________ 15-Male-bi-Transgender likes: bondage crossdresing mild pain nudity bondage BDSM pee anal pet play limits: illeagl blood poo messy public sending pictures I adopt Reshiram [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC] ask me anything www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?p=466389 I have been dared to do every dare PMed to me for the next month Mean Little Kitty Song:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qit3ALTelOo

06-07-2011, 06:04 PM	#1516
Davestrippoker Distinguished Member Join Date: Sep 2010 Posts: 517	Hope things are sorted now Part was reasonable, can't expect them all to be full of action laughs Can't wait for the next thrill

06-08-2011, 02:25 AM	#1519
springer Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2011 Posts: 12	Cannot wait for the next episode

06-08-2011, 05:13 AM	#1520
daremaster 1 getDare God Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: <3 Posts: 3,032	I love this story and Rachie you made it awesome. You really have a true talent and should right more stories after this great one.

06-08-2011, 01:14 PM	#1522
daremaster 1 getDare God Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: <3 Posts: 3,032	You never disappoint Rachie. Looking forward to more!

06-08-2011, 01:15 PM	#1523
Arthur Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2011 Posts: 107	so soon another update... You are amazing :-D

06-08-2011, 02:32 PM	#1525
owlart getDare Devil Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: UK Posts: 1,288	Thanks Rachel, good as ever. I think it's going to be Ben at the door, and Lucy has to answer it because he thinks that she has been texting him!

06-08-2011, 05:57 PM	#1529
rachelssisiter getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Sep 2010 Location: Lincs Posts: 278	Great update and nicely leading us onto the next part can hardly wait

06-09-2011, 09:25 AM	#1530
archie21 getDare Succubus Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: uk Posts: 1,763	lots of guessing and lots of comments... you asked for the posting and you got it.. can't wait to read what happened to Lucy... __________________ [COLOR=Magenta]You could say no but whats the point in being on a dare site if you say no all the time...... If you don't put up a limits list, expect to be pushed on everything.