03-21-2007, 05:44 PM | #1 |
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Tricky Girls [NON-FICTION]
Greeting all..... Some of you may have already heard of me. My Name is Jake I am 17 years old. If anyone has read the stories about Tessdog then you are sure to have heard of the famous Jake. I have been looking at getDare for awhile now. I have even given a story about when I got dressed up like a girl. Tessdogs absence I think is like halfway over. So he should be back soon. He has told me to send his love.... Well I am here to write stories and make you all happy, so let the fun begin.
Ok... I am male 17 years old. One day at school, these really really hot girls come and start teasing me. They tell me to come with them and like a teenage fool I do. They take me into the girls bathroom where they tell me they will bring me to the next level of fun. I am pleased, so they tell me to meet them after school. After school ends I follow them to their car. Part 2 Coming Soon! Last edited by Pokerboy; 03-23-2007 at 08:45 AM. Reason: Because I wanted show Depp=noob=lol that I can really write a story : ) |
03-22-2007, 09:10 AM | #2 |
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oh god, i wouldnt be suprised that this again another account of tessdog (sorry but i dont believe the friends/ family things)
anyway. this story is very bad and should deserve to be deleted come on it is obvious this is only posted to make tessdog look better instead of posting a story. DONT post a story from five rules nothing saying more then SOMETHING WILL HAPPEN, BUT NOTHING HAPPENNED SO FAR. i really dont like this. i hope that you will edit your post and make a good story instead! |
03-22-2007, 09:24 AM | #3 |
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1. depp=noob=lol please dont talk about tessdog and stuf on new post it annoys me to see random rants
2. pokerboy said he had to go and will finish the story. im sure he will. I hope you are a goood story writer like your friend was. also maybe in the next bit you could add a bit more detail... how did you and the girls come? you first or all at once? good luck writing. |
03-22-2007, 12:10 PM | #4 |
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Very sorry about the last part, I was in a rush and normally I write like this then I edit. But I had to run. I will finish the story in a bit. The next part will be written soon. It will be good.... I promise.
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03-23-2007, 08:46 AM | #7 |
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Ok I fixed the post up, I got some stuff for school I got to finish up then I will write the next part.
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03-24-2007, 07:48 PM | #8 |
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Part 2
I walked towards their car. As I did.... A Car hit me.... I died.... The end...... Sorry I think this story was going to be boring.... So like Rob when people start to loose intrest.... Kill someone off. LOL.... Ok well.... I am writing another story... Which is really cool check it out.... its pimped..... I like Dots...................... |
03-24-2007, 08:37 PM | #9 |
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no offense but i would have liked the end of the story to have been a good one not just i died...sorry... i liked wut u did with the first part but i am looking forward to ur next story
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03-24-2007, 08:42 PM | #10 |
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Ok that was a randome ending...
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03-27-2007, 06:13 PM | #11 |
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So you died in a non-fiction story? Intresting...
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03-27-2007, 06:40 PM | #12 |
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Living dead!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! maybe someone should take over this story...
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03-27-2007, 06:56 PM | #13 |
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umm.... I died....Yea...about that.......
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03-28-2007, 08:36 AM | #15 |
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i don't know if its tessdog or not because tess dog would write a better story. Btw pokerboy can i take over this story?
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