Non-Fiction: A Tale of Many Bets - Page 10

Demon Thief · 10-25-2011, 10:40 AM

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Originally Posted by Saphir

"Yeah, whatever. See you lare, I guess," I replied,

Whoops.

Okay, I fixed it.

gayboi25 · 10-25-2011, 10:49 AM

I have to say I love it! I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Tylerr · 10-27-2011, 08:13 PM

IT WAS BRANDON! I WAS RIGHT!?!?!?! haha (late response)

nonstopdisco · 10-30-2011, 02:25 AM

Hmm does he know brandon or summat? Brilliant update, cant wait for more

Demon Thief · 11-01-2011, 11:33 PM

@ Tyler: A little late, aren't you?

@ nonstopdisco: No, but kudos for the guess. It would sound like a plot twist that I would use.

Anyway, I'll probably post my next chapter tomorrow. I just got over a nasty case of the flu.

Ebu · 11-06-2011, 10:06 AM

Love the story <3

Demon Thief · 11-06-2011, 11:58 PM

Thanks.

I'm sorry I haven't been able to post, but I've been sick over the past week. I'll try to post an update pretty soon.

Tylerr · 11-09-2011, 08:36 PM

feeeel better soonn! i need moreee [:

Demon Thief · 11-10-2011, 12:29 AM

Not to worry, I'm at 100% again. So without further ado...

Chapter Thirty-Three

The next morning, I woke up, ate a quick breakfast of scrambled eggs and toast, then I told my parents that I was going out for a while. They just warned me to be back before dark.

I started riding my bike over to Austin's house, which was a few miles away. As I pedaled, I thought about what Austin would make me do, based off whatever I knew about him. The trouble was, I barely knew anything about him at all. He wasn't in any of my classes, but I had seen him at lunchtime. He was always sitting by himself, without any friends to talk to. A few people had started rumors about him being gay, but I didn't believe everything I heard and the people that spread most of the rumors at my school were the wannabe gang members that were mean to anyone and everyone.

So anyway, I really had no idea what I would be in for today. As long as whatever I did wasn't too perverted or public, I would do it. After all, what was the worst that could happen?

After almost an hour, I arrived at Austin's house. It was a two-story house surrounded by a bunch of small businesses and apartment houses. Austin himself was standing outside, waiting for me.

"What took you so long?" he asked.

"I live pretty far away," I replied, as I got off my bike. I then wheeled my bike over to the porch and secured it to the railing with my bike lock. It would suck for me to come outside after this ordeal and find out my bike was stolen.

We went inside, and Austin locked the door after us. Then we went upstairs to Austin's room, which was very messy.

"As you may have guessed, your first task is to clean my room," Austin said.

"What else am I doing today?" I asked.

"Oh, that's a surprise," he said.

Surprisingly, cleaning his room didn't take so long. Most of the mess was dirty clothes, which I stuffed in his hamper. The of the random possessions went under the bed or into the closet. Still, it took about an hour to finsh.

"Okay, I'm done. What next," I asked.

"Do my homework," he said.

We went downstairs to the dining room, and I did all of his homework. It was the same exact stuff I was doing, so it wasn't difficult. He assured me that he would redo it so it wouldn't be turned in with my handwriting.

"What else?" I asked. In response, Austin smirked, like he had been planning this.

To be continued...

Jellybones · 11-10-2011, 02:14 PM

I got so excited to finally see the next post, but then there wasn't much there... Looking forward to more though!

Eagle eye · 11-10-2011, 05:13 PM

Great to see an update, bad to see a cliffhanger. Either way love it so far!

nonstopdisco · 11-10-2011, 10:29 PM

Nice cliffhanger man

It can't be good, he's locked the door :P

Saphir · 11-12-2011, 04:52 AM

Mean

I want to know how it goes on.

I'm really looking forward to the next chapter <3

Your writing is really good!

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I hope you can still fix it so I'll just mention it...

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"I live pretty far away," I replied, as I got offf my bike.

Demon Thief · 11-12-2011, 11:32 PM

Damn F key. What a time it picks to stick. I fixed it, so no biggie.

Lui-Kyi · 11-14-2011, 11:02 AM

Love it! Post more soon x3

10-25-2011, 10:49 AM	#137
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10-27-2011, 08:13 PM	#138
Tylerr Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2011 Location: Narnia Posts: 108	IT WAS BRANDON! I WAS RIGHT!?!?!?! haha (late response) __________________ All have been alive, but only few have lived Tyler [: Lets play Truth or Dare! PM me or Email me! Email me @ [email protected]

11-01-2011, 11:33 PM	#140
Demon Thief getDare Devil Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: In the US Posts: 1,013	@ Tyler: A little late, aren't you? @ nonstopdisco: No, but kudos for the guess. It would sound like a plot twist that I would use. Anyway, I'll probably post my next chapter tomorrow. I just got over a nasty case of the flu. __________________ "How many seconds in eternity?" And the shepherd's boy says, "this is a mountain of pure diamond. It takes an hour to climb it and an hour to go around it. Every hundred years a little bird comes and sharpens its beak on the diamond mountain. And when the entire mountain is chiseled away then the first second of eternity will have passed." You must think that's a hell of a long time. Personally, I think that's a hell of a bird. 14 years on GetDare!

11-06-2011, 11:58 PM	#142
Demon Thief getDare Devil Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: In the US Posts: 1,013	Thanks. I'm sorry I haven't been able to post, but I've been sick over the past week. I'll try to post an update pretty soon. __________________ "How many seconds in eternity?" And the shepherd's boy says, "this is a mountain of pure diamond. It takes an hour to climb it and an hour to go around it. Every hundred years a little bird comes and sharpens its beak on the diamond mountain. And when the entire mountain is chiseled away then the first second of eternity will have passed." You must think that's a hell of a long time. Personally, I think that's a hell of a bird. 14 years on GetDare!

11-09-2011, 08:36 PM	#143
Tylerr Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2011 Location: Narnia Posts: 108	feeeel better soonn! i need moreee [: __________________ All have been alive, but only few have lived Tyler [: Lets play Truth or Dare! PM me or Email me! Email me @ [email protected]

10-30-2011, 02:25 AM	#139
nonstopdisco Member Join Date: Jan 2011 Posts: 73	Hmm does he know brandon or summat? Brilliant update, cant wait for more

11-06-2011, 10:06 AM	#141
Ebu Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2011 Location: USA Posts: 20	Love the story <3

11-10-2011, 12:29 AM	#144
Demon Thief getDare Devil Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: In the US Posts: 1,013	Not to worry, I'm at 100% again. So without further ado... Chapter Thirty-Three The next morning, I woke up, ate a quick breakfast of scrambled eggs and toast, then I told my parents that I was going out for a while. They just warned me to be back before dark. I started riding my bike over to Austin's house, which was a few miles away. As I pedaled, I thought about what Austin would make me do, based off whatever I knew about him. The trouble was, I barely knew anything about him at all. He wasn't in any of my classes, but I had seen him at lunchtime. He was always sitting by himself, without any friends to talk to. A few people had started rumors about him being gay, but I didn't believe everything I heard and the people that spread most of the rumors at my school were the wannabe gang members that were mean to anyone and everyone. So anyway, I really had no idea what I would be in for today. As long as whatever I did wasn't too perverted or public, I would do it. After all, what was the worst that could happen? After almost an hour, I arrived at Austin's house. It was a two-story house surrounded by a bunch of small businesses and apartment houses. Austin himself was standing outside, waiting for me. "What took you so long?" he asked. "I live pretty far away," I replied, as I got off my bike. I then wheeled my bike over to the porch and secured it to the railing with my bike lock. It would suck for me to come outside after this ordeal and find out my bike was stolen. We went inside, and Austin locked the door after us. Then we went upstairs to Austin's room, which was very messy. "As you may have guessed, your first task is to clean my room," Austin said. "What else am I doing today?" I asked. "Oh, that's a surprise," he said. Surprisingly, cleaning his room didn't take so long. Most of the mess was dirty clothes, which I stuffed in his hamper. The of the random possessions went under the bed or into the closet. Still, it took about an hour to finsh. "Okay, I'm done. What next," I asked. "Do my homework," he said. We went downstairs to the dining room, and I did all of his homework. It was the same exact stuff I was doing, so it wasn't difficult. He assured me that he would redo it so it wouldn't be turned in with my handwriting. "What else?" I asked. In response, Austin smirked, like he had been planning this. To be continued... __________________ "How many seconds in eternity?" And the shepherd's boy says, "this is a mountain of pure diamond. It takes an hour to climb it and an hour to go around it. Every hundred years a little bird comes and sharpens its beak on the diamond mountain. And when the entire mountain is chiseled away then the first second of eternity will have passed." You must think that's a hell of a long time. Personally, I think that's a hell of a bird. 14 years on GetDare! Last edited by Demon Thief; 11-12-2011 at 11:32 PM.

11-10-2011, 02:14 PM	#145
Jellybones Member Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 61	I got so excited to finally see the next post, but then there wasn't much there... Looking forward to more though! __________________ 22/m/US

11-10-2011, 05:13 PM	#146
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11-10-2011, 10:29 PM	#147
nonstopdisco Member Join Date: Jan 2011 Posts: 73	Nice cliffhanger man It can't be good, he's locked the door :P

11-12-2011, 11:32 PM	#149
Demon Thief getDare Devil Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: In the US Posts: 1,013	Damn F key. What a time it picks to stick. I fixed it, so no biggie. __________________ "How many seconds in eternity?" And the shepherd's boy says, "this is a mountain of pure diamond. It takes an hour to climb it and an hour to go around it. Every hundred years a little bird comes and sharpens its beak on the diamond mountain. And when the entire mountain is chiseled away then the first second of eternity will have passed." You must think that's a hell of a long time. Personally, I think that's a hell of a bird. 14 years on GetDare!

11-14-2011, 11:02 AM	#150
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