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View Poll Results: Is This Story Moving too Fast Or too Slow? And Too Detailed Or Not Detailed Enough? | |||
Too Fast/Too Detailed | 4 | 4.44% | |
Too Fast/Not Detailed Enough | 0 | 0% | |
Too Fast/Just Enough Detail | 1 | 1.11% | |
Too Slow/Too Detailed | 3 | 3.33% | |
Too Slow/Not Detailed Enough | 6 | 6.67% | |
Too Slow/Just Enough Detail | 4 | 4.44% | |
Right Speed/Too Detailed | 0 | 0% | |
Right Speed/Not Enough Detail | 13 | 14.44% | |
Right Speed/Just Enough Detail | 59 | 65.56% | |
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01-23-2010, 10:23 AM | #16 |
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This is a good story so far. I'd say you go with Truth or Dare for a little longer then with the slave part. Nice job
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01-23-2010, 11:29 AM | #17 |
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Part Seven
After hearing Dan and Cody’s plan I got very excited. Their principle idea was very appealing, but I didn’t want to share Jake in any way. Besides, with our friendship, I wouldn’t need to make Jake my slave to get what I wanted. I wasn’t worried about Jake, but I was concerned about Dan. He was constantly staring at me, and when he sat beside me the tension was unbearable, unbearably good. Tonight, I thought to myself, is gonna be a good night. Now all I have to do is figure out how to spoil the twins plan. “Hey guys here’s your cokes” Jake said arriving with four ice cold bottles of cola. “Thanks” Cody answered, giving Jake a wink. ‘What is it with these guys and winks?’ I thought to myself. “To an awesome weekend guys” Dan said raising his bottle in the air. The rest of us raised our bottles and in unison took a deep gulp from the drink. As I was taking my second chug an idea hit me. The solution was staring me in the face. “Hey guys” I said in an excited tone. “Why don’t we play the game with ‘Spin the bottle’ rules? That way anyone could get asked, at anytime!” The twins looked at me in confusion. With spin the bottle rules they could no longer team up on Jake, as they would have to ask who ever the bottle landed on. Of course it could still land on Jake every time, but that was highly unlikely. “Ya that’s sound good. It will make it more random” Jake said finishing his coke. “Em…sure, ok lets do it that way” Cody answered, still looking at me for an explanation. “Ok…it could be fun like that I guess” Dan said , now looking at Cody for an answer. “Cool. It’s your go Cody” I said, passing my empty bottle over. "Ok. But lets only pick dares from now on" Cody took the glass bottle off of me and placed it in the middle with the head pointing Jake. He must have been hoping the bottle would land back where it started! With one hand Cody spun the bottle anti-clockwise. It spun so fast it was impossible to tell which side was which. After a few seconds the bottle began to slow down. You could easily tell who it was pointing at now. First it was pointing at Dan. Then Me. Then it moved onto Jake, slowing even more. Now it was passing Cody. Moving at a snails pace it wobbled passed Dan, finally stopping, and pointing directly between my legs. I slowly looked up at Cody, feeling very nervous. Cody stared directly at me with an expression that could only have said one thing. Revenge.
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01-23-2010, 01:31 PM | #18 |
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Great story, go on please!
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01-23-2010, 01:55 PM | #19 |
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Im really impressed you have done a fery good job with putting more detail into your post you have suprisingly amazing CliffHangers. And you have me gasping for more. I just wished that I could CHange what I voted in my poll so far I give you a 3.5 out of 5 hoping you continue it(:
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01-23-2010, 07:22 PM | #21 |
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one word- amazing! KEEP GOING!!!
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01-24-2010, 07:47 AM | #22 |
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Part Eight
Cody Continued to eye me up and down. By now I could feel my heart thumping in my chest. I knew he was gonna get me back for ruining his plan. Cody started rummaging through his bag. My heartbeat quickened. He must be looking for something to do with what ever dare he was about to give me. “Ok Luke” Cody said, turning around holding a navy scarf. “I want you to go into jakes walk-in closet and blindfold yourself with this scarf. Then wait for me there” I thought about it for a minute, biting my lip. Its was just Jake’s closet, with a blindfold… ‘What’s the worst that could happen’ I thought. “Oh, that’s a good one” Dan said. Patting his brother on the back. I turned to Jake, looking for an opinion. He just looked back and gave me small wink. “ Ok..I’ll do it” I managed to say “Good. Now off you go” Cody said smiling and handing me the scarf. I took the scarf off Cody, turned around and walked towards the closet. When I reached the door I looked back at Cody. He was wearing a wide evil grin on his face, which only heightened my nerves. I grasped the handle and opened the door. As I stepped in was amazed at how big Jake’s closet actually was. It was roughly 20ft long and 10ft wide to the edge of the drawers and hangers. I closed the door behind me, and took another step in. To my left was a shoe rack with A LOT of sneakers. Then wrapping along the length of the wall, all the way over to the right side were various hangers and drawers. The hangers held multiple shirts and trousers, with a label over each section, ‘Casual’, ‘School’, ‘Week-end’. ‘Jake’, I thought, ‘Always the neat freak’. The drawers came up to waist height, and had signs on them too. ‘T-shirts’, ‘Socks’, ‘Underwear’, and ‘Sports Gear’. I sat down in the middle of the closet, on the cream carpet. I nervously lifted the scarf to my face. I placed the scarf on my forehead, still able to see, and tied a knot at the back of my head. Just as I was pulling the front of the scarf down over my eyes, I noticed the door handle moving.
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01-24-2010, 11:49 AM | #23 |
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This is a VERY good story, some paragraph could be done but its still quality
glue rating ..... 8.6/10 and rising
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01-24-2010, 01:04 PM | #24 |
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Love the story!
You NEED to post the next part ASAP.
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01-24-2010, 03:04 PM | #26 |
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This is a great story! PLEASE keep going. It's great!!!!
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01-24-2010, 04:46 PM | #27 |
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Excellent story! Great situations, suspense, even a little bit of drama. Not bad, not bad at all. Looking forward to the rest of the story.
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01-25-2010, 09:18 AM | #28 |
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Keep up the good work.
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01-25-2010, 04:23 PM | #29 |
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Hey guys! Sorry if the last post was a let down, or if the cliffhanger was to much for some. Had to keep you guys interested as I prob wont be posting again until Saturday!(school exams)
Delighted the majority of you are enjoying it, and please remember to vote in the pole! J
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01-25-2010, 08:07 PM | #30 |
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great post! cant wait to see what happens!
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