08-08-2013, 01:07 PM | #16 |
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“You jerk!” Brooke yelled, “You cummed on my boobs!”
Michael sat up at the thought of this. “Oh crap, sorry?” “I’m gonna get you back so good.” Hilarious, I and bet she'd get back at them.
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08-09-2013, 12:24 AM | #17 |
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Thanks for all of the feedback. This is the last chapter of this story and I know it's short, BUT. I'm already working on the sequel which is hopefully going to be at least 10 chapters.
_______________________ Chapter 7 “Not unless you do my dare first!” Brooke said, “In fact, I’ll show you my deletion of the photo if you do my dare.” As soon as she said that a dark look of regret swept over her face. “Done deal.” Michael said confidently He walked outside stark naked and did exactly as Brooke told him. “I’m naked! Look at me!” When he arrived back into the house, Brooke looked disappointed. “That’s the way it works huh?” Michael said. “Okay fine, but our rule with dare slaves is that you can’t have one unless you have something on them. That’s why I took the photo.” “As long as you delete it, I’m cool.” Brooke pulled out her cell phone and Michael looked over her shoulder. This was hard evidence that the photo had disappeared. “Thank you” he said and sat back down Suddenly, they heard a key in the front door. “Get upstairs and dressed!” yelled Rachel, “They’re home!” All of them rushed upstairs and quickly got changed into their pajamas. Michael was the only one to return back down. “Hi Michael” said Mr Jones. “Hi, Mr Jones” Michael replied Mrs Jones also walked in and greeted Michael. “I was just about to go to bed. The others are already sleeping.” “That’s okay, did you have fun today?” Mrs Jones asked. Michael’s memory flashed back to all the crazy things he had done today and then to the game of truth or dare they had had just now. No longer was he a dare slave. He still had to find a way to get epic payback on Brooke. “Yeah, I had a great day.” “Good. Now Michael, there’s something we need to talk to you about. Please come and sit.” Michael sat in between his new parents. “It’s about school. We know it’s not easy for you to move schools but we think it would be more appropriate and easier for us if you went to the same school as the girls.” “Okay.” “So that’s where we’re sending you. This school has a camp in about a week’s time during the summer break. Because we already have you enrolled, we thought you might like to sign up for it. All the girls have.” “What does the camp involve?” Michael asked eagerly “Oh lots of things” said Mr Jones, “Camping, rock climbing, horseback riding and heaps of other activities.” “Sounds great.” “So there it is!” said Mrs Jones, “You’ll attend the same school and you will go in this camp?” “I love camping.” The End (Sequel coming soon!)
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08-09-2013, 02:51 AM | #18 |
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I love how you ended it
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08-09-2013, 12:54 PM | #19 |
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Great job. Can't wait until I can read the sequel.
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08-09-2013, 08:54 PM | #20 |
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Thanks everyone for the feedback, you can read the sequel now too!
Link's in my signature
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08-12-2013, 02:41 PM | #21 |
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Great story, getting ready to read the sequel which im sure will be just as great
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01-31-2014, 03:28 PM | #22 |
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Great Story im going to read the sequel now. I was just thinking what an idiot he would be not to dare her to delete the picture when it happened.
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They're really great. Good job.
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