The step-daugther [fiction]

[Pikachu]

Originally Posted by slave456

hahaha wt a load of crap the story which takes years 2 finish!!!!!

It is a great story and he chooses to take him time which is a good thing


If you can't offer constructive critisism why offer critisism at all?

And it is actually very very hard to write a story especially one as good as this.

i have written one story (with alot of help from others)

and i can't finish my second one so i am not posting it

Why don't you try and write a story then slave456?