New author requires a bit of help...

[Anonymoose]

Ive started a story, I wondering if someone would be kind enough to have a quick read of the three chapters so far and give me some constructive critisum

I would also like to talk to a mod/admin about content issues and what coulds as R rated and what doesnt, plz PM if you want to help or if you are a mod/admin who can help with that.

regards Anonymoose