Keeping it fresh

depravedChattel · 07-25-2010, 07:07 PM

In trying to write stories for this site, I found that it's kind of hard to make original erotic scenes. I mean, the first time it came easy enough but for the next part I realized I was repeating myself a fair bit. In my case, there are only so many ways to describe foot worship (just not enough adjectives for smelly things!). I found myself sort of handwaving the sexy bits when they should be more or less the focus, they are what keeps people reading.

Now, I realize the trick is to not focus on just one thing but to have the characters do different activities each time, but there is a limit and after a while it starts to be a bit tedious. So I ask you, how do you write erotic scenes and keep them fresh, different each time. New and exciting, you know.

07-25-2010, 07:07 PM	#1
depravedChattel Senior Member Join Date: May 2010 Posts: 223	Keeping it fresh In trying to write stories for this site, I found that it's kind of hard to make original erotic scenes. I mean, the first time it came easy enough but for the next part I realized I was repeating myself a fair bit. In my case, there are only so many ways to describe foot worship (just not enough adjectives for smelly things!). I found myself sort of handwaving the sexy bits when they should be more or less the focus, they are what keeps people reading. Now, I realize the trick is to not focus on just one thing but to have the characters do different activities each time, but there is a limit and after a while it starts to be a bit tedious. So I ask you, how do you write erotic scenes and keep them fresh, different each time. New and exciting, you know. __________________ 20/M Submissive Likes: Masturbation, porn, light anal, nipple clamps, edging, spanking, feet, name-calling, teasing, body-writing, orgasm control Kind of wants to try: cum play, pee, wedgie, role playing Limits: public, extreme pain, poop, crossdressing, messy