week of torture

achmed · 04-03-2009, 05:11 PM

this is my first story i hope yall like it.

Before I start the story let me introduce the beginning characters. If you like the story and want me to continue I will introduce some other characters later. The first character is Jake. He is your typical 15 year old boy. Its his first year in high school. He is a little short but he is very fit. The other character is Mark. Mark is the same age and is Jake’s best friend. Now Mark is a little different he is barely under 6 feet and is very muscular. The last character is Mike. He is very muscular, 6’7” and his a big jock. He is a senior and the star quarterback of the football team.

It was the 3 o clock in the afternoon and they were just getting out of the final class of the day. When they are about to leave class Mark asks Jake “Are you going to try out for the football team today?” “I don’t know. I just don’t think I have what it takes to make it”, says Jake. “sure you do man, its not that hard. Even if you don’t play its still really fun.” “I guess I will give it a shot.”

As they try out they both do really good. Mark is trying out for wide receiver and Jake is trying out for halfback. They both make the team and Mark is even a starter. As they were practicing Mike throws a bad pass and Mark confronts him. “What the hell was that. Oh I am sorry were you admiring the big strong linebackers body.” as they whole group begins to laugh Jake joins in and says “Its ok we all know Mike doesn’t have a chance with him anyway. His penis is the size of an ant.” this time the whole group cracks up and you can see the anger on Mikes face.

A few days later when everyone was leaving the locker room Mike and some of his friends approach Mark and Jake. Mike begins to say “what the fuck do you think you were doing the other day? Did you honestly think you could say that without dealing with me. Y’all might think that both of you are the shit now, but you are dead wrong.” He guys get them”. his group of people restrain each one of the boys they first strip each one of the boys and handcuff them. Now mike continues to say “Y’all made a big mistake the other day. Take them back to my house boy were going to have some fun. Both of you go call your parents and tell them you will be spending the night at my house tonight.” they both get in the car nude and drive back to Mikes house.

I know im not very creative. Does this have any potential? Do you think I should continue? Plus pm me with any ideas.

04-03-2009, 05:11 PM	#1
achmed Account Banned Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Us, florida Posts: 37	week of torture this is my first story i hope yall like it. Before I start the story let me introduce the beginning characters. If you like the story and want me to continue I will introduce some other characters later. The first character is Jake. He is your typical 15 year old boy. Its his first year in high school. He is a little short but he is very fit. The other character is Mark. Mark is the same age and is Jake’s best friend. Now Mark is a little different he is barely under 6 feet and is very muscular. The last character is Mike. He is very muscular, 6’7” and his a big jock. He is a senior and the star quarterback of the football team. It was the 3 o clock in the afternoon and they were just getting out of the final class of the day. When they are about to leave class Mark asks Jake “Are you going to try out for the football team today?” “I don’t know. I just don’t think I have what it takes to make it”, says Jake. “sure you do man, its not that hard. Even if you don’t play its still really fun.” “I guess I will give it a shot.” As they try out they both do really good. Mark is trying out for wide receiver and Jake is trying out for halfback. They both make the team and Mark is even a starter. As they were practicing Mike throws a bad pass and Mark confronts him. “What the hell was that. Oh I am sorry were you admiring the big strong linebackers body.” as they whole group begins to laugh Jake joins in and says “Its ok we all know Mike doesn’t have a chance with him anyway. His penis is the size of an ant.” this time the whole group cracks up and you can see the anger on Mikes face. A few days later when everyone was leaving the locker room Mike and some of his friends approach Mark and Jake. Mike begins to say “what the fuck do you think you were doing the other day? Did you honestly think you could say that without dealing with me. Y’all might think that both of you are the shit now, but you are dead wrong.” He guys get them”. his group of people restrain each one of the boys they first strip each one of the boys and handcuff them. Now mike continues to say “Y’all made a big mistake the other day. Take them back to my house boy were going to have some fun. Both of you go call your parents and tell them you will be spending the night at my house tonight.” they both get in the car nude and drive back to Mikes house. I know im not very creative. Does this have any potential? Do you think I should continue? Plus pm me with any ideas. Last edited by Davros; 04-03-2009 at 05:17 PM.