01-29-2011, 04:32 PM | #1 |
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2 Straight Boys at a Sleepover.
Hey guys, gonna try to write a story. Completely true, and has happened, with many parts to it. A little rushed for time so not gonna start it today, but going to let you know a bit about it.
Background Me and a friend, Ryan, were at his for a sleepover. We're both (sort of :P) straight, but this one night a few months ago a lot of stuff happened. We've done lots of other horny things that'll come in later, but it's all starting with this sleepover. Not sure how many parts this will be yet! Characters Me (Jack): 13 years old, quite short, not muscley or skinny, but not fat. Uncut cock, not shaven. Brown hair and brown eyes. Not really into sport, like to have fun Ryan: 14 years old, medium height. 6 pack, very fit and hot. Brown hair, blue eyes. Likes rugby, good friends with Jack. Long, uncut cock and many pubic hairs. *referring to myself as Jack as this will be in the third person* PM me or comment if there's anything else you'd like to know. I thought I was straight, but I'd say bi now this sleepover has happened. Always wanted a bit of Ryan, and I got it Will post part 1 as soon as possible. |
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01-30-2011, 05:51 AM | #2 |
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Not much response, but may as well get on with Part 1. Let me know what you think by commenting or PMing me!
Part 1 - the day before It was a Friday, and Jack & Ryan were both at school in their normal lessons. Only in German & French are they together in lessons, and in both of those they sit next to each other! Ryan is always late for school, and would literally just start walking from far away as the bell went for everyone to go and register! Jack walked in to registration with harry, another friend, who you could sort of call his "best" friend. Harry is older than Jack, but only by a few months, and has always been sort of shy when it comes to sexual stuff, considering how confident he is talking about anything else. They sat down and got registered as always. Harry & Jack always had a laugh, they liked to see the positive side of what others may find pretty boring or depressing. Jack's never done anything remotely sexual with Harry, apart from on a school trip a few years back where Jack, Harry, Ryan and a few other friends stayed up late in the evenings of this week long trip. They had best cock competitions and talked about girls, whilst masturbating pretty much non-stop. They were all much younger, so all had dry orgasms, much different to what would happen if they were on a trip like this again today! Anyway, after registration was over, Harry, Jack and another Jack (nicknamed Robin - no idea why!) made their way to lesson one, English. They were all set 1, and Ryan was set 2, meaning another missed opportunity for Jack to see him! As they turned up, Jack noticed a lot of people were off! 5 or 6 of his other mates weren't there, and they were when he walked to school that morning. Where were they? Anyway, as normal the lesson continued, same old Romeo & Juliet stuff, they started to question just where everyone was! Even the teacher was wondering and made an enquiry to some other staff. This was very odd, they're all very sensible and would never miss a lesson unless it was really important. What could be really important? Next was German, Jack's big chance to ask Ryan about the sleepover. Of course, a sleepover at that point was just watch movies, eat and talk about girls - but Jack knew what he wanted. As they arrived at the lesson (Harry wasn't in this one), he immediately looked for Ryan. He wasn't there - neither were the other friends that were missing in English. "Probably gone to get told off for being late" Jack said to himself, thinking positive. The lesson went by and Ryan didn't turn up. The table they sat on was all boys, all friends. None of them were there, so just Jack and Robin (the other Jack) sat there. At 10 past 11 they were dismissed, and Jack ran to find out what was going on. He went straight to what they called the "quad" as it was a square shape. It was free of teachers, and pretty much empty apart from a few smaller kids gathering and eating from their lunchboxes. There was a kind of hidden area to the back of one of the buildings - where they'd often hand out. Jack went to look for Ryan. He was there. However, rather than sitting there and chatting, he was lying there, alone, eyes closed. WHAT THE HELL HAD HAPPENED? Jack ran over, shouting at him to wake up! WHAT THE HELL HAD HAPPENED? Of course this would be a perfect opportunity to suck his cock - but maybe it wasn't the time. After several failed attempts at waking him, Jack ran to find a teacher. Whoever did this, whoever did this! ___________________________________ Sorry about the lack of sexual content :P This is kind of the initial build up. Let me know what you think as a comment or PM! Jack x |
01-30-2011, 06:31 AM | #3 |
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I like it you should keep going.
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01-30-2011, 06:46 AM | #4 |
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Thanks Nick, if I get a few more comments I'll get writing part 2
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01-30-2011, 06:48 AM | #5 |
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come on people post!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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01-30-2011, 07:21 AM | #6 |
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I think a lot read without commenting everything :P
but if it motivates you to keep writing... I liked it And I see no prob with a non-sexual build up As long as you are going to write a longer story than only some less pages, it's, in my opinion, anyways better, to have a 'story' and not only sexual content keep writing! |
01-30-2011, 08:34 AM | #7 |
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Haha, could be true - hopefully they're reading but not commenting!
Alright then, thanks for the feedback Saphir! |
01-30-2011, 09:00 AM | #8 |
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im reading and also now commenting
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01-30-2011, 09:01 AM | #9 |
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Oh good, any opinions?
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01-30-2011, 09:01 AM | #10 |
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please please do continue
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01-30-2011, 09:03 AM | #11 |
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Good start. look forward to seeing more!
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01-30-2011, 09:03 AM | #12 |
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Thanks alot guys, definetly will
I'll either get the next part up tonight or by Tuesday! |
01-30-2011, 09:26 AM | #13 |
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Really good. I'm desperate for me. I can't wait to find out what the boy get up to.
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01-30-2011, 09:37 AM | #14 |
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Haha, can I just say it's not technically for sexual reasons Ryan was lying there, but that does become a part of it!
May try a fiction story when I've finished this one, can make it a bit more creative!x |
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I like the start to this story! There's no need to have sexual content in the very first chapter, and this makes it a STORY and not just porn. Your story is very well written, and I look forward to reading more!!!
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