Summer Fun

Dare99 · 11-26-2011, 01:30 AM

This is my first story so any feedback is great. It’s based mainly on true events, but some parts will be fiction. Also, this won’t be all truth or dare, but that will be the back bone of the story. Enjoy!!

The moonlight cast a surreal glow on the trees, lighting them in a white glare. I heard a rustle of movement and froze. Not five feet away Amanda sprinted into the clearing and glanced back, checking for any pursuers. Oh this will be fun, I thought to my self as she crossed into our boundary.

She was beautiful, I realized as I watched her run. Long, flowing blonde hair, and a curvy body made her very attractive with the upper class men. Her large breasts, C’s, maybe D’s, bounced in her t-shirt as she ran like only a cross country runner could. Her bubbly ass stuck out like a beach ball.

She stops and turns in a circle, looking for the flag. This is my chance. Even with my tall frame and broad shoulders, I easily slide around her and sneak up behind her until I could touch her jiggly butt if I wanted to. I DID want to, but refrained and snaked my arm to the top of her head and started patting it.

“SHIT!” She yells, scaring almost me as much as she was. She turns around and tries to hit me but I laugh and dodge to the side. Amanda gets even more mad as she sees Scott jump over the creek carrying the branch in his outstretched hand. Hanging from the top is a dirty pair of panties, signaling the girl’s flag.

One by one, the rest of our group appeared, all breathing hard. There were seven of us in total. Me, Amanda, and Scott, as well as Patrick, Katie, Michelle, and Sally. Scott and Patrick looked so much alike they could have been brothers. Both were short, with brown hair, and a deeply tanned complexion. Katie, on the other hand was the opposite. She was super white, but had raven black hair. Her boobs, while not as big as Amanda’s, were perky enough to show in the slight chill that came with the outdoors at night. Michelle, well, she would be the one out of all of us to win a job as a model. Her body was equal with Amanda’s, but her face was hot enough to burn cookies. She had icy blue eyes and the prettiest smile I had ever seen. And then Sally. She was the odd one out. This was her first year in the neighborhood so no one really knew her yet. She was pretty enough, but lacked the curves that made her outstanding.

Let me explain. In our neighborhood, we have a tradition of going out every night during the summer vacation and playing games. Tonight we started off with Capture The Flag.

“What are we going to do next?” Scott whined, being his usual annoying self. He was the youngest of all of us, and would only be a freshmen in the coming school year.

“How about we go to my house and decide over Coke?” Amanda asked, and we all agreed. We took the small paths that cut through the woods and slipped into Amanda’s air conditioned basement. I walked over to the mini fridge and pulled out a 12- pack of the world’s best soda. Everyone else was arranged in a loose circle, laying on the cool floor.

“I know, let’s play Truth or Dare!” Michelle said, a hungry glint in her eye...

To be continued. Plz Rate, Comment, or critique on whatever.

Dare99 · 11-26-2011, 03:09 AM

Anyone like it?? I should have the next part posted today but I don't think I'll continue of it's unpopular...

daremaster 1 · 11-26-2011, 08:03 AM

For your first story this is really good. Im interested to see what you got, keep it up!

epic kobra · 11-26-2011, 09:43 AM

I like the intro so far and I am interested to see what you do with the story. Keep up the good work.
Epic

tarheel boy · 11-26-2011, 11:59 PM

I like it too. Cant wait for an update.

Dare99 · 11-28-2011, 03:06 PM

Sorry everyone, I've been away but will get the next update up tonight or tomorrow.

11-26-2011, 01:30 AM	#1
Dare99 Member Join Date: Jul 2010 Posts: 81	Summer Fun This is my first story so any feedback is great. It’s based mainly on true events, but some parts will be fiction. Also, this won’t be all truth or dare, but that will be the back bone of the story. Enjoy!! The moonlight cast a surreal glow on the trees, lighting them in a white glare. I heard a rustle of movement and froze. Not five feet away Amanda sprinted into the clearing and glanced back, checking for any pursuers. Oh this will be fun, I thought to my self as she crossed into our boundary. She was beautiful, I realized as I watched her run. Long, flowing blonde hair, and a curvy body made her very attractive with the upper class men. Her large breasts, C’s, maybe D’s, bounced in her t-shirt as she ran like only a cross country runner could. Her bubbly ass stuck out like a beach ball. She stops and turns in a circle, looking for the flag. This is my chance. Even with my tall frame and broad shoulders, I easily slide around her and sneak up behind her until I could touch her jiggly butt if I wanted to. I DID want to, but refrained and snaked my arm to the top of her head and started patting it. “SHIT!” She yells, scaring almost me as much as she was. She turns around and tries to hit me but I laugh and dodge to the side. Amanda gets even more mad as she sees Scott jump over the creek carrying the branch in his outstretched hand. Hanging from the top is a dirty pair of panties, signaling the girl’s flag. One by one, the rest of our group appeared, all breathing hard. There were seven of us in total. Me, Amanda, and Scott, as well as Patrick, Katie, Michelle, and Sally. Scott and Patrick looked so much alike they could have been brothers. Both were short, with brown hair, and a deeply tanned complexion. Katie, on the other hand was the opposite. She was super white, but had raven black hair. Her boobs, while not as big as Amanda’s, were perky enough to show in the slight chill that came with the outdoors at night. Michelle, well, she would be the one out of all of us to win a job as a model. Her body was equal with Amanda’s, but her face was hot enough to burn cookies. She had icy blue eyes and the prettiest smile I had ever seen. And then Sally. She was the odd one out. This was her first year in the neighborhood so no one really knew her yet. She was pretty enough, but lacked the curves that made her outstanding. Let me explain. In our neighborhood, we have a tradition of going out every night during the summer vacation and playing games. Tonight we started off with Capture The Flag. “What are we going to do next?” Scott whined, being his usual annoying self. He was the youngest of all of us, and would only be a freshmen in the coming school year. “How about we go to my house and decide over Coke?” Amanda asked, and we all agreed. We took the small paths that cut through the woods and slipped into Amanda’s air conditioned basement. I walked over to the mini fridge and pulled out a 12- pack of the world’s best soda. Everyone else was arranged in a loose circle, laying on the cool floor. “I know, let’s play Truth or Dare!” Michelle said, a hungry glint in her eye... To be continued. Plz Rate, Comment, or critique on whatever. Last edited by Dare99; 11-26-2011 at 12:11 PM.

11-26-2011, 09:43 AM	#4
epic kobra Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 20	I like the intro so far and I am interested to see what you do with the story. Keep up the good work. Epic __________________ Likes: Pain,messy,pee, masturbation, Limits: family, illegal, crossdressing I do have a cam. 20/m/us

11-26-2011, 11:59 PM	#5
tarheel boy Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2011 Posts: 179	I like it too. Cant wait for an update. __________________ 18/m likes:nudity, semi-public, humiliation, mild bondage and crossdressing limits: anal, family, friends, pictures, permanent and more than mild pain you wont see my mienshao until it's too late... DRAIN PUNCH!!!! "...How about her?" "Yeah I'd do her." "What would you do?" "I'd take her out to a nice dinner, I'd walk her home afterwords, and when we get there, I'd shake the fuck out of her father's hand." "...lolwut?"

11-26-2011, 03:09 AM	#2
Dare99 Member Join Date: Jul 2010 Posts: 81	Anyone like it?? I should have the next part posted today but I don't think I'll continue of it's unpopular...

11-26-2011, 08:03 AM	#3
daremaster 1 getDare God Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: <3 Posts: 3,032	For your first story this is really good. Im interested to see what you got, keep it up!

11-28-2011, 03:06 PM	#6
Dare99 Member Join Date: Jul 2010 Posts: 81	Sorry everyone, I've been away but will get the next update up tonight or tomorrow.