The Geek's Machine [FICTION]

xxxMichellexxx · 11-21-2007, 02:37 PM

This is my second story on getDare. Most of you seemed to enjoy my first one so I hope you enjoy this one as well.

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I’m a normal girl of 16. I’ve been blessed with perfect looks although I’m not really that smart. I ‘m among the leaders in the popular crowd at school and living life to the fullest everyday. With my looks I’ve had several boyfriends, had sex several times, and had countless people crushing on me. None of the people who was crushing on me was wierder then Colin.
Colin was, to put it simply, a nerd. He had his group of friends, mostly all like him. He had glasses which were broken in the centre, his black hair was neatly folded over and he kept his shirt tucked in. His grades were perfect, all 90s. He was by far the smartest person in the school.
Colin had been crushing on me since grade school (he was really bad at hiding it). He’ll always allow me to go infront of him, looking at my breasts as I walk by, and looking at my ass while walking behind me. He’s stalked me before, forcing me to tell him to cut it out.

On one fateful day I was about to leave school when I ran into Colin. He said he wanted to talk to me privately. We went into the nearby computer lab, through my objections. He closed the door behind me. “I have some dirt on you” he said as he paced back and forth. “We have some dirt on you”

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It's a little short but I wanted to end this part here to build up some suspense... (Plus now I'm done the character introductions, thank god lol)

brownie · 11-21-2007, 02:57 PM

its good so far, not great, but knowing u kind of, it will be great at the end.

Davros · 11-21-2007, 03:49 PM

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Originally Posted by brownie

its good so far, not great, but knowing u kind of, it will be great at the end.

Not great? Get some glasses! Cool opening

molten man · 11-21-2007, 09:14 PM

Your stories are the best on this site!!! Keep em coming!!

Air force dude · 11-23-2007, 06:48 AM

Great story Please finish

molten man · 11-25-2007, 11:39 PM

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Originally Posted by Air force dude

Great story Please finish

since you are new on this site, I will tell u it takes time to finish stories, often months to do so!! So keep patience!!

Dollface · 12-05-2007, 04:57 AM

fantastic story. please keep writing!

Ludvig_with_cam · 12-05-2007, 06:43 AM

WOW, really good story. Write the next part soon, please

xxxMichellexxx · 12-05-2007, 03:04 PM

Ok I'm gonna have to stop writing until Christmas break... I have so much school work to do. I'm really Sorry guys.

anayguy · 12-05-2007, 05:34 PM

do keep it going when you can

chain · 12-05-2007, 06:19 PM

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Originally Posted by USASlaveGurl

Ok I'm gonna have to stop writing until Christmas break... I have so much school work to do. I'm really Sorry guys.

That sucks, I was looking forward to it. O well, keep up the grades.

molten man · 12-05-2007, 10:21 PM

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Originally Posted by chaingangistheclick

That sucks, I was looking forward to it. O well, keep up the grades.

Stole my words there!! lol

11-21-2007, 02:37 PM	#1
xxxMichellexxx Distinguished Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 545	The Geek's Machine [FICTION] This is my second story on getDare. Most of you seemed to enjoy my first one so I hope you enjoy this one as well. ----------------- I’m a normal girl of 16. I’ve been blessed with perfect looks although I’m not really that smart. I ‘m among the leaders in the popular crowd at school and living life to the fullest everyday. With my looks I’ve had several boyfriends, had sex several times, and had countless people crushing on me. None of the people who was crushing on me was wierder then Colin. Colin was, to put it simply, a nerd. He had his group of friends, mostly all like him. He had glasses which were broken in the centre, his black hair was neatly folded over and he kept his shirt tucked in. His grades were perfect, all 90s. He was by far the smartest person in the school. Colin had been crushing on me since grade school (he was really bad at hiding it). He’ll always allow me to go infront of him, looking at my breasts as I walk by, and looking at my ass while walking behind me. He’s stalked me before, forcing me to tell him to cut it out. On one fateful day I was about to leave school when I ran into Colin. He said he wanted to talk to me privately. We went into the nearby computer lab, through my objections. He closed the door behind me. “I have some dirt on you” he said as he paced back and forth. “We have some dirt on you” -------- It's a little short but I wanted to end this part here to build up some suspense... (Plus now I'm done the character introductions, thank god lol)

11-21-2007, 02:57 PM	#2
brownie Account Banned Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 52 Blog Entries: 1	its good so far, not great, but knowing u kind of, it will be great at the end. __________________ i was a legend and chole banded me (

11-21-2007, 09:14 PM	#4
molten man Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Mumbai, India Posts: 946	Your stories are the best on this site!!! Keep em coming!! __________________ MMan 26/m/straight Skype: molten_man007 Kik: molten_man

11-23-2007, 06:48 AM	#5
Air force dude Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Eastern USA Posts: 26	Great story Please finish

12-05-2007, 04:57 AM	#7
Dollface Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Posts: 11	fantastic story. please keep writing!

12-05-2007, 06:43 AM	#8
Ludvig_with_cam Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Sweden Posts: 57	WOW, really good story. Write the next part soon, please

12-05-2007, 03:04 PM	#9
xxxMichellexxx Distinguished Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 545	Ok I'm gonna have to stop writing until Christmas break... I have so much school work to do. I'm really Sorry guys.

12-05-2007, 05:34 PM	#10
anayguy Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 118	do keep it going when you can